[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
:)
Date: 17 Mar 2015 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
So good.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 17 Mar 2015 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I think that she is going to give Edward a run for his money.
Author's Response:
You maybe right, come back and see.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I am SO LOVING this story of yours including the pics that you put in.
Can't wait to see where this story goes!!
Date: 17 Mar 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
More please and soon
Date: 17 Mar 2015 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Oh, very good and very sexy!
Date: 17 Mar 2015 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I really like this Edward. Why would he make her stay by his side at all times that wouldn't give her anytime for herself. Do you see him changing his mind on this rule in the future.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
LOVE, LOVE LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for more.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
love it! cant wait to read more
Date: 17 Mar 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely love this story!
Date: 17 Mar 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Love it hot hot hot. Nice GIFs and pics
Date: 17 Mar 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
BDSM mixed with love is the best. Thank you.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Love the pics with the chapter. Glad you are ensure the SSC rules are followed. Gotta love that depo shot; certainly loved mine.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
i love this edward
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Good times he does not mess around lol.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I LOVE LOVE this story
I get so excited when I see a new chapter
Thank you
Brenda
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Love it
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
OMG!! I cant freaking wait tell the next update. .......
Date: 17 Mar 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
He didn't waste any ti e and niether did she.
still it's a lot to take in for Bella and she might feel scared or over her head soon. What will she do? Who will she talk to!
Date: 17 Mar 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ahh!! Makes since! Thank you! :)
Author's Response:
No problem. Edward mind is my mind right now. Shit...I need a cold shower...haha
Date: 17 Mar 2015 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Oh my gosh I'm seriously so hooked!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks..I am so happy you like it...
Date: 17 Mar 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Note to self: Don't read at work. Check!
PS- I do believe I will never think of you the same after reading what you're capable of writing. Love it!
Author's Response:
I am only getting start my friend.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I freakin love this story!
Author's Response:
I freekin love writing it. I hope you will continue to read it.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
He is so hot like this, I really love his stoy and cannot wait for more, my two favorie types all wrapped into one
Author's Response:
I know...I was excited to put these two types together. Like you they are my favorite also.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I can't review right now. Have to go take a cold shower.
Author's Response:
Date: 16 Mar 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Awesome! Even more so with pics
Author's Response:
Thanks. I am happy you like it...
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Absolutely loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I am so happy you love it.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Wow he doesn't waste any time. But then life is short, why wait. Still worried about James, guessing he will be the catalyst for any angst in the future. Excellent writing, and the visuals are phenomenal.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your support and taking time to review. You are right life is to short and we should live life to it's fullest everyday.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
This was a great chapter. But why will she stay with Esme when he is not with her?
I think they both had a very happy ending!! ;)
Loving this an looking forward to more:D
Author's Response:
Edward is all about Family...and the one person he trust with now his most important person in his life will be his mother and her 9mm. Also, Esme is the current Don's wife and if Bella may be the next one, she will need to learn how to be both a submissive and a Don's wife.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Love, love, love this storyline!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind review. I love this storyline also.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
omg i what more this is so good
Author's Response:
Thanks. I am working on the next chapter and it will be out as soon as possible.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is the next chapter coming soon?
Love, love this story..
Brenda
Date: 16 Mar 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh Edward is dangerous when someone messes with his Bella. I love it.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
HOt Damn that was good. I love the pictures by the way. Great chapter.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
So far this is great. I cant wait to see where this is going.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really like your story and can't wait to read more. Thanks for your hard work.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the story!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow update soon please
Date: 14 Mar 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic chapter!!!! Excited to see what happens next :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Okay, let me see if I have this straight.......there is to be a masquerade ball coming up, and you just kicked someone out of the club (scumbag James). What's too say he doesn't somehow get into the club during the ball and finish what he started. *runs to get glock, removes safety, and stands guard over Bella*
Don't worry, I have it under control. :D
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it..can't wait to read more of it..
Date: 14 Mar 2015 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG,Love your story can't wait for more.great writing .
Date: 14 Mar 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love it! Their relationship is instinctual! Each one knows his missing half when he finds him. Smart man, Carlisle! He saw it from the get go and didn't judge. I look forward to seeing their relationship build! Thank you for a lusciously crafted work! I can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
am absolutely in love with Edward all over again, and more deeply. pls keep writin this one, love the storyline. Pls keep Edward strong. regards Pamela
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Found the story and i love it thank you for sharing it cant wait for the next post :)
Date: 14 Mar 2015 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wished Edward had just shot James. I'm sensing trouble there in the future. Glad Edward didn't fight his connection to Bella for very long. It will be interesting to see how Bella reacts to the reality of being a sub versus reading about it.. Great chapter!
Date: 14 Mar 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love the bond that these two have so quickly.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
The stronger and more powerful Edward is the most I love the story, thanks for writing one
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
I LOVED IT ALL! I LOVE THIS SIDE OF EDWARD. I can't wait to see what he will do next. Please update soon
Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am excited to read the next chapter! How long will you be able to update everyday?
