Date: 18 Nov 2015 2:14 AM Title: Wrong Way
OMG it is Edward's ex isn't it!!!!
Author's Response:
Hmm, guess we'll see next chapter :)
Fyre
Date: 18 Nov 2015 2:13 AM Title: Wrong Way
So the exwife decides to show..
Author's Response:
Hmm, guess we'll see next chapter :)
Fyre
Date: 17 Nov 2015 9:07 PM Title: Wrong Way
I'm guessing Maria
Author's Response:
Hmmm, see you next time ;)
Fyre
Date: 17 Nov 2015 8:03 PM Title: Wrong Way
Darn you !!!!
Author's Response:
Oops! See you next time ;)
Fyre
Date: 17 Nov 2015 8:03 PM Title: Wrong Way
So Happy Jake is feeling better and moving in right direction! Yeah, Seth gets to see his brother!!
and I bet it is Edward's ex... PLEASE let Bella put her in her place!
Author's Response:
yes, Jake is on the mend and he and Seth cn have some visiting now! As for the rest, well hmm, see you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 12 Nov 2015 8:59 PM Title: Pavement Ends
So hard to read the heart break that they are going through. Wonderful job.
Author's Response:
It was definitely a tough chapter to get through. I'll move us through the worst part pretty quick. Thank you so much! See you next week :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2015 11:42 AM Title: Pavement Ends
Difficult chapter to get through😷😷
Author's Response:
It was. I think it was the toughest to read, but I suck at judging that stuff for my own writing. We'll move through the hardest part pretty fast. See you next chapter :)
Fyre
Date: 12 Nov 2015 3:20 AM Title: Pavement Ends
Unless they are afraid of scaring Seth, they could try skype
Author's Response:
Sadly, by the end of this chaptere Jake is in no condition to Skype. As he starts improving, maybe they can do something. See you next chapter :)
Fyre
Date: 11 Nov 2015 10:06 PM Title: Pavement Ends
I know Jake is real sick, but Bella is neglecting Seth...Plus Edward would like to spend time with his Son.
Author's Response:
I think as a mother it's a haard choice and in her mind, Jake needs her more right now. The moms swooped in and helped her get some claruty so maybe she'll do better. We'll move through the hardest part pretty fast. See you next chapter :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2015 6:20 PM Title: Pavement Ends
Even Seth is suffering without Jake....
Author's Response:
He is suffering but he's a kid and is resilient. He'll pull through just as Jake will. See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 05 Nov 2015 7:49 AM Title: Intersection
Hope Vic and Leah are ok!!
Author's Response:
Oh, yeah. No worries. It's time to cure our little Jake. See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 05 Nov 2015 4:36 AM Title: Intersection
What away to end the chapter. It's getting closer...... My heart goes out to all of them but especially little Jake.
Author's Response:
It's here. We'll fo straight to the hoospital next chapter. Hold on tight! See you then :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2015 8:34 AM Title: Intersection
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Time to face the tough, see you next chapter :)
Fyre
Date: 04 Nov 2015 12:11 AM Title: Intersection
Fabulous chapter!! Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Time to buckle up and cure our little Jake. See you next chapter :)
Fyre
Date: 03 Nov 2015 11:24 PM Title: Intersection
This is really a great story ! Keep up the great work !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Tough chapter up next! See you next week :)
Date: 03 Nov 2015 10:49 PM Title: Intersection
Wonderful chapter. Glad E's dad apologized. EEk baby coming!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, they'll need to be a strong family unit for what is coming! Baby coming, Jake's time to be well. See you next week :)
Date: 02 Nov 2015 5:42 PM Title: Dangerous Curve Ahead
They need to have fun. Then explain to the boys what has to happen. It is a tough road for all.
Date: 31 Oct 2015 7:19 PM Title: Dangerous Curve Ahead
How scary that would be for a parent. I hope little Jake doesn't go through the rejection they discussed.
Author's Response:
I know, such a scary time they're facing, but it has to be done. I hope I do it justice. See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:45 AM Title: Dangerous Curve Ahead
Wow, great couple of chapters here!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! This was a tough ine but I wanted everyone prepared. See you next time for one more easy one.
