Date: 09 May 2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow they are so hot.
Date: 09 May 2015 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 09 May 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
Glad michael realizes what a problem A and J are going to be in the future. Love how he treats his wife. Classy guy.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
i can't wait to see and hear what aro and james has to say great ch update soon please
Date: 09 May 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
This is a good chapter... Micheal telling his wife that he may have to kill Aro and James..
They have targets on their heads. Wondering who is gonna pull the trigger??
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 09 May 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved the pictures. They were perfect. Loved reading both Don's POV. As always, can't wait for your next update.
Date: 09 May 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
wonderful as always! could we possibly get another playroom scene with bella and edward!!!!!! please?!?!?!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing again Giggles. I received a review today that said: I know that all the set up and prep is necessary but I hope there is some action soon. There has been like 3 or 4 chapters speculating what James and Aro will do or say when they find out. But I want to actually know what will happen. More delay will become redundant and stagnate the story flow. I hope as another reader who is asking for more playroom scenes that this is not the case. I hope you are enjoying the buidling of the characters and the interaction between each other. As always I am blessed to have such loyal readers.
Date: 08 May 2015 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
This is one hot couple. Bella needs to be so careful until James and Around are dealt with appropriately.
Date: 08 May 2015 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you will continue to read my story.
Date: 08 May 2015 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
: ) Mmmmmm! Happy fridays! Happy fridays!
Author's Response:
That is right and maybe even a Happy Saturday, if you are bad.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2015 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 08 May 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
Cute
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 08 May 2015 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hot chapter!
Author's Response:
Date: 08 May 2015 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
loved it, and i also love the visional stuff! Hot! cant wait to read more.
Date: 08 May 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hot damn...loved it all
Date: 08 May 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
Yummy middle part. Can't wait till Bella takes out that wanker.
Date: 08 May 2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
Mercy... I am going to have to start turning a fan on when I read this story ;)
I was so happy to see you had posted. I really love this story.
I think James and Aro are going to give them a run for their money and their lives!!
Looking forward to more!! Soon PLease :)
Date: 08 May 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loving this story. Can't wait to see what Michael and Aro think about Bella. Remind me who is Jimmy. What does he have to do with the storyline?
Author's Response:
In the chapter with Michael, he told Edward that his grandson used alias and one of them was Jimmy Hunter. In the chapter where they are at the docks and Edward gets information for the guy, he told him he only knew the guy who told him to do it as Jimmy. Thanks for reading and my hopes is that I kept you wanting to come back to my story.
Date: 08 May 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
Fantastic!! :)=)
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love this chapter
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
this is so good
Date: 07 May 2015 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 07 May 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
aaww...so sweet. murderous, but sweet. ;)
Date: 07 May 2015 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
EKKKKKKK cant wait to read more :)
Date: 07 May 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Perfect as usual!🙌
Author's Response:
Thank you. New chapter soon.
Date: 07 May 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Keep going girl I'm hooked in this story love it, can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you like the way I am building the story. The next chapter will be soon.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2015 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
Need more
Author's Response:
Soon I promise....
Date: 07 May 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
je adore 'adore
Author's Response:
Merci beaucoup mon ami.
Date: 04 May 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
Maybe when they are in charge they can stop the human trafficking.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
"I'm wet".
Author's Response:
I am so happy that you are ready my other story.. yeah.....It is a very different than the other, but I believe you will enjoy it....Thanks for the review.
Date: 02 May 2015 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love your characters. Love your Domward. Absolutely love your pictures. Thank you XOXO,Cheri
Date: 01 May 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wonderful chapter. Eww for the half brother thing. Yummy Playtime
Date: 01 May 2015 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
I have never wanted to be Bella more than I do now after reading this story. HaHa. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 01 May 2015 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Loving this story and this Edward! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 01 May 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love your pictures. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 01 May 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Loving that I found this amazing story. XOXO,Cheri
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMG! Love It ,can not wait for more.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
WOW, that was hot. So, James is a dead man walking. Will he know that Bella - the girl he hit on - is his half-sister ? The next chapter will be interesting. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow what a great start
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Golly this just gets better and better
Date: 28 Apr 2015 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Simply an awesome chap. Loved the pics.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2015 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
Aro and James need to be dead like yesterday.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
OK...NOW I need a shower!!! THANKS!!!!! (lol) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
I liked the chapter but I didn't like the scene with the paddle so much, I felt that Edward was too rough with her. I understand that this was part of his session with her but he could have used a different method.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved this chapter. Glad Michael was understanding about Edward and Bella. Also about Edward wanting to kill James. I am worried about James's reaction. Also Aro's. Aro's reaction may not be as bad as James if he really did love Renee. He might be happy to know that Bella is a product of their love.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
the yelling bothered me he sounds very angry and anger doesnot belong in the playroom they just started this relationship and he failed her already by not providing proper aftercare shame Edward
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, just Wow. The pictures, absolutely stunning. You did an outstanding job Sweetie.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
And Edward thought he was this awesome Dom, yelling at her, it seemed like a harse punishment if the warm ups hurt that bad then had to take ten licks just for speaking and her first time as a sub.. And no aftercare for the spanking or the ropes. A shower? When a bath would have helped her bum more, and some salve. Poor excuse he is.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
your upper AN remind me of 1960s Batman
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
omg i in love with the pics keepum comming can't wait to see what's next
Date: 27 Apr 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
More please!!!!!!!! Great job!!!!!
