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Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 8:07 AM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

Nice



Author's Response:

Thank you! Tough times ahead, going to post new chapter now :) 

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2015 2:08 PM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

OK  I'm an idiot...... What did Alec do or not do exactly???

OMG  Out of the mouths of babes



Author's Response:

Okay Alec, in the chapter where E picked up Bella and Jake, he told them that Edward was not a match at all. He is a partial match and it is possible to attempt a transplant with his marrow, just more likely for complications. But as a last resort it would be an option. And yeah, these two little big eared, big mouthed cuties lol. Thanks for reading! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2015 6:09 AM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

Oh what a cliff hanger....little ears obviously picked up on something they shouldn't!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, at the end of chapter 17, they heard Edward in the hall before reading to them ;) Thanks for reading! see you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2015 3:42 AM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

Holy cow! Out of the mouths of babes!



Author's Response:

LOL, yeah these two cuties have big ears and even bigger mouths. Thanks for reading! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2015 2:57 AM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

Oh no.... Edward better run and hide until Charlie cools down. Can't wait to see what happens next. 



Author's Response:

LOL, Charlie's cool, after he gets it off his chest anyway ;) Thanks for reading, we pick up right here next chapter:)

Fyre

Reviewer: jillapet Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2015 12:25 AM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

Oh hell... this outta be good!



Author's Response:

Hehe, yeah now the cat is out of the bag to all of them, let;'s see what they have to say. Thanks for reading! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 11:12 PM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

you are so funny  ha ha lol  



Author's Response:

LOL, these two cuties. Hehehe. Thanks for reading! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 7:34 PM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

WELL EDWARD AND BELLA ARE ADULTS AND THE FAMILY NEEDS TO CHILL OUT

Author's Response:

It's okay they'll be cool ... after they have their say lol. Guess ExB learned they need to make sure no little ears are listening next time. Thanks for reading! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 5:59 PM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

Never say anything around a three year old that you don't  want  repeated ! 



Author's Response:

True fact, and they didn't know the big ears with the big mouths were listening. Lessoned learned lol. Thanks for reading! 

Fyre

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 2:45 PM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

Fantastic chapter. I love this story to pieces and get all excited every time I see an update in my inbox.

XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin

Author's Response:

Thank you! That makes me smile so big to know that you're loving it! we'll see the rest of this get-together next chapter! See you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 2:10 PM Title: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

Out of the mouths of babes ......



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hehehe, so true, these two cuties lol. Thanks so much!

Fyre 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 5:50 PM Title: Barrier Ahead

Bella is going to realize that she needs to enjoy ride and except fate.



Author's Response:

Eh, I think she'll need apush, but this Edward is good at pushing lol. Thanks so much! Going to post next chapter now :)

 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 10:54 PM Title: Barrier Ahead

Totally loving this new little family.



Author's Response:

Thank you!! They're definitely adorable and i can't wait to bring you next chapter! Good stuff ;) See you Wednesday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 8:35 PM Title: Barrier Ahead

OMG ,Love your story .Can not wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I'm so happy you love it, I can't wait to bring you the next chapter. It's one of my faves :) See you Wednesday!!

Fyre

Reviewer: jillapet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 8:05 PM Title: Barrier Ahead

Very sweet chapter... and hot!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hehehe I can't wait for the next chapter. remember the end of this one ;) Thanks for reading! See you Wednesday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 3:57 PM Title: Barrier Ahead

Excellent chapter cannot wait to read more

Author's Response:

Thank you! Up next we have both families. It's one of my favorite chapters. Thanks for reading! See you Wednesday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 3:10 PM Title: Barrier Ahead

well sounds like his parents are pieces of work.  At least they behaved after the explanations.  A family BBQ sounds great.



Author's Response:

I think rich and entitled describes them. Not bad people, just a certain way of handling things. But yeah, they came around although don't expect Ed to not try to throw money at things at some point. Oh yes, a family barbeque is coming and it's one of my favorite chapters! See you Wednesday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 2:37 PM Title: Barrier Ahead

:)



Author's Response:

:) Thank you as always! Fun times ahead, see you Wednesday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2015 6:18 PM Title: Slippery When Wet

Kids think logically. Mom + Dad = married.



