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Reviewer: LeslieE Signed star [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don,t get the joke!  What the heck are "furry blankets?". Perhaps you should check your grammar and sentence structure.  Or are you talking about tribbles.



Author's Response:

Sorry for the grammatical errors and poorly sentence structure... English is not my mother tongue. In my native language, I wrote a lot of stories, and now some of them I translated into English for me to trained and I also want to make them more accessible to more people. However, translation is not easy.

"Furry blankets," they say in my country, when someone says something very slowly, reluctantly...

The point of the whole story is actually a crossover Stargate and Doctor who. Daniel admires how advanced race of Lords of time had to be when they have such a complicated language, but what he translated is ultimately just a simple message from River to the Doctor: “Hello, Sweetie.” Maybe it does not seem so funny...

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