Date: 27 Apr 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for the update! I have been missing this! :) (I'm greedy, I want it everyday!! LOL)
So Edward is going to kill James. Somehow I'd dont think its going to be so easy.
I think Bella first session went well, considering that she had never been a sub before.
Loving it! As always! Looking foward to more :D
Date: 27 Apr 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
I so Loved this chapter too...
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMG.... Plez Keep GOING..
Date: 27 Apr 2015 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
James deserves it...excellent update!
Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Lusciously sexy and oh so-o erotic! As Bella said, the business end is scary but when these two connect?.... Lord have mercy! They are sexy! I have only one interesting concern. Michael is anxious to introduce Bella to his wife....the mother and grandmother of the men she and Edward will be " putting out of jobs", I'm anxious to find out if Michael, like Carlisle, picked the right woman! Thank you for a marvelous chapter! It was divine!
Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
it was wonderful
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think it was a great chapter, but when Edward screamed at her to not fucking do that, I think that was a little out of character for a Dom in his first session with a sub. His responsibility is to teach her, not scream at her. He should maintain control of his temper, or he could easily hurt her. Him screaming at her doesn't exactly denote control of his temper.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
WOW!!! I love this!! I had just got finished saying I can't wait for more and then, BAM! There was an update! lol I am really excited for more of this story!!! :)=)
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
holy sh!t needs a very cold bath now :) lol
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more 😉
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
You must have so much fun finding the perfect picture for the story. I'm off to find the facebook group now.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG!! I am all caught up and ready for more!!! :)=)
Date: 27 Apr 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved this as always!😘
Date: 27 Apr 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can't wait for more 😉
Date: 26 Apr 2015 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
OMG!! LOVE!! :)
Date: 26 Apr 2015 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
And I'm ready to read more! :)
Date: 26 Apr 2015 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ummmm.... Wow is all I can say. I cannot wait till Donna Cullen gets to pull out a gun and gets Don Cullen all flustered!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
Outstanding! I love this story line and you are doing a wonderful job with it. Keep writing and I will keep reading. I am sure that you are making others want more too. You go for it!!!!! Love it!
Date: 25 Apr 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ok, I just started to read this story today and I just wanted to let you know that I love it! I love mob and domward and you combining both of them, it's a win, win for me. I've been looking for a new story that can captivate me from the beginning and you have done that. I've been reading the same fan fictions over and over because the new stories that I've found lately are either poorly written or don't make any sense. So I'm glad I happened to find your story and I really can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am so happy that you love my story line. When I thought of it I also thought that he hadn't been done before and I wanted to try to merge the two together. Thank you and I hope you continue to read my story.
Date: 24 Apr 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
I LOVE THIS STORY, CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
C'est beau! Un vrai conte de fées ... Je espère que cela va durer.
Merci pour ce chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
Si Aro était l'amour de Renée, elle aurait aimé l'enfant qu'il lui avait donné.
Merci.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2015 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
For Bella, it is the most important Edward.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2015 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bon chapitre ! Merci.
Date: 23 Apr 2015 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
These last chapters have been marvelous! The inner machinations of both families are fascinating and it's interesting to see a competitor written as a man of respect and honorable; willing to accept what needs to be for the good of his family. Aro and James' reaction should be fascinating! I love the addition of Emmett here and his persona. Professional - yet willing to lift ESME off the ground in a full out hug! Wonderful! I look forward to reading more! Thank you so much for the treat!
Date: 23 Apr 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
I don't think that Aro or James will accept Bella and Edwards reign.
Date: 22 Apr 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can't wait for the playroom!