Author's Response:

They do! The family descends next chapter! Thanks for reading, see you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 1:37 AM Title: Slippery When Wet

Lol.  Too damn cute.  Lovin it!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! These two have lots of cute times to share ;) Thanks so much, see you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2015 8:34 PM Title: Slippery When Wet

She is def hot and cold it seems.  Hope she realizes he wants it all soon before the kids get hurt. But you get a happy lemon dance though

dl



Author's Response:

Hmm, she has her concerns and we'll see more of it in the coming chapters. They run deeper than just the kids catching them in bed together. They will always do what it tkes to keep the kids hapy, no matter what. Thanks so much.LOVE the fancing lemon lol. See you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 11:43 PM Title: Slippery When Wet

can't wait



Author's Response:

Thank you! Up next the family descends. Let's see how that goes. Thanks so much! See you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 11:10 PM Title: Slippery When Wet

LEAVE IT TO KIDS TO SAY WHAT IS ON THEIR MIND, THAT IS RIGHT MOMMA AND DADDY SHOULD GET MARRIED AND HAVE A SISTER FOR YOU......

Author's Response:

LOL, yeah these two will spill a lot of cute things in the chapters to come. Marriage will happen I imagine ... eventually lol. See you Friday :)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 10:34 PM Title: Slippery When Wet

Leave it to the kids to solve all the problems.....if they marry no need for separate beds.



Author's Response:

LOL, yeah the kids think of things in simple terms. Bella has some reservations though and we'll find out more about that soon. The family descends next! See you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 9:14 PM Title: Slippery When Wet

:) 



Author's Response:

:) Thanks so much as always fir your steadfast support! Sww you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 4:07 PM Title: Slippery When Wet

Oh my god, they really did do it! *fans self* That was so hawt!

The morning after, with the boys, was so sweet! Bella kinda irked me with her rules crap, but I'm glad Edward took them in stride. He seems to have changed already - he's been a calmer person since he met Bella. I think even James noticed. Maybe Edward needs to take Bella out on a date, just the two of them? Surely Jasper and Alice would watch the boys, or even Charlie and Renee? LOL! Then they can go on family outings together! ;)

Loved it! This is definitely my "drop everything to read" story!

xo



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! And *sigh* Bella is a mom first and she has reasons in her mind where she thinks a relationship might not work. We have a few chapters full of family, but then we'll get to that and i hope you all can understand. of course, this Edward is determined and won't let it slide much. He'a persistent and goes after what he wants. Right now, I don't think he knows that he wants her for more than sex, but he will. Lots of family coming next. Thank you sooo much! See you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 10:33 PM Title: Green Light

Oh yea oh yea 



Author's Response:

LOL, oh yeah, it's time ;) Thanks so much for stopping in! :)

Fyre

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 5:44 PM Title: Green Light

They are quickly becoming a family.  Edward needs to check out of the hotel and move in to continue family time. 



Author's Response:

An unconventional family, yes. We'll work on the full out, whole family thing as time passes ;) As for moving, I guess we'll see :) Thanks!

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 6:01 AM Title: Green Light

Cooks, cleans and looks like a God.....that is heavan isn't it?



Author's Response:

Hmm, Edward is a catch, but you can bet he's gonna have to work a little harder to land this Bella completely ;) Thanks!

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 2:15 AM Title: Green Light

maybe here comes baby number 3

Author's Response:

LOL, yeah, they're def fixing to work on it. Thanks! :)

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 1:51 AM Title: Slow, Children Playing

I am loving this story...

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 1:32 AM Title: Green Light

*hyperventilating*



Author's Response:

Lol we haven't even got tent to the main event. The pressure lol. Thanks! See you next time :)

Fyre



Author's Response:

Lol we haven't even got tent to the main event. The pressure lol. Thanks! See you next time :)

Fyre



Author's Response:

Lol we haven't even got tent to the main event. The pressure lol. Thanks! See you next time :)

Fyre



Author's Response:

Lol we haven't even got tent to the main event. The pressure lol. Thanks! See you next time :)

Fyre



Author's Response:

Lol we haven't even got tent to the main event. The pressure lol. Thanks! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 12:44 AM Title: Green Light

Woot, woot! Bella and Edward are getting it on. Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Lol they are although you can expect that Bella hasn't forgotten why she's doing this. Thanks!

Fyre



Author's Response:

Lol they are although you can expect that Bella hasn't forgotten why she's doing this. Thanks!