Fyre
Date: 30 Oct 2015 8:57 PM Title: Dangerous Curve Ahead
SETH is Bella biological child right.
Author's Response:
Yes, Seth is Bella's and an unnamed sperm donor's bio child. Jake is Edward and Maria's bio child. But now Bella and Edward are legally becoming mother and father to both Seth and Jake. Thans for reading!
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2015 5:36 PM Title: Dangerous Curve Ahead
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! see you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 30 Oct 2015 4:52 PM Title: Dangerous Curve Ahead
Think Carlisle was right in bringing them in alone to go over everything. Better to have all the info up front and not be surprised or confused later.
Author's Response:
Yes, it needed to be done and this way, we won;t have to focus oon every procedure he undergoes. Our focus will be on how they find balance between Jake at the hospital and Seth at home and whatever else life throws their way. See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 26 Oct 2015 10:04 PM Title: One Lane Road Ahead
Truely a fairytale wedding. Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It wasa beautiful weedding for this little family of four. See you next time :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2015 2:23 AM Title: One Lane Road Ahead
Ahhhhh
Keep on writing
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am. WWe get back to reality next chapter. Our little Jake needs to be cured. See you then :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2015 9:48 PM Title: Full Speed Ahead
She'll say yes
Author's Response:
*zips lips* Bit you probably already know by now LOL. I'm so happy that you've basically caught up and can't wait to hear from you as we move forward! See uyou next time :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2015 3:37 AM Title: Steep Ascent
Finally
Author's Response:
Oh my, I'm so sorry, I just noticed that you've stopped and lef me your words along the way. Thank you so much for giving this fic a try and letting me know you're enjoying it. Lots more good stuff to come now that you're through the rough stuff. No place to go but up :)
Fyre
Date: 25 Oct 2015 1:34 AM Title: One Lane Road Ahead
Wow, that was some wedding!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Everyone seems to love the wedding and I'm glad I did it justice! See you next time :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2015 10:37 PM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone
Out of the mouths of babes, lol
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2015 4:21 PM Title: Barrier Ahead
Interesting storyline and keeps getting more interesting
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2015 4:51 PM Title: One Lane Road Ahead
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! we'll hear exactly what outr little Jake iis facing next chapter, see you then :)
Fyre
Date: 23 Oct 2015 4:41 PM Title: One Lane Road Ahead
so wonderful. You get happy fireworks for that
Author's Response:
Thank you! This little family had a beautiful day filled with love and happiness! Time to get back to reality! See you next week :)
Fyre
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:47 PM Title: Soft Shoulder
Oh my poor Jake
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2015 1:04 AM Title: Full Speed Ahead
OMG! OMG! You are so SO EVIL!!!LOL....Can not wait for next chapter. Love your story.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I may have heard that a time or twenty this chapter lol. See you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 20 Oct 2015 5:53 PM Title: Full Speed Ahead
too cute. The boys did wonderfully
Author's Response:
Yes, they finally kept a secret lol. See you soon :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 6:07 AM Title: Full Speed Ahead
:)
Author's Response:
See you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 20 Oct 2015 5:21 AM Title: Full Speed Ahead
If she doesn't say yes she is crazy!!!!
Author's Response:
*zips lips* see you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:57 AM Title: Full Speed Ahead
WHAT!!!! Not until Saturday, you can't leave me like this. Ugh
Author's Response:
Sorry! *zips lips* See you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:38 AM Title: Full Speed Ahead
Oh no you didn't! This is going to be the longest week! OK people let's get the torches and the pitchforks!LOL! I guess we will find out Saturday and I can't wait!
Author's Response:
Sorry! *zips lips* See you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 14 Oct 2015 2:43 PM Title: Sharp Right Turn
oooh the vacation sounds wonderfull. Can't wait for the boys and B's reaction to wedding part.
Author's Response:
Yes, he's a man on a mission! We'll see as his plans unfold next chapter, see you then :)
Fyre
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:53 PM Title: Sharp Right Turn
Well he is a big romantic at heart.
