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Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 18 Rescue

For Lorena, dying was the easy way out. Life in prison is no picnic.

Author's Response:

It really was...wasn't it?  At least Lauren is going to get to *enjoy* prison...

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 35 New Life

I love Edward's reasoning that he gave the wolves 



Author's Response:

Glad you thought it made sense, RJ!

Hopefully the Elders will feel the same...

Thanks for those lovely coffee cups!

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 17 Trying to Focus

OMG, I can't believe that you let her break his hand! : (
So much for his career. I thought you were supposed to break the legs so that they couldn't run away.

Author's Response:

I know...shudder...Lorena is a very bad woman...REALLY and truly...

Aren't you glad you got to click NEXT?

Kathie

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 9 Discoveries

I kind of laughed about the four star chef thing. No five stats at hospitals. ;-)

thanks for including the painting.

Author's Response:

You are welcome...It was from the right time frame anyway...and it works in well with the story...later!

The food in that hospital was seriously GOOD...really!

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 16 Interrogation

Yes, I am relieved that Edward is OK. Lauren really is an idiot but with a mother like Lorena she was bound to be totally messed up. Too bad Alice didn't see psycho mama coming!

Author's Response:

Ah, my Alice isn't the "all seeing all bossy know it all" of some fics...like *coughStephenie'scough*....LOL

Adds just a touch of mystery...right?

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 15 Gone...Just Gone

Hey, Taylor is cute with a fabulous smile but Jacob is not Bella's soulmate, Edward is. Besides the hole is probably not big enough for intestines to fit through. Is there enough blood to merit a change? Thanks for the chapter!

Author's Response:

Taylor is a LOT cuter now that he's 18...lol

No guts falling out...but maybe enough blood?

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 14 Epiphany

Whoa, are you really going to let them out-maneuver all of those vampires who know their scents? Hopefully not!

Author's Response:

Maybe... ;D

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 13 Taken

This wasd a really nice chapter with their blossoming relationship. I had to laugh at the mental image oif Bella hiding sushi in her purse! I guess with vampire speed and a plastic bag anything is possible! LOL

Author's Response:

Sushi in  a purse...as long as she cleans it out later it should be okay...LOL

Thanks, JVJV!

Kathie

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home

Nice job letting Bella have the medical degrees. I hope Lauren gets caught soon. I'm trying not to look ahead, but it's hard.

Author's Response:

Yep, good thing she knew a bit about pregnancy...

Have faith...I'm all about the HEA (Happily Ever After)!!!

Kathie

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home

Nice job letting Bella have the medical degrees. I hope Lauren gets caught soon. I'm trying not to look ahead, but it's hard.

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home

Nice job letting Bella have the medical degrees. I hope Lauren gets caught soon. I'm trying not to look ahead, but it's hard.

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 How Fast Can This Baby Go?

I really like your Emmett. He's what i think his character should be like. I like that Edward is getting along so well and wants to know the cullens better.

Author's Response:

Glad you like him...he really is sweet...

Kathie

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 I Love Him, He's MINE!

Ok- maybe you had too much fun writing this psycho? I'm afraid of her.

Author's Response:

LOL...you aren't the FIRST person to say so...LOL

My family was QUITE concerned...LOL

She is freaky...but oh so much fun to write!  That worried ME just a little too...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 5 Love Letters

I'm glad Bella seems to have a good amount of control around Edward.

Author's Response:

She is trying, that's for sure!  Wouldn't do for the boss lady to kill off the clients...

AND it would have made for a very SHORT story...LOL

Thanks for reading, MPB!

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 12 His Girl Friday

You're right, I was able to "keep up".  Thanks for having faith in my intelligence!

Is the other part of the scent Lauren's mama's scent? 



Author's Response:

I knew you could!  I did have one person tell me that they couldn't...sigh...

Good guess on the scent...or lack thereof!

Kathie

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 35 New Life

love it and can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, ellaryne...glad you are enjoying it!

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 Before the Dawn

OOh, nice chapter! I like stalker Bella :D    I also like that she can be around Edward. I think that I know where she got that button down blue shirt that she was wearing.... :F 



Author's Response:

"Stalker Bella"...yes, she has a few of those tendencies!

;F

Kathie

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 Who is She?

I'm glad you aren't doing the repeating chapters thing. It does get tired and it keeps the story moving forward. I'm glad you did it for this intro to Edward.

Author's Response:

That does get tiring...but I really wanted Edward's thoughts here...glad you liked it too...

Kathie

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 3 Face to Face

Nice job writing about bella's struggle.