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 12:25 AM Title: Sharp Left Turn

What the hell happened, the hospital screwed up.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 6:36 PM Title: Green Light

ooh Eddie is so sure of himself isn't he.   Post when its convenient for you  :-)



Author's Response:

He might've talked her into the old fashioned way but he'll have to work harder than that to land this Bella. Thanks! 

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 6:34 PM Title: Green Light

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you, debs. Idk how many times I'll say that lol. See you next time ... Twice ;)

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2015 7:41 PM Title: Road Narrows

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Things heat up soon. See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 5:19 AM Title: Road Narrows

I love this chapter so much! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Things heat up next chapter, see you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2015 11:58 PM Title: Road Narrows

Great job as usual.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and now that we have them home, time to get settled and make some progress. See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2015 8:18 PM Title: Road Narrows

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your continued support! See you next chapter :) :) :) 

Fyre

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2015 6:29 PM Title: Road Narrows

Fabulous chapter! Come on, Bella, give in!



Author's Response:

Oh, I think you'll like how this turns out ... soon. Thanks so much! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 6:21 PM Title: Slow, Children Playing

It is a good thing that Bella is strong enough to control the men in her life.



Author's Response:

LOL she is and even the new men that have just entered. She's got them all figured out and will school them if necessary! Thanks so much, see you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 11:09 PM Title: Slow, Children Playing

Well, that was another killer chapter!   All the families are just thinking of their loved ones and trying to protect those they are closest to, all natural reactions.  But I must say I loved Charlies antics the best!   Lol 



Author's Response:

Thank you!! It was a chapter filled with family, and they are thinking of their family member. No malice intent by any of them. And well, Charlie is Charlie LOL. They'll all ease into things and we'll get them together again soon. See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 1:26 AM Title: Slow, Children Playing

Good chapter. Nice introductions, all Charlie needed was his gun...lol.



Author's Response:

Oh, he probs had it on his hip the whole time LOL. Thanks so much! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 1:13 AM Title: Slow, Children Playing

Love how big daddy Charlie so protective of his family



Author's Response:

Charlie is, well, Charlie LOL. We'll get more from him later on. See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 9:10 PM Title: Slow, Children Playing

hmm I wonder what Victoria and James are gonna do cause I'm afraid its not going to be good.  Naughty Charlie



Author's Response:

Jay and Vic are Edward's closest family...his people...they will remain good for this fic. Thanks so much! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 9:04 PM Title: Slow, Children Playing

Loving it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Jake foes home next, see you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 7:24 PM Title: Slow, Children Playing

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I can't express how much it means that you make sure to review on both sites. It means the world to me :)

See you next week!

Fyre

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 4:35 PM Title: One Way

Seth sounds so cute.



Author's Response:

Yeah, these two boys are going to provide us all with some entertainent along the way lol. Thanks so much, see you tomorrow :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 1:03 PM Title: One Way

Sweet.. the substitute words are to funny



Author's Response:

Yeah, there was no wau this Edward was getting by without learning that lesson lol. Thanks so much, see you tomorrow :)

Fyre

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 2:25 AM Title: One Way

Sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Seth is a cutie and he'll meet jake next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 1:59 AM Title: One Way

Awww! Sooooo adorably cute! Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Seth is a doll and we'll get both boys next chapter! See you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 1:40 PM Title: One Way

Can understand B's dad wanting a background check and all.   Seth seems like a real sweetie.



Author's Response:

Seth is just too adorable and he will meet Jake next chapter! And of course, Charlie is Charlie lol. See you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 12:43 PM Title: One Way

:)



Author's Response:

:) :) :) Thank you always!

Fyre

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 12:05 PM Title: One Way

Sweet chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Seth and Jake meet next :)

Fyre

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 4:44 PM Title: No Passing

Bella should realize that they are already a family.  Edward figured it out quickly.  Neither one wants to loose a son. It is much better to gain one. They will forever be in each others lives, so they might as well learn to love each other.  They are lucky that their isn't anyone else to complicate matters.



Author's Response:

He did and I think she will, too. Her main focus since this all started has been Jacob and making him well. I think seeing and meeting her biological son will put things in better perspective for her. They are very lucky that it's just a Mama and a Daddy to deal with and not two Mamas and Daddies. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! See you Monday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 5:12 AM Title: No Passing

Love the back and forth banter between them



Author's Response:

Thank you and it not sure to stop anytime soon. Edward's on a mission! See you Monday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 1:40 AM Title: No Passing

Oh my! *fans self* Bella and Edward are so hot! I love their interactions! 

