Date: 23 Sep 2015 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
That is so sad I'm sorry for your loss. Thanks for the update I hope it is Edward
I will be updating soon finally back on the net my computer crashed and I lost everything but I do need a new beta if anyone knows anyone that can help
Date: 28 Jul 2015 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
You are not perfect but neither am I and I am loving your story just the way it is a little spelling but I cant spell for shit so I can read it just fine lol. Thanks for taking your time to write it. I cant wait for Edward to pull his head compeletly out of his ass.
Date: 18 Jun 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really hard to read without paragrahps and commas.
I'll still continue for now, but I'm not sure if it's not too exhausting to read.
I have a beta who is working on everything and as soon as she has finished with the chapters I have already posted I am going to go back and fix them.
Date: 09 Jun 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well she is a mess because of Alice and Edward. She wouldn't have the health problems she has if they supported her from the start. All he ever did was treat her like shit. I'd make him suffer. Horny or not he should suffer. Maybe she should make him think she moved on and he can have visitation when the baby is born. That would teach him.
She is not going to let her hormones run the show and both A&E will have to work for it
Date: 27 May 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
E still needs to grovel.
May I recommend breaking up the paragraphs so it reads easier? It all seems so mushed together that something's gets lost. And, I really like your story so please don't be offended.
Thanks for reading. No offense taken. Like I said this is my first story so it is kind of a learn as I go. I welcome suggestions on how to improve and make it better. I am tring to figure out where to make the btreaks so that it looks better. Sometimes when it starts flowing I don't know where to stop or start. Like I said tahnks and suggestions are always welcome.
Date: 25 May 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
well I did come back to read the next chapter and like what you have so far. I also hope you put that daddy kink story down for us to read looking forward to more
Thanks for comming back. As for the daddy kink I am working it out in my head and hope to have a rough draft to sort out in the next couple of days so stay tuned for that. As for this story my idea is kind of shifting on how it plays out but I will tell you there will be lemons for evryones lemonaide. thanks again and I hope you like the next chapter.
Date: 25 May 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Could be interesting.
I hope as I go I keep it interesting enough. There are a few twists and turns comming at some point but you have to stay tuned to see what they are. Thanks for reading and I hope you come back.
Date: 24 May 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I will be back to read I hope Edward is older and has a daddy fetish
We shall see how this plays out for our 2 love birds. If it doesn't happen in this story I have ideas for a daddy kink runnibg through my head. I will start working on that one soon. Thanks for reading my story.It is my first ever and i just hope people like it.