Author's Response:

Thanks, MyriadProBold...nice to hear!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 10 On Guard

Who is the godmother going to be, or is that spot still up for grabs...?   LOL



Author's Response:

Good question!!!  I hadn't thought of that...

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 9 Discoveries

It's good that Jessica will be at the house as an added chaperone for Bella and Edward. Bella seems to be totally in control of her blood lust now.  



Author's Response:

Ah, she's trying to get some control...

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home

Thanks for the cookies! Thanks for the chapter also. Yes Lauren is definitely in crescendo mode, probably going to peak after the concert at her "wedding".  

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home

Thanks for the cookies! THanks for the chpatoeralso. Yes Lauren is definitely in crescendo mode, probably going to peak after the concert at her "wedding".  



Author's Response:

You are welcome, I'm partial to chocolate chip with pecan pixel cookies...

Ah, Lauren...the girl is nuts...so much fun to write!

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 7 How Fast Can This Baby Go?

I agree, I like the relationship that Emmet and Edward have. They could definitely be good buddies. Thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the guy bonding thing...they may be good friends...soon!

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6 I Love Him, He's MINE!

Or perhaps some psychotic sociopath type issues?



Author's Response:

LOL....that TOO!

Thanks for reading, JaVa...

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 5 Love Letters

a cliffie !!  ...I'm glad that I don't have to wait for the next chapter! Does Bella look like Elizabeth? 



Author's Response:

That's a good guess...you'll see soon!

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 Who is She?

Short but sweet. Thanks for the update. 



Author's Response:

You are welcome...

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 3 Face to Face

Maybe if she "borrowed" an under shirt she could wear it to their meetings!  LOL  It sounds like Bella is Edward's human singer!  



Author's Response:

Good thought...keep reading!

AND, thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 Choices

I guess Alice and Jasper will have to postpone that trip!



Author's Response:

LOL...I guess they will!

Kathie

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:55 PM Title: Prologue and Chapter One...Blood Singer

Nice twist.  Thanks for the story!



Author's Response:

You are welcome, JaVaJiVe!

I hope you enjoy the rest!

Kathie

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 34 Changes

just found it today and i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Ellaryne!

Kathie

Reviewer: Catemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 34 Changes

Your nickname brought me to your story but what kept me on it is your writing!! I've learned to love every person in this story not because of the books and film but because of the way you discribed them.

P.S.: I've been using my nickname for more then 10 years and yours is the closest i've ever seen.

Thanks and nice week-end

 

Carole



Author's Response:

Hi, Carole...CATEMOM!

I've been using katmom for I think seven years...I'm Kathie...I'm a mom (3 daughters), we have four cats...it just seemed to fit...

Thanks for reading GUARDING EDWARD!

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 34 Changes

I loved it! I'm also hoping that in this one that he can control his mind reading!



Author's Response:

Thanks, RJ...makes me happy to hear that the CHANGE was good for you...

I really thought the POWER OVER ME song fit to a T...

He's actually going to have some *help* with that mind reading thing... ;D

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 33 We Do

I'm surprised Emmett wasn't more raunchy lol



Author's Response:

I think that the GIRLS were trying to keep him in line...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 34 Changes

So proud of Bella !!!

“Kissing you would be my pleasure, Mrs. Masen.” --- so good .. Thank you

Reviewer: Esemtee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 33 We Do

This is turning out to be a really awesome story! I like how you have kept the angst down to a minimum - aside from the kidnapping chapters - and have the characters still be somewhat original. I like the stories where the roles are reversed for Edward and Bella and yours is at the top of my list! I look forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Esemtee...and those love steaming cups of coffee too!~

Glad you like the amount of ANGST...that's about as deep as I can go there...LOL

I have three daughters...so I'm pretty much all about the GIRL POWER aspect of a vampire Bella...you might enjoy my IMMERSION as well...it has the same formula...

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 33 We Do

Thanks for the invite to the wedding it was great....



Author's Response:

You are welcome...it was fun, wasn't it?

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 32 We're Going to the Chapel

Lets get married - do you think Bella would mind if I stole him for a dance  or two ...



Author's Response:

Let's BOTH borrow him for a dance...or three!

If she won't share Edward...I'd take Carlisle...

Kathie

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 Choices

Nice job. I really like the feeling of this story. You know how some stories are just tired or not articulate or smart. This one feels like it is going to be a fun ride.

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 4:39 PM Title: Prologue and Chapter One...Blood Singer

This is an exciting beginning. I can't wait to read the rest.

Author's Response:

Hi MyriadProBOld!~

Hope you enjoy the rest...

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 32 We're Going to the Chapel

Bella hasn't thought about his appetite as a newborn either! I wonder who's going to bet on the number of beds they break!!!