Come on, Bella, Alec is interested in you! Geez, LOL!

Love how Edward is with Jake, too. So sweet!

xo



Author's Response:

LOL, good. And they're definitely gonna heat it up. He won't be backing down on this and really, how long can she last? We're moving into having these boys as regular chapter stars and i personally think they're adorable. See you Monday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2015 7:13 PM Title: No Passing

Edward is going to persuade Bella to do things his way?  I have tingles all over my body! 😜😜😜😜😜



Author's Response:

LOL, yeah I think he might. If not, watchinghim try will be sure to break us. Thank you for reading and I'll see you Monday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2015 3:57 PM Title: No Passing

E is def playing dirty.   Sounds like Alec has a crush on Ms B.



Author's Response:

Uh huh, to both lol. E is definitely going to play as dirty as he can. Alec doesn't have a chance! See you Monday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2015 2:30 PM Title: No Passing

:) 



Author's Response:

Love your constant support. It is so appreciated. Thank you :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2015 4:17 AM Title: Under Construction

This is a great story post soon



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I post every five days, so i'll be seeing you on Wednesday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 1:52 PM Title: Under Construction

Great chapter.   Glad they talked things out a bit.   I think Maria will come out of the woodwork when she smell a cash cow for litigation in the air. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah they finally were able to really communicate. We'll have more of that coming up. Hmmm, Maria is lurking somewhere, isn't she? 

Fyre

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 6:41 PM Title: Under Construction

Gah! This is my favorite chapter so far! Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I guess you're a sucker for some real talk Bella and Edward? More to come! See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 2:49 AM Title: Under Construction

Loving your story! 



Author's Response:

Yayyy! I'm so happy to hear that you are loving it! I can't wait to bring you more. See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 11:06 PM Title: Under Construction

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I'm so happy to hear you liked it. See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: tiina Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 5:11 PM Title: Under Construction

Hey, I love this story! So thank you very much for writing it!

Hugs - Tiina

 



Author's Response:

Hey! Thank youso very much for reading it and i hipe you continue to like it :) See you Wednesday!

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 3:24 PM Title: Under Construction

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you :) :) :) 

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 9:30 PM Title: Merge Ahead

OMG too funny.   She was the first to mention it though.  hope his parents will come out too.   Sounds like james is a great brother.  nice to see that for a change.

 



Author's Response:

Okay, so I usually respond to one at a time, but I just saw these so I'm going to give you one good reply. First, thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review each chapter, i so appreciate it. Now, all the other stuff. Yes, we have quite amess here with these two and Edward is a little rough around the edges, but also a great Dad and was dealt a huge blow. Bella by no means is a wimp though and she will stand up for herself and her sick son. At this point, Edward is realizing his mistakes and is ready to sit down and really be rational. So they'll have a good talk next chapter. In fact, you'll get a lot of BxE coming up and Seth will be here soon. As for the cliffies, I can't promise there won't be more, but I post every five days like clockwork and chapter 4 was the very worst IMO...well maybe chapter 7, too. There's some cute ones ahead and some frustrating ones too, but I hope it's worth it for you to follow along. Again, thanks so much and I'll hopefully see you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 9:24 PM Title: Blasting Zone Ahead

Understand his anger at the hospital but he needs to reignin the anger at bella.   I'd slap him for that too.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 9:11 PM Title: No U Turn

Can't blame E for being pissed.  More apropriate would be to get a DNA test where he was.  But Getting him to Seattle was needed for the fic to progress, I get that.  :-).

Why do I get a crappy feeling they are going to have to get Maria involved due to her being a bone marrow match?  Or maybe she'll try to sue to get a big payoff.  Ack you have my mind spinning.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 9:04 PM Title: Rough Pavement

awww sounds like Seth got a great dad at least.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 8:58 PM Title: Yield

I'd be kinda freaked out like B and her dad was.  Hell with waiting on the other people to call.  Time to jump on a plane and/or contact the other family.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 8:51 PM Title: Sharp Left Turn

Oh holy shit.....Babies switch at the hospital?? or did they mix up her egg with someone elses in the mixing room?

