Date: 02 Nov 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for the Next Chapter Love it!<3
Date: 02 Nov 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
Look out for Bella Bad Ass!!! Let's see how much respect Bella gets from the department after this. I can't wait for Mike and the other disrespecting assholes have to swallow their pride and give Bella the respect she deserves! I'll anxiously awaiting the next chapter. That was awesome!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
Really looking forward to the next update :D
Date: 02 Nov 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 02 Nov 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
Better and better!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Will she figure out what is really going on before it's too late
Date: 01 Nov 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yikes! Getting interesting.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella is doing a great job of feeding information to Jasper! I think she's rightthat something fishy is going on here. There's some sort of agenda with this bunch and I'm curious as to what it is! Hope nobady gets hurt!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
So Bella thinks this could be a set up with a leak in the department?
Date: 01 Nov 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Go smart Bella. Great job.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Typical man behavior unfortunately. Glad b told him off a little though
Date: 01 Nov 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella handled it well all things considered.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well E is def hot and cold. But at least he is teaching her now.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well at least someone it trying to look out for her.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella is like Bruce Willis in Die Hard! LOL! Maybe she will get some respect NOW!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Are they just planning to take out as many cops as possible? Good thing Bella is able to tell J what's really going on
Date: 01 Nov 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
love it! Keep them coming! T
Date: 01 Nov 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
Set up to this story has been great
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
something is definitely off about this
Date: 01 Nov 2014 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Smart move, Bella. Now Jasper has all the inside info and a heads up about what's going on inside.
Can't believe it's November already and to makes matters stranger, it's snowing in South Carolina. That never happens this early in the season. If we get snow it's usually in January or February.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
Just perfect. she stops to see her dad, Edward comes in and some gang comes to rob the bank! This is not a great day off for Detective Swan!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Maybe it's just me, but I thought she did about the only thing she could do under the circumstances! Hopefully Edward will agree.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
This looks like he is pretty ambivalent where Bella is concerned, as in he can't decide whether to be professional or personal with her!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Sounds like he's trying to keep her at arms length, afraid of what might have gotten started that night they drank and danced and she kissed him! Also sounds as if Emmett and Jasper aren't going to let him get away with it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow Edward took it too far what is his problem with Bella and now what is going down at the bank
Date: 31 Oct 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have a feeling Bella is going to shut them all up.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
thanks for catching up and giving us these 3 chapters so close together. I bet Bella is going to save their asses here and can't wait to see it!
Date: 31 Oct 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think she handled it perfectly. She thought on her feet and saved both herself and Bree from trouble.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
does Edward crush her back? is that him doing all those nice things for her? don't answer that. i'll read on.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
It looks like Edward is going to be worshipping Bella very soon!
Date: 31 Oct 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
this new format on TWCS is throwing me! not your fault, anyway....poor Bella. She needs to stand up for herself but I get why she keeps quiet. Doesn't want to make waves and all...or give them more to gossip about....I am ashamed that Edward is treating her like this...
Date: 31 Oct 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh the build up an then nothing great job
Date: 31 Oct 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG are they going to take Bella along with the money? I am glad she put him in his place and told him how she feels.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
Date: 31 Oct 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella is so smart. Edward is not liking Jacob touching Bella
Date: 31 Oct 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
So happy he is testing her better he has a crush on her.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is in trouble .. the other officers are ass holes.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Me thinks Bella just went undercover. And I hope she kills it and shows up all those pompous assholes at the station.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Holy crap she is an amazing actress! And she made it believable that she was 15! I wonder how Edward is going to react about the kiss? I think I was as nervous for Bella as she was in this story. I'm so glad there will be an update tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ooooooo. I am loving it.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
Maybe he didn't want her working with him bc she distracts him.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think he has feelings that he doesn't want to admit to so he is trying to get her to quit.
Date: 30 Oct 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
I grew up in Kent so it will be fun to see the place you write about. Looking forward to where you take the story
Date: 29 Oct 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loving this story so far! I see Chapter 3 was posted on FF will you be posting it here too?
Date: 28 Oct 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow E sounds like he's gonna be a real peach to work for.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sadly I know what its like to work in a boys club environment. Work twice as hard to be considered half as good.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think he is just needed some one to help him and he is a by the book guy.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is being an ass I think she needs to put him straight.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
I dont think Edward is very happy right now but he will change his mind or Bella will kick his ass.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ha ... love it so far!
Date: 28 Oct 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah a secretary is right. Edward is pretty much a pompous ass right now!
Date: 27 Oct 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Sounds to me as if you're right about the secretary thing. Wonder why some people seem to think that is a woman's job? So, we have the stage set, with drugs in the schools and cops on the trail of suspects. Looking forward to what they will find!
Date: 27 Oct 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'd be really pissed off at his lack of respect and treatment! I agree, he needs a secretary! I also think if jasper had Bella and Edward have a little sparring match and she knocked him on his ass it might bring him down off his high horse a notch or two! Can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella's not going to find it easy working with Edward
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Was she just demoted?
At first I thought because of her youthful image Edward was going to send her into the school as a transfer student to try and get into the drug system that way. But now her image has been exposed to the students so that's no longer an option. Does Bella know Bill Black or his son Jake since he's from the area after all?
If Jasper outranks Edward why is he treating him like a subordinate?
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bella's already at a disadvantage in her work environment. Her coworkers have a rather high degree of disdain for her and her new partner or supervisor as it may be seems to be quite the jerk. Chin up girl.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow he is a jerk but is he that good at his job to act that way and will Bella be able to work with him
Date: 27 Oct 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
why is he being such an ass to her? treating her like she is less than him is not a good way to start a partnership....j/s!
Date: 27 Oct 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm already excited to read copward! Let the hostility begin!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks good chapter
Date: 27 Oct 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
So far, I like it. Kathryn
Date: 27 Oct 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds good. The rookies are kind of dicks hope she will show them up.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
uh oh i do not think this will go well
i bet bella wants to head out the way she came
seems there is alot for her to prove
look forward to more
Date: 26 Oct 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Can't wait to read more :)
-Kate
Date: 26 Oct 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far so good can't wait for more.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to the new story :)
Date: 26 Oct 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I think Bella is going to put Det. Cullen in his place.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm rubbing my hands together(figuratively speaking) at the start of this one! Can't wait to see the reaction of Detective Cullen, to his new squad member! It's going to be fun, I can tell!
Date: 26 Oct 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to reading this :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes I love the start of this one.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
You guys are so prolific! I love that you have the stories finished before you post. It's a nice thing for us readers to know that a story is already finished before you post so there is no danger of it becoming an abandonded fic. Thanks so much for that! This one starts so quickly after the last one and looks to be so good. Another win!! Yeah!