[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Wow! You moved things right along with this chapter. I'm so glad we didn't have to wait too long for Edward and Bella to meet. I'm loving all the pictures you add. It makes a wonderful story even better. Thanks for a great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for great view. I will continue to search for the pics that will make this story hot...
Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
love,love,love
Author's Response:
thanks, thanks, thanks.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
yes yes yes i am so excited i can not wait till they are together maybe he can do the shibari demo with bella
Author's Response:
Well come back and see what might happen
Date: 11 Mar 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
love it love it
Author's Response:
Thanks, I love writing it.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Omg.....love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I hope you continue to follow and read my story.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Was So excited to see your post the whole chapter was great I hate now I have to wait to read more you have me hooked would love to read more from you age play along with BDSM an mafia I think the three together would be a great read
Author's Response:
I will keep that in mind...right now I am writing two stories and I better not start another until one of the others is done.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Please hurry with the next chapter.....getting hot!
Brenda
Author's Response:
Well winter is almost over with....
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Loved it!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks...please continue to follow and read my story.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Ummmm I need chapter 3 like now please :)
Author's Response:
I am working on it....soon I promise
Date: 11 Mar 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
LOVE this chapter. Can't wait to hear Edward's conversation with Jasper. Loved Edward's reaction.
Author's Response:
I don't think you will be disappointed....
Date: 11 Mar 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this
Date: 10 Mar 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
talk about lightning bolts. Edward finally meeting his match. :D
Author's Response:
Yep......he has.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
You are doing a FABULOUS job on this story. The visuals only enhance your writing, and believe me, you have nailed it.
Well done.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope to find a balance between the visuals and the writing.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Geez Carlisle, you couldn't ease him into the idea. Poor Edward, guess it is time to meet the roommate. :D Excellent pictures accompanying the story. Very well written. Looking forwrd to the updates.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
EEeeeee, I can not wait for the next update, this is so exciting, the chemistry these two have is going to be out of the world. And I have a feeling that he is going to be over protective of her even before a contract is signed!!!
Author's Response:
Maybe..you will have to come back and see.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Love it! Love it! Love it!! :D
How offend are you going to post chapters?? EVERYDAY!!! Thats wonderful!! (LOL)
Looking forward to more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I am currently writing two stories so my updates will hopefully weekly (maybe sooner) but I promise I will be back soon.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Yea college grads don't have real issues these days finding jobs. Glad she is seeing Alice been treated well. That will help with getting into the life as well. Wish I knew about dom/Sub when I was that age.
Sucks growing up that way. Glad she has Alice in her life though.
Oh wow for the rope thing. Just can't imagine trying to work in it though. No idea how women walk in those heels.
oooh Edward is smitten already. Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
My daughter is stilling looking for a job in her field and its been three years. I hope you will continue to read my story and I too can't walk in those shoes.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Poor Esme. Glad she survived though. Ah so We meet all of our kids. E and J are yummy doms.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Love it
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review..
Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Really enjoying this story so far! Looking forward to see where it goes from here!
Author's Response:
Thanks...I hope I can keep it going.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
More please
Author's Response:
Okay...working hard on Chapter 3...soon I promise
Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
I like that you put the pictures at the appropriate point in the story instead of at the end. They really add to it.
Author's Response:
I would never do that, the picture is what helps tell the story. Thanks for the reviews.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yeah! A new story combining 2 of my favs - Don and Dom Edward. Also don't mind Dom Jasper! Please update soon!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it update soon.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2015 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
:) looking forward to reading this
Date: 09 Mar 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Brenda
Date: 09 Mar 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you can update again soon!
Date: 09 Mar 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to reading more :)
Date: 09 Mar 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like what you have so far look forward to reading more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I hope I can continue making it interesting.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your story sounds very interesting. I love a good Dom/sub story. Can't wait to read more of this one. If there are any others that you could recommend to me I would greatly appreciate it. Can't wait for you to update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I will get a list together and recommend from stories.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
😍love this idea
Author's Response:
Thanks....The plot bunny attacked me.
Date: 08 Mar 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow!!! Definitely cant wait to read more.....
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 08 Mar 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.
Date: 08 Mar 2015 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it. Interesting and different from other stories that have been written so far about these topics.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I hope it is different but interesting.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! Please keep it coming. ...
Author's Response:
Thanks...I am working hard on the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow great start
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope I can continue keeping your interest.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Mafia/BDSM... these are my two favorite genres! You have made me a very happy girl. I can't wait to read more. I love the story, and the pictures are such a wonderful addition. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I also love Mafia/BDSM and when you can both together is like having Robert and Jackson take you out at the same time. haha
Date: 08 Mar 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Followed you here from the No Rules group on face book.
Author's Response:
Thanks for follwing me. I hope you like the story.
Date: 08 Mar 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my story. I hope I can continue to make you want more
Date: 08 Mar 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting, I like. I look forward to the next chapter, my only hope is that Edward isn't a violent type of Dominant
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Edward will be a strict but fair Dom. His submissive will love everything he does don't worry.
Date: 08 Mar 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it, good start, cant wait to see were you tak this!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I hope you will continue to love it as I post more chapters.