ACK   Ya killing me.  I have a feeling I should have waited to read when story was over.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 8:45 PM Title: Soft Shoulder

Can def understand Bella's freaking out.  Poor lil Jake

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 8:24 PM Title: Detour

hmmm is Jake adopted?   Get the feeling Bella doesn't know who the father is.   Wow  now you really have me thinking Leukemia.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 8:15 PM Title: Road Work Ahead

hmmm now who is Jake's Daddy if not Mike the ex?  hmmm.   You are scaring me with the Jake tired thing.  I'm thinking (and dreading) leukemia.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 10:15 AM Title: Merge Ahead

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you! As always giving double support and i couldn't appreciate it more! See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: jlove34 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 10:00 PM Title: Road Work Ahead

Great story so far. Can't wait for more! :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! There's 8 chapters posted so already, so we'll see what you think then ;) Definitely a sharp left turn headed your way :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 8:11 PM Title: Blasting Zone Ahead

:) :) 



Author's Response:

And here you are as always! Thank you so much! *hugs* 

Fyre

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 6:32 PM Title: No U Turn

Aargh! You can't leave it there! OMG!



Author's Response:

Sorry LOL. But I'm fixing to updat here on TwCS in just a few minutes! See you after ;)

Fyre

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2015 3:26 PM Title: No U Turn

Wow, so glad I found this story and I can't wait for an update.  



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you found it, too, and can't wait to share it with you. Next update is Tuesday, although it will be later in the day than on FF, I'll still get it here as soon as I can. Thank you so much :)

Fyre

Reviewer: bemidjibear Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 6:59 PM Title: No U Turn

Love the story, looking forward to more.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I can't wait to share it with you. Thank you for reading and reviewing. See you Tuesday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 3:21 PM Title: No U Turn

What a mess. I don't blame the parents for being angry. They are supposed put the band's on before they leave the delivery room. 



Author's Response:

It is a mess and we'll just have to suspend reality on that account. But yes, we had two very angry parents. Let's see how it all comes together;) Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Fyre

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 7:14 AM Title: No U Turn

I LOVE THIS STORY  :)WOW I CANT WAIT



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!! Updates every five days. So glad you love it, see you Tuesday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 2:09 AM Title: No U Turn

*squee* Now that's an intro! LOL! ;)

At my name, the woman jumps up and faces me. Her hands cover her mouth as a gasp escapes her lips. "Jacob," she says in a breathy mumble.

I focus on her eyes and see tears gather. Eyes so like my Seth's that I'm caught in a sea of confusion. Those very same eyes roll back into her head before her body goes limp.

I lunge forward, catching her just before she crashes to the floor.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! I hope you continue to like what I have in store for you. Thank you for pimping my updates on here and stopping in to leave me a review also:)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 4:40 PM Title: No U Turn

:) 



Author's Response:

You're so sweet! Thank you for building my count here also :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 11:01 PM Title: Rough Pavement

You got me there Maria and not Tanya.. Well he has the personality of Bella. LOL Get in your face shout down.



Author's Response:

Well of course Maria. She needs dark hair and eyes for my plan to work ;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 10:29 PM Title: Yield

Well switched at birth.. Oh here comes Ed and Tanya? Anywho.. here we go.. Poor Baby Jake



Author's Response:

LOL, but you know already :)

Fyre

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 1:23 PM Title: Road Work Ahead

Found this story this morning and already hooked. 



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you! I hope you continue to read and enjoy. Big twist coming at you soon :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 5:54 AM Title: Rough Pavement

loving this



Author's Response:

Ah, and here you are again. I love the support you give to us authors. Thank you so much :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 2:46 AM Title: Road Work Ahead

This is good moving on to the next chapter.   I am thinking he has leukemia or something! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I hope you continue to enjoy it and look forward to hearing from you :)

Fyre

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 2:25 AM Title: Soft Shoulder

Aplastic enemia is bad.



Author's Response:

It is a bad diagnosis for little Jake, and there's more news to come. Thanks for reading!

Fyre

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 2:19 AM Title: Detour

I am guessing his heart.



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks fo taking the time to give this a try. I hope you enjy it and lok forward to hearing from you. 

Fyre

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 5:34 PM Title: Road Work Ahead

Great please keep it coming!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! There's 6 posrted already and they come every 5 days. Thanks so much for giving it a try and I hope you enjoy it :)

Fyre

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