Author's Response:

Dang, should have thought about betting on THAT!~

LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 31 Capture the Flag

they don't waste any time, do they? lol loved it!



Author's Response:

Well...no! An unending supply of $$$...and Alice's know-how...Wedding in a Day!  LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 30 Roommates

love the inscriptions



Author's Response:

Hi RJ...I had such a good time researching those!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: figi29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 31 Capture the Flag

what a beautiful ring. it's perfect. non traditional yet semi-traditional at the same time. especially the blue stone - which is gorgeous.

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 30 Roommates

roomies huh ;-0

I know I know PG-13..A girl can imagine can't she. oh the things I can imagine too

thanks again for the chapter and during this hard time for you but I am staying true to The Writters Coffee Cup and will wait patiently for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Hi Kris!

Yes, let us all use our imaginations...I have a pretty good one...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 29 Drawbacks

I love the bonding time with the guys.. we need a outtake of what Emmett told Edward about to turn his ears red..

can't wait for the next chapter- 



Author's Response:

LOL...I'm pretty sure it had something to do with SEX...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 28 Perks

the kiss was swoon worthy... thank you



Author's Response:

You are very welcome!  And still PG-13 rated!

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 26 Gifts

I like to think he choses eternity but how do I know, he might just surprise us all..... ;-)



Author's Response:

You just may be right... ;D

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 25 Company

your family is funny but tell them to stay away from this story please .....

Oh Tanya what will she try to pull and will Edward be able to resist

Thanks again



Author's Response:

YES, I stopped asking them for advice...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 29 Drawbacks

Let Alice put his death together, she's great for the dramatics! 



Author's Response:

That's a good idea!

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 24 Anticipation

glad that they have that out in the open now... SO are they going to push the physical boundries now ??? hint hint



Author's Response:

Well...it IS rated PG-13...and my girls already told me that open mouth kisses are GROSS...LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 23 Not Keeping the Secret

I love this chapter too.. thank you



Author's Response:

You're welcome!

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 28 Perks

isn't it great when your other half offers to help with "research"? lol



Author's Response:

LOL...and he actually WAS helpful...LOL

Thanks for reading, RJ...and those cups!

Kathie

Reviewer: NaMaDRI Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 28 Perks

yay vampward is coming 

loved the chapter and can't wair for the next update



Author's Response:

Ah, his choice may have been made...that's for sure!

Thanks for reading, NaMaDRI!

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 20 The First question

"DId you kiss me last night? "  No but I would like too.....  glad he got his kiss with Bella while he was awake



Author's Response:

LOL...ME TOO!

At last, a wide awake kiss...

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 19 Later

Later (perfect name for this chapter) glad they had their later "kiss"

How is she going to explain everything????



Author's Response:

They really needed that "later" kiss...sigh...

She really needs to come up with a PLAN...I think she will...

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 18 Rescue

I loved the rescue. Did Edward see Bella break the chains???



Author's Response:

Yes, he did! HOW is she going to explain THAT?

Thanks, krstn...for the lovely reviews...and the coffee cups!

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 17 Trying to Focus

WOW she could give Kathy Bates a run for her money.. I actually found Moonlight this week on sciFi - great show



Author's Response:

I was thinking about KB when I wrote that...and I've never seen the movie or read the book!

Don't you just love Moonlight?  Sigh...so sad that it is gone...

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 16 Interrogation

When Bella placed Edwards blood on her heart I wanted to cry for her...



Author's Response:

That moment got me as well...I hadn't realilzed, until just then, that it would happen that way.

Kathie

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 28 Perks

loved the chapter i also love home much you update thank you



Author's Response:

You are very welcome!

Glad you are enjoying it...

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 15 Gone...Just Gone

the scent makes since now..  I hope Mamma knows first aid we DO NOT want Edward to die yet... ;-)



Author's Response:

Well, Mama doesn't but there is HELP...

Aren't you glad you can click NEXT right now? ;D

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 14 Epiphany

Bella watch out for our boy tonight... My nails are going to be gone I just know it



Author's Response:

Sorry!  AT least you can continue to click NEXT through the hard parts...and there are some coming...

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 13 Taken

Such a sweet fluffy chapter - thank you

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 11 Before the Dawn

I am really loving this story.. Thank you for sharing it with us..



Author's Response:

I'm so glad, krstn!

Thanks for reading...and those lovely coffee cups...

Kathie

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 12:34 PM Title: Prologue and Chapter One...Blood Singer

Great first chapter- I can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading GUARDING EDWARD, krstn!