Author's Response:
He is, let's just hope he can pull it off! See you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:09 PM Title: Sharp Right Turn
YEAAAAAAAAAA
Author's Response:
Hehe he's a man on a mission! See you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 13 Oct 2015 3:40 PM Title: Steep Descent
dang good chapter
Date: 13 Oct 2015 3:07 PM Title: Sharp Right Turn
Disney World!
Author's Response:
DW sounds funt to me :) See you soon!
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2015 2:47 PM Title: Sharp Right Turn
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you as always! Your support is everything :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2015 12:04 PM Title: Steep Descent
Love your story can not for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Bucle up, full speed ahead! See you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 10 Oct 2015 12:24 AM Title: Steep Descent
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! Buckle up, full speed ahead. See you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 08 Oct 2015 7:17 PM Title: Steep Descent
woo hoo for the 
s
Author's Response:
Lol I know right? About time they said the words. Full speed ahead!
Fyre
Date: 08 Oct 2015 3:44 AM Title: Steep Descent
Great update. I'm thinking Bella might be pregnant.
Author's Response:
Yes I'm getting a lot of that but I just want to remind everyone that this has been a very emotional two days for her. Hearing confirmation of Jakes cure was huge. Guess we'll see :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2015 5:37 PM Title: Steep Descent
:)
Author's Response:
LOL, it's your review I have pulled up over on FF. See you in a sec, thanks as always!
Fyre
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:22 AM Title: Dip
Oh oh
Author's Response:
Time tonsitband really talk. Next chapter posts in the morning :)
Fyre
Date: 03 Oct 2015 4:34 PM Title: Dip
Disappointment....not sure I can see where Bella is coming from. She has the world by the tail she should relax and take hand on.
Author's Response:
She'll explain exaxtlybwhatvshe means next chapter. See you tomorrow!
Fyre
Date: 03 Oct 2015 3:18 AM Title: Dip
Loved Bella telling Ed to basically shut the f$)@ up.
Author's Response:
She did. he's always spouting ooff at the mouth lol. Thanks so much, see you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 02 Oct 2015 7:20 PM Title: Dip
Kids remember and say the darnest things. Love Bella putting Ed in his place with the prenup crap
Author's Response:
Yes, Ed was pushing it and got told lol. Of course Jake would remember and decide to blurt it out right after E realizes it is true, but hasn't decided to say it yet. They'll talk next chapter :)
Fyre
Date: 02 Oct 2015 4:27 PM Title: Dip
Bella has to analyze everything. Can't she just enjoy the ride.
Author's Response:
Hmm, I think she was enjoying the ride, but then considered for a second that it may have been true and maybe even felt excited about it, only to see E react that way and assune it isn't. They'll talk relly goos next chapter, see you then :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2015 7:05 AM Title: Dip
They need to be more honest with each other
Author's Response:
Yep, it's time to talk. No more avodance, the time is now. See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 02 Oct 2015 1:39 AM Title: Dip
NO...Her insecurities are at an all time high, she needs to be more secure in her relationship with edward....They need to talk.
Author's Response:
Yes, they do need to talk and that will definitely happen next chapter! See you then :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2015 11:44 PM Title: Unguarded Crossing
I loved all the emotions you brought into this chapter. Great writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad people felt it, means I did my job. See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 25 Sep 2015 7:47 PM Title: Unguarded Crossing
Finally Edward... Poor Bella was wound up like an 8 day clock. Glad she was able to release some of what she had bottled up. Loved it.
Author's Response:
She did have a rough go this chapter. I don't think she even realized how much it would mean to her. As for Edward, yes he knows. Now what does he do with that info? See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 25 Sep 2015 6:38 PM Title: Unguarded Crossing
Jacob's mother comes to town
Author's Response:
LOL, ohhhh not right yet, we have other things to take care of ;) See you soon!
Fyre
Date: 25 Sep 2015 6:19 PM Title: Unguarded Crossing
awww he finally admits it to himself.