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
It didn't take Edward long to claim his Bella, did it? I loved this chapter. Your Edward is so hot... just the right amount of bad boy and sweetness! I can't wait for more. You are rocking this story!
Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Intrested .Do keep up the good work.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wat to read, love the pictures
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and I also love the pictures.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it, really can't waitto read more!! I love the visuals as well!! Hope u update soon :-)
Date: 13 Mar 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
What was cristal clear to Jasper and Carlisle took Edward a bit yo figure out. Two more minutes and it might have been too late.
I guess Esme might be dropping by sooner rather than later...
Date: 13 Mar 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh this is going to be a great story! I love BDSM stories and hope that you update soon.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
This story is going to be great .... its been a while since there has be a good story about bdsm...lol So update soon i can wait.... lol
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it... but I'm worried we haven't seen the last of James..
Date: 13 Mar 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
really loving this fict
great start looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love this story fantastic chapter
Date: 13 Mar 2015 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
James is lucky to still be alive. Why was Edward fighting it? Bella wants him as much as he wants her
Date: 13 Mar 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my gosh I'm in love with this story seriously!! my two favorite plots together as one!!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2015 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow!!!!!!! That chapter was intense. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my gosh if I wasn't hooked before you've gone an made it worse can't wait
Date: 13 Mar 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
Whew, glad he could take out the trash. Wondering if we get to meet Esme anytime soon?
Date: 13 Mar 2015 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
ohh, loved this schapter. And that she is self taught, love that twist.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I love being able to put a different spin on things...
Date: 13 Mar 2015 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
i hope u update fast, lol waiting
Date: 13 Mar 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMGosh!!!!!!! This was awesome. I was stunned when Edward pulled his gun on Jasper. I did not expect that reaction. I can not wait for more. I want you to update tomorrow. Tonight would be good. Hack tjis afternoon would be perfect. Lol. Can you tell I really want you to update quickly. Can't wait to find out what James said to Bella.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Kelly pimped out your story in the TWCS TWi Group. Happy she did, I really love your stpry so far. Can't wait to see where you go from here.
Author's Response:
Yes she did. I am so grateful for all her help and being so kind to me. This is my second attempt at a story and I am loving every word of it.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think James is going to be an issue. Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace.T.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Lets get this party started. Daddy has nothing to worry about now. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.
Author's Response:
The party is getting ready to happen...
Date: 13 Mar 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love Love Love!!!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
u have me hooked
Author's Response:
Thanks, please continue to follow my story
Date: 13 Mar 2015 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow!
I am surprised that Felix didnt beat the crap out of James! He deserved it!
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 13 Mar 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love it Love having Edward as the hero
Date: 13 Mar 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Good God but this is perfect!
Date: 13 Mar 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
LOVED it. James is a nasty sleeze. LOL for our smitten boy claiming her
Date: 13 Mar 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Everyone knew right away that she was perfect for Edward. A picture is worth a thousand words and these pictures are perfect for your story. Really enjoying the story too.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for more
Date: 13 Mar 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
I am loving the story and cannot wait for an update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and I will update as soon as I can.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
i like it so far
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
Date: 13 Mar 2015 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Love it so far! Especially like the embedded pictures!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I really enjoy being able to put pictures with my story, I believe it adds so much more to it.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Love the story please update soom
Date: 12 Mar 2015 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Please please please update again very very soon. Really enjoying your story ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading... I will updating again soon.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
PLEASE!!!! Update ASAP! You still need help with grammar but I am HOOKED. I hope you don't keep us waiting too long before Edward makes Bella his. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, I am getting help with my grammar, but I know I have problems...
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Love love it,can not wait for more
Author's Response:
I am glad you love it...
Date: 12 Mar 2015 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Love how things are going. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Edward is not going to be sitting on his ass in this one...
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
I LOVED IT ALL! I can't wait to see him get jealous of other doms fighting for her attention. Please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review...Edward will get a little hot around the collar..
Date: 11 Mar 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it so far! I wish the chapters were alot longer but that's just me. (lol) The grammar needs a little help but I look forward to reading.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
I love it! You're introducing us to a fascinating, complex world in
BD/sm Mafia. I'm looking forward to the ride! Also, you've given us those tasty photos and gifs. In some works they can be distracting, but you have them pitch perfect no they only add to the fun and allure. Thank you for all your hard work! It shows, and I look forward to much more!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I love the idea when the plot bunny came around haha. I think the pics add so much to story.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
This story has me craving more and more. Bring on the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for review and an update will be soon
Date: 11 Mar 2015 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Oh My Oh MY love it she is perfect for him cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Got to love it when you find the right one.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great It makes sence for a Don to be a Dom
Date: 11 Mar 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Really good
Author's Response:
Thanks. I hope you continue to read my little story.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Great beginning! I'm anxious for chapter 3! Can't wait!
Author's Response:
Thanks...I love how it is coming together...
Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Can't wait for the next chapter I'm salivating over their meeting it was great!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I think it turned out just right, but wait to next chapter.....