Thanks, also, for those lovely coffee cups!

Hope you enjoy the rest...

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 27 Options

That conversation's going to be fun lol



Author's Response:

Good morning RJ!

Yes, a fun conversation!

Thanks for reading and those lovely coffee cups...I'm off to get my second one of the morning...

Kathie

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 26 Gifts

LOL, to change or not to change? That is the question.

 

I know. I'm SUCH a dork.

 

As for wanting the relatives to leave... sometimes, if YOU'RE the one visiting, YOU just can't wait to leave... ;)

 

Haha, sneaky Kate, hiding things from her family. heehee....

Can't wait for more! I LOVE IT!!!

 

~IG



Author's Response:

Ah, that really IS the question...I have no doubts that he will make the RIGHT decision!

Exactly...just a couple days at my in-laws is enough...LOL

That Kate...she was sneaky...and happy!

Thanks for reading, IG...

Kathie

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 25 Company

*shakes head* Oh yes, your family is obviously VERY helpful. LOLOL!

 

Oh dear. Tanya. Tsk, tsk, woman, have you no shame? Going after taken men....

*slow, evil grin* Try not to piss off Rose....



Author's Response:

LOL...my family CAN be helpful...but not often...LOL

"Asteroid Attack"...sigh...

Tanya...she's such a bad girl!

Thanks again, IG!

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 26 Gifts

I hope Bella beats Tanya's ass if she keeps her crap up



Author's Response:

I think you'll enjoy what happens!

Thanks, RJ...

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 25 Company

I'm hoping to see a Tanya beat down soon! :-) better yet, put her with Jacob lol



Author's Response:

WITH Jacob?  Ewwwww....although Jake does come in a little later...mwahahaha!

I think you'll enjoy the Tanya beat down!  This evening...

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 24 Anticipation

Okay, all we need is Timone and Pumba singing and we'll be set!!! loved it!



Author's Response:

Hakuna Matada!

LOL...thanks for the laugh!

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 23 Not Keeping the Secret

that was great! I love how you had her finally have to break and run when she starting thinking about his blood. I can't wait to see what Alice says to him!



Author's Response:

She really wanted IT!

Thanks, RJ!~

Kathie

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 24 Anticipation

oh i am so ecstatic to read that he told her that he loved her first.  that was awesome!  i can't wait for more and bella really needs to find out about the venom in her teeth can it do edward harm with just kissing.  she needs to ask her other friends from the denalis?



Author's Response:

I'm glad that made you happy, PinkLady34!

There will be more kissing...I promise!

Kathie

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 24 Anticipation

awww! Go Edward for manning up and saying those pesky frightening words!

 

Can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Weren't you so proud of him?  LOL...I was!  Especially since he was going to let her go FIRST!

Had to fix that, for sure...

Thanks again, IG!

Kathie

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 23 Not Keeping the Secret

;) Loved it. Haha, funny thing... (kinda random-ish, but funny....) While reading about the frying bacon, the smell of the bacon we're frying here at home finally started drifting into the living room. Made it feel all so much more realistic, lol!

 

I COULD SMELL EDWARD'S FOOD!!!!!

 

Haha, poor Edward. I bet he's all "What the hell just happened?" and confuzzled. Didn't realize he'd just mentioned such a sensitive subject.

 

Now what does Alice have to say to him...? *grins slyly* The sneaky pixie CAN'T be up to any good.... lol.

 

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Too funny!  Frying bacon at YOUR house too!

Ah, Alice...sometimes she has GOOD news...LOL...about bears...

Black bears...not Grizzlies...lol

Kathie

Reviewer: NaMaDRI Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 23 Not Keeping the Secret

i think his reaction was a little ooc but other than that it was a really greta chapter can't wait to see what you come up with next

hey by the way i just started writing my first fic and i'd love to hear what you think .go check it out it's called "the legend of the raven"</P><p>http://www.twcslibrary.com/viewstory.php?sid=1274</p><P>



Author's Response:

You thought so?  He's not quite canon anyway...LOL...being human and all...

I'll have to check yours out...

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 22 Answers

That was a great way to lead into the talk, with the painting!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that, RJ!  The painting was rather helpful!~

Kathie

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 22 Answers

Loved it, loved it. I loved how they both ended up laughing despite the rather serious conversation. ;) And Edward really does make me chuckle, he's just almost... "Oh, vampires, I guess that makes sense...." lol. I don't know how to describe it. *shakes head* But I like it. ;)

 

Can't wait for more!!!

 

~IG



Author's Response:

LOL...glad you like his response...He's just ready for HER...no matter what she is...well, maybe!