Author's Response:
He did ginally clue in, now how will he handle his realization? see you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 25 Sep 2015 5:42 PM Title: Unguarded Crossing
About time Edward realizes he loves Bella. Great story!
Author's Response:
He finally does, now what to do? thanks so much!!! See you next time :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2015 4:30 PM Title: Unguarded Crossing
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much ... again!! Bella POV next time, see you then :)
Fyre
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:25 AM Title: Roundabout
Awww Eddie's in luv
Author's Response:
He is and he'll get it soon enough. Thanks for reading! See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:18 PM Title: Roundabout
Yes, he loves her.
Author's Response:
He does and he's a smart man, he'll get it! Thanks so much, see you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:38 PM Title: Roundabout
You think you more than like her? Listen to Carlisle and your brother.
Author's Response:
LOL, he's getting there. we're headed to Cago next, see you then :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2015 12:53 PM Title: Roundabout
:)
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks so much ... again and always! See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 20 Sep 2015 11:47 AM Title: Roundabout
Sweet, sweet story with a great message, get tested to see if you can be a donor.
Author's Response:
Yes, definitely and we'll stress that more as the time comes. Thanks so much! See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 17 Sep 2015 6:17 PM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone
Lol. Just found this story and love it.
I love those boys
Date: 14 Sep 2015 11:26 PM Title: No Tresspassing
Oh yes you can Bella. Loved it
Author's Response:
LOL, thank you. Well let's give them a minute. Let them realize what everyone else already knows. See you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 14 Sep 2015 8:11 PM Title: No Tresspassing
Wow. Rarely a Tanya I like. Glad B finally claimed him.
Author's Response:
Yep, Tanya's cool. Bella finally, finally saaw the light and tghought about what she could've missed. Thanks so much! See you soon :)
Fyre
Date: 14 Sep 2015 8:06 PM Title: Steep Ascent
glad Auntie Alice came along and that Edward didn't just cave at the tantrum.
Poor Tanya caught in the middle.
Author's Response:
Yep, Alice saves the day! Tanya's cool, she caan see the deal ;)
Fyre
Date: 14 Sep 2015 7:59 PM Title: Crossroads
Guesing the boys are with the grandparents. Don't blame Edward for stepping back before he got hurt more. Guessing the little green monster is coming out to play???
Author's Response:
I guess you've already read the outcome for these two lol. Yep, that monster worked well ;)
Fyre
Author's Response:
I guess you've already read the outcome for these two lol. Yep, that monster worked well ;)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2015 3:15 PM Title: No Tresspassing
:)
Author's Response:
:) again, thanks so much! See you soon :) :) :)
Fyre
Date: 09 Sep 2015 5:24 AM Title: Steep Ascent
Okay then is right! Finally!
Author's Response:
LOL, yes finally! Thanks so much! See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 09 Sep 2015 12:36 AM Title: Steep Ascent
GO BELLA!! Claim that man!
Author's Response:
Woot woot! Nothing like a little jealousy to kick her into gear. See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 08 Sep 2015 11:46 PM Title: Steep Ascent
Woo hoo!!! I like it when Bella get possessive!
Author's Response:
LOL, and she did too. That's her man! see you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 08 Sep 2015 8:18 PM Title: Steep Ascent
Yes Bella.....
Author's Response:
Finally! Nothing like a little jealousy to get things moving! See you next time :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2015 3:26 PM Title: Steep Ascent
yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Author's Response:
Woot woot! Finally! A little jealousy can work wonders. See you next time :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2015 2:25 PM Title: Steep Ascent
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! See you next chapter :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2015 2:24 PM Title: Steep Ascent
Loved it! Finally she stopped being stubborn and took a chance on Edward. I just hope he doesn't screw it up.
Also go Edward for drawing the line.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin aka Alia
Author's Response:
I know, she finally took the chance and he had to push, but it was oh so sexy watching him do it ;) Thanks so much! See you next chapter :)
Fyre
Date: 06 Sep 2015 2:42 AM Title: Caution
Oh man. Poor Bella needs to try.... Pleaseeee
Date: 02 Sep 2015 9:48 PM Title: Crossroads
I don't see anything wrong with edward flirting with Tanya, Bella doesn't want him that way so, why should Edward suffer. he can still be there for his kids like Bella wants....she doesn't want a relationship with Edward, she has no reason to be pissed.
