[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward est terminé!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella ne réalise pas la peine qu'elle permet à tout le monde!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward voulait certainement stop to rester avec Bella.
Je Pense Qu'elle a la une de fait un choix noble Mais aussi stupide.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bon chapitre, je aime cette fiction.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ils ont été admis leurs sentiments.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oui, ce est un triste chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
They became friends ?
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Je aime leur réunion dans le mariage et Emmett de Rose.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ce est le bon début, je aime !
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love this story it is so great. I've been crying here and there finally he has got his ass in gear. Loved the letter from Jasper so perfect.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
good chapter deep feelings I had some tears in this one.
Thank you
Date: 13 Mar 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
It's a pleasure to follow these 2 through this fiction.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I already have tears in my eyes.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow Jasper knew all along he knew his best friend loved his little sister so sweet.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
I would kind of like to know what VCan's reaction to Jasper's letter is. Unless he is waiting till the wedding or she will get one of her own.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
My favorite part is the letter from Jasper that Alice gave Edward. Thanks for all you give us!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2015 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 12
Very, very good! She will be OK.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am so glad they have been found. I hope it was in time. Bella has to survive this! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2015 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love it please post again soon, like now
Date: 12 Mar 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
WOW, that was epic chapter, Bella has some serious balls growing. I hope Rosalie will revise her behaviour toward her sister and speak to Bella again.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank God they have been found Bella is one smart girl she will be OK now?
Date: 12 Mar 2015 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
I can tell Edward loves her and wants her safe. I bet he will get a transfer to be with her.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
It is a good think Emmett had Bella share her news first cause if he had said it first it would haves killed her to be away from Edward.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
O:m:g love it need more keep up it is brill
Date: 12 Mar 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
That is the sweetest thing for him to send her a birthday present. So he was going to retire until she decided to enlist. If only she would had heard his news first they could have been together safe out of the military.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tears so many year why oh why do I read at work !!! They are getting so much closer and giving her his dog tag omg that was so special.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awwww that is so sad he never made it home to see his baby. It is understandable that Edward feels guilty but it is not his fault. Poor Alice.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
They are cute together. Alice is pregnant way to go jasper. Wonder what he will think when she enlists.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank god they got out! I know Bella can mend once she is back at base. They declared their ILYs because they thought they might not make it out of there...now let's see what happens once they get back! Thanks for making the angst short!
Date: 12 Mar 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
That is very cute.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Finally getting a chance to read this I am sure I will love it like all the rest.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
:o( for Bella. :o) they got away.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh my she has an infection of some kind? Coughing up blood sounds like internal damage. Poor Bella, I know you will fix her.
Date: 12 Mar 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
This story is really good! Thank you for sharing it with us!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Very good story so far. Wonderful writing!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
OMG,love your story can not wait for more,and you doing a great job writing this story.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
That would be so scary I'm happy they are together
Date: 11 Mar 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
WOW we have reach a critical situation.
I don't understand Rose, of course, she is hurt, but the way she acts is hurting more, herself, Bella and all around them, as well.
Thank you for the great update.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it... can't wait to read more.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
what a place for his first ILY! this is why they're listed as MIA. big fat dose of angst here, but I trust you guys....
Date: 11 Mar 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh no....I knew it was coming. They will get out of this. They have to! I'm on the edge of my seat now! Great job... thanks!
Date: 11 Mar 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad they are getting closer but I don't want them to get caught and in trouble!
Date: 11 Mar 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am glad they are together and that some of the guys knew Jasper. They will all have her back and give her respect. I wish Edward had talked to Bella and told her his plan but then there would be no story. Great job...thanks!
Date: 11 Mar 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am so worried about her!
Date: 11 Mar 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well I wish she would have talked it over with her family first. I am guessing that Edward was getting out and coming home. Great job...thanks!
Date: 11 Mar 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like Emmett's speech has really got Bella thinking...
Date: 11 Mar 2015 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
So we've caught up....rose must feel awful for ignoring her.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awe love it and look forward to the next chapter. Please post soon,
Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Leaving her the tags was very special. I am glad he could be there for the time he was.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
So sad..... I knew Edward would feel like he let her down. I feel bad for them all especially the baby that will never know his Daddy.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad they are talking still. Bella seems to have gotten really far in her studies. I'm glad she is going after what she wants and Carlisle and Esme are there to help.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh my. Send in the Rangers quickly to do a retrieval.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
I have to keep reminding myself how old/young she is. I guess we know that Rose's fear will come true.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
So sad. I can't wait to catch up and see how this plays out.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm scared....really scared
Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is why Rose should have spoke to her sister. Now she has to deal with thinking she's dead and never got a chance.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
First I would like to say PEOPLE IT IS A STORY I wish some would get that. I am enjoying your fiction not fact story so keep up the great work. My son is in the Marines so I take no ofence becasue I know it is just a story. OK done with that lol. I love the idea of them being able to be close.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for this great chapter.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
I must say, in reply to your opening A/N remarks, that some people need to just shut it and move on rather than stay and criticize.
I like that they are risking getting closer and hope it doesn't come back to bite them in the ass. I hope it won't take another tragedy to get them to say the ILYs to each other, for real. I love to read all your stories, ladies. They are concise, to the point, and well written. What more could a girl want in free entertainment. Thanks!!
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
They are playing with fire with the sleep overs.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Forbidden.... But oh so sweet
Date: 10 Mar 2015 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am sure they are being careful, but if they get caught it wont be pretty.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Yep its awesome in fiction can do anything
Date: 10 Mar 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great story! More please! ;o)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
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Date: 09 Mar 2015 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for this great chapter.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for Edward's POV! It was quite enlightening! Love the term, FNG. LOL! Please keep them both safe in Afghanistan!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
First chapter I didn't cry. Thanks guys and it a wonderful chapter. I'm so happy
he admitted he is in love with her. YAY!
Date: 09 Mar 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
he can watch after but it is hands off. She is not an officer so that would be a BIG no no.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great! Love hearing from Edward
Date: 09 Mar 2015 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
He was done.... smh
Date: 09 Mar 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well Rose is being foolish. Yes she just lost her brother and now her baby sister signs up but what if she never comes back? She really looses her then. We are not promissed tomorrow!
Date: 09 Mar 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
Rose is so afraid of losing Bella but she is just hurting each other. Edward going to ask to be transfered where she is going
Date: 08 Mar 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Heart wrenching.
Date: 08 Mar 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
How could Rose do that knowing her sister is going off to war. She may never see her again wouldn't she feel guilty.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2015 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
Excellent job on this chapter. I didn't cry. Thank you. I'm a little upset with Rose's attitude. I hope Bella gets to tell Edward she's in love with him soon!
Date: 08 Mar 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
My heart is breaking already. I cannot wait to hear E POV because it must have been difficult to love someone so young.
Date: 08 Mar 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh dear! that was difficult to accept! i guess there's no rule about a sister going to combat when her brother is dead....i know she's doing what she thinks she must but it is such a shock. Edward LOVES loves her and she didn't get to say it back....
Date: 08 Mar 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
This really is a special fiction, hard and sweet to read, but a very good one that I follow dearly. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 08 Mar 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
Even with the age difference, they both need to say IN LOVE so no mistakes.
Really good so far
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2015 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
His retirement froqm the Army. Nice plot twist even if we knew it in the prologue. You've got to ztopmaking me cry every chapter. Great job!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
He was moving to be stationed at home wasn't he?
Date: 07 Mar 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward was coming home to her. Maybe getting out to be with her. See she jumped that gun.
Date: 07 Mar 2015 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
wonder if she would have signed up if she knew about e's news