Thanks for reading...and those lovely steaming coffee cups!

Kathie

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 21 It was Time

Holy Cow that is a NICE house! Me want!!! lol.

 

;) Off to read the next chapter....



Author's Response:

Isn't it GREAT?  I'd love to wander through it...

Kathie

Reviewer: NaMaDRI Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 22 Answers

love your story , honest to god i do but damn woman where do you find the time to write?



Author's Response:

I have a great hubby and kids...and I stay up late at night!  AND get up early...I guess I don't need as much sleep as I used to...LOL

 

Kathie

Reviewer: NaMaDRI Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 21 It was Time

can't wait to see his reaction

 



Author's Response:

Hope you like how he reacts...

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 21 It was Time

The house is beautiful!!!! And, personally, I think Edward already has a clue to what Bella and her family are 



Author's Response:

Isn't that house great?  I'd love to wander through it...with or without Edward!

So you think he might have a clue?  LOL

The next chapter (to be posted later today) is one of my favorites!!!

Hope you will like it too...

Thanks, again, RJ, for the lovely review and rating!

Kathie

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 20 The First question

;) Caught up. It's now 1:30 in the morning, and I think I should probably be in bed... lol!

 

Yay for kisses! And surprises... and the two together is always wonderful. Heehee....

 

Can't wait for more!!! Love your story!

 

~IG



Author's Response:

Yes, you should be in bed!  LOL

So glad that you are enjoying the kisses and surprises!

Thanks for reading and the lovely rating, InsaneGrizzlies!

Kathie

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 6 I Love Him, He's MINE!

... I think that girl creeps me the HELL OUT. *shudders*

 

*grins*

 

GREAT job, I LOVED it!



Author's Response:

SO MUCH FUN!  LOL

Kathie

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 5 Love Letters

;) I love your story so far, it's amazing. And I'm really picky about my stories, especially these types with VampBella and HumanEdward.... lol.

 

As for enjoying writing Stalker POV... lol... Don't feel bad about it. ;) I enjoyed writing one of my bad guys chapters the best.... (And then several people mentioned that he was way creepy and they were afraid of me. *snickers evilly*)

 

I'm off to read more! ;)



Author's Response:

LOL...yep, several have said that they are afraid of me too...LOL

Makes me happy that my twist is working for you!

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 20 The First question

That was the perfect question to ask lol



Author's Response:

Glad you liked his question!  He's a guy...LOL

Thanks for the steaming rating!

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 19 Later

What is she going to tell Edward about all the things he saw??



Author's Response:

She has a PLAN!

Thanks, Raven!

Kathie

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 20 The First question

wow...those last couple of chapters were so intense!  i can't wait to read what happens next and how edward is going to take to bella's news.



Author's Response:

Intense, yes!  And now...a bit of fluffy...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 20 The First question

very good chapter cant wait to read the next



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, angelburt84...and for rating...

Kathie

Reviewer: figi29 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 20 The First question

oooohhhh, another great installment to keep my mind at peace. thanks for giving me something fantastic to read.



Author's Response:

You are welcome!  Thanks for the review and the rating...

Kathie

Reviewer: Candice461 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 6 I Love Him, He's MINE!

:) Yeah she's a little COOKOO! lol



Author's Response:

Just a little!

LOL...

Thanks for reading, Candice461...and those lovely steaming coffee cups!

Kathie

Reviewer: Candice461 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 5 Love Letters

:)

Reviewer: Candice461 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 Who is She?

:) I'm very curious to see where Edward has seen her before!



Author's Response:

The truth is out there! 

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

Reviewer: Candice461 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 Face to Face

:) This is really good!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you are still enjoying it!

Kathie

Reviewer: Candice461 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 Choices

:)



Author's Response:

;D

Kathie

Reviewer: Candice461 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:14 PM Title: Prologue and Chapter One...Blood Singer

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Candice461...

Kathie

Reviewer: La Bella Vita Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 7 How Fast Can This Baby Go?

I like your story. Your story is really exiting.

La Bella Vita



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, La Bella Vita~

Glad you are enjoying it!

Kathie

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 17 Trying to Focus

what a bitch destroyimg his hands



Author's Response:

She really was horrid...and yet, still so much fun to write!

HopelessRomantic...remember, I'm all about the HEA!

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: NaMaDRI Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 18 Rescue

can't wait for the next one



Author's Response:

I'll post it tomorrow morning...it's called "Later"... ;D

Kathie

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 18 Rescue

I hope the bitch felt the flames too!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Okay, so you want to be a member of the "Lorena FELT it" team...!!!

There are MANY that want to be in that...me included!

Kathie

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