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Reviewer: sarah38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2017 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 45

I have to say I read most of this story along time ago and I enjoyed it then but I had never read the whole story till now I think because it was not finished I think I read up till just after the birth of her first baby   I have now read the whole story from beginning to end and after watching game of thrones I understand the genre you were portraying and I can understand the story more. I loved it 

 

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Date: 02 May 2017 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 45

really really enjoyed reading this story. awesome job

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Date: 01 Jan 2017 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 45

Time was the key to their bonding.

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Date: 28 Dec 2016 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 45

He has always wanted her.  So love this story Thanks so much

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Date: 26 Dec 2016 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 45

Thanks for this! Big hugs to you!  Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 26 Dec 2016 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 45

I have missed hearing from you. Glad Edward gave Bella a chance.

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Date: 26 Dec 2016 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 45

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Date: 08 Oct 2016 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! 

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Date: 05 Sep 2016 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 44

Great story. Love how you took Bella's transitions step by step.  Seeing the growth between both Edward and Bella.

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Date: 03 Sep 2016 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 44

I loved it I read it all in two day thank you for the enjoyment of reading your story 

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Date: 30 Aug 2016 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 44

I put of reading this last chapter because I did not want it over.  I loved this story and the love they shared.  Thanks so much again

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 44

Merci pour cette bonne histoire.

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 42

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 44

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 40

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 39

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 37

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 36

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Date: 12 Aug 2016 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 35

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Date: 11 Aug 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Date: 11 Aug 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Date: 11 Aug 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 11 Aug 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 11 Aug 2016 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 11 Aug 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

De bons chapitres.

Edward fait des efforts, il lui plaît Bella.

La reine, sa mère doit venir, elle va certainement se rendre compte que Bella est pas sa fille! Non?

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Date: 11 Aug 2016 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 11 Aug 2016 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 10 Aug 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 10 Aug 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

I like this fiction.

Il est une belle amitié entre Alice et Bella.

J'espère que nous trouverons Alice.

Je vous remercie.

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Date: 10 Aug 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 44

Lovely  ending  to this  wonderful  story!

Reviewer: beadgirl61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 44

Great story!  Thank you for your timely updates!  I'm Ready for another one!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 44

I loved this story and these characters. I'm sad that their story ended, but knew it was coming. I love your stories and you never disappoint me. I always get caught up in your stories and feel as if I'm part of the story. Thank you for sharing your gift. I'm very much looking forward to your next story!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good luck to you friend!  I hope you win it all! 

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Date: 02 Aug 2016 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 44

Awe, their hearts still found a way to rule their heads.
Thank you for the delightful journey.

Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 44

Thank you. 



Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 44

I am sad that this story is ending. But I guess all good things must come to an end.  Thanks you for sharing with us.  I have truly enjoyed reading your story.  Glad everything worked out for Edward and Bella. 



Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

Reviewer: Claire_bates Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 44

Crying 

actual 

tears 

 

this is was an awesome HEA and so fitting 

thank you again for another wonderful story 

 

 



Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

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Date: 27 Jul 2016 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 44

:)  loved this story 

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Date: 27 Jul 2016 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 44

bravo



Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

Reviewer: seba nefer Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 44

Thank you for this good story, I enjoyed it very much.



Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 44

So sad to see it end!  Loved it though! Congratulations! 



Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 44

So sad to see this wonderful story come to an end.



Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

Reviewer: GinnyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 44

awwww

thank you for this story



Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 43

I'm glad they cloud is lifted. They need to celebrate.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 43

I am so impress that Bella was so willing to do what it took to get rid of the evil bitches.  Sad this is almost over it has been a great story thanks so much

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 43

I imagine some readers will be surprised or upset with the executions. That's how things were, if not more dramatic and gruesome.

Excellant story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 43

I hope all threats and danger are gone for a while.  Can't wait to see what else you have planned. 

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Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 43

Did Riley expect to be executed after cooperating with the Royal Family by revealing all he evidence he held over James and Eleazar?
This plot to oust the current Royals was put down rather handily.

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Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 43

justice was served

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Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 43

Yay!

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Date: 18 Jul 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 43

So happy they were finally able to dispose of the trash.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 42

OMG things are coming together.  I am sure Bella surprised Edward once again I am so proud of her.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2016 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 42

Yeah baby! 

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Date: 13 Jul 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 42

An eye for an eye.

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Date: 13 Jul 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 42

exciting

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2016 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 42

What made Riley want to turn in his family?  It is all coming to a head. Can't wait to read James's reaction. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 42

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2016 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 42

Riley's active confession of the plot by James and his women came as little surprise. He realized the actual possibility of following though was fruitless. The fact that he already disposed of Tanya and Laurent is proof that he wants no part of this plot.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 41

Rose better get out of there fast James is such a creep

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 40

That is a great surprise Alice is full of surprises.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 41

Can't wait to see how they take James down.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 40

Alice is safe!!!!!!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2016 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 41

How old is Rose? Emmett's 16, almost 17, correct? Actually, what are all of their ages?

I'm anxious to see what's in store for James and company.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 40

That was a nice surprise!!!  Alice is back! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2016 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 39

That had to be the hardest thing to do send your child away so sad.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 41

Ewww...james...ewww

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 41

Is the key to James take over having Rosalie near?
Or does King Edward believe that Emmett's departure will trigger James to act?
Having Alice and Jasper near will be a huge asset to both Royal families.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 40

The hope that Alice and Jasper were chosen by Emmett to care for the land was fulfilled.
Isabella's third pregnancy will yield an heir?
She is a generous Queen to her peoples.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 41

Great update! I'm so glad that the baby boy was healthy! Let's keep it that way.  Thanks!

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Date: 04 Jul 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 41

:) 

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Date: 04 Jul 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 39

Big sacrifice being away from their baby for 6 months.  :-(

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 39

Oh things are heating up

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 39

Oh my, King Edward and Queen Bella are all alone now. That makes me nervous. 

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