Author's Response:
LOL, well aside from the fact that id he really wanted soething with her he wouldn't so readily flirt with another woman, unless he has hopes of it lighting a fire under Bella. We'll see what's going on next chapter! See you then :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:14 PM Title: Crossroads
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you as always doe all of your support. See you next time :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2015 1:09 AM Title: Caution
Bellllllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa quit being a booby!!!
Author's Response:
LOL, maybe she just needs a little push! See you next time :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2015 10:36 PM Title: Caution
Poor Edward, he needs to change Bella's mind.
Author's Response:
Maybe she just needs a little push? See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 27 Aug 2015 6:26 PM Title: Caution
Great job by Carlisle. Don't blame E for not wanting to just have sex anymore. Sigh.
Author's Response:
Yes, good news for Jake and the whole family. As for E, well he def should cut the sex, it muddies the waters. Maybe B needs a push? See you next time :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2015 6:15 PM Title: Caution
:)
Author's Response:
:) Thanks so much! See you next time :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2015 4:04 PM Title: Caution
Loving it! Though I do feel loke screaming at Bella to take a chance, take the leap. I do understand where she's coming from but still want her to take the leap.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Author's Response:
Ah, maybe she just needs a little push ;) See you next time :)
Fyre
Date: 24 Aug 2015 2:45 PM Title: No Thru Traffic
I don't trust Dr. Volturi. I'm glad Edward got some answerz.
Author's Response:
No he hasn't shown he can be trusted, but I think hot angry Edward may have gotten through to him. Big news next chapter!
Fyre
Date: 24 Aug 2015 2:28 PM Title: Potholes
Bella is so stupid. Someone must have really hurt her.
Date: 24 Aug 2015 3:25 AM Title: No Thru Traffic
Yea Alec really is a dick lying to a parent about a child's treatment. He should have told Rose about it.
Author's Response:
He probably should have, but I think Alec got themessageliud and clear and we'd never want to pass up hot, angry Edward. Big news next chapter :)
Fyre
Date: 21 Aug 2015 10:22 PM Title: No Thru Traffic
Love hot headed Edward
Author's Response:
Mmmm hmmm. hot, angry Edward is sext smexy. Big news coming next chapter! See you then :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2015 6:31 PM Title: No Thru Traffic
:)
Author's Response:
I finally got it posted and you never fail. Big news next chapter!
Fyre
Date: 21 Aug 2015 6:04 PM Title: No Thru Traffic
DO YOU THINK HIS EX WIFE HAD ANYTHING TO DO WITH THE SWITCH
Author's Response:
I guess we'll see ... eventually ;) Thanks for reading! Big news next chapter :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2015 2:18 AM Title: Potholes
Really Bella, hello??
Author's Response:
LOL, well maybe he should tell her what he wants instead of just thinking it. Thanks so much! See you friday :)
Fyre
Date: 17 Aug 2015 11:02 PM Title: Potholes
Bella is sooooo in denial. Ed is a jerk
Author's Response:
LOL she is, someone needs to convince her otherwise. And I guess we can see where Edward got his earlier behavior from. See You Friday :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2015 6:45 PM Title: Potholes
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! This is one of those days I wish everyone just reviewed with a smiley lol. See you Friday ... Twice :)
Fyre
Date: 17 Aug 2015 6:32 PM Title: Potholes
how naive is bella, Her reasoning makes no sense of course they are a family. I can see it, why can't she...what would happen if they weren't to get close then the boys would be in limbo...It is the only solution, for them to be together and raise the children
Author's Response:
Maybe you can see it because we read Edwards thoughts. She doesn't. She has no idea what is going through his mind. This is the first time he's breathed a word about them and anything other than sexual. She needs time and he needs to make his wants clear not just sexual innuendo. See you Friday :)
Fyre
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2015 5:39 PM Title: Potholes
Fantastic!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! See you Friday :)
Fyre