Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMGosh! ! ! ! So,excited to get this update. Ok I may be a little slow but I just figured out who Aro killed. It was Elizabeth's sister. Well I have a feeling that when she finds out that Aro killed her sister that her torment of Aro will increase multiple times. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
Excellent but so sad. Poor Elizabeth. She will never have the chance to talk to Lisa.
Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
I loved the chapter. Great plot development with Elizabeth's backstory.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
can't wait intil aro gets his lol
Date: 16 Nov 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
Mercy!!
Great chapter, wait till they find out what Aro did to Lisa...
Thank you for the update :D
Date: 16 Nov 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great pictures! I'm so impressed with how the pictures match the story that I forget to add how good the story is too.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
Cant wait for more
Date: 15 Nov 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
lovely chapter as always...can't wait for your nesxt update!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
i absolutely love yourr stories and i love this chapter too....i honestly cannot wait for your next chapter!! when will bella get pregnant? it did be lovely to see daddy edward and his mini-me....update soon! love you:)
Date: 12 Nov 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 04 Nov 2015 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wonderful story. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 03 Nov 2015 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Excellent chapter, as always. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 03 Nov 2015 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
I think we'll have a east coast branch of the coven soon.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
[Alec was confused. Why was he talking about BDSM?] lol lol lol that's hysterical:) Poor Alec!
Date: 02 Nov 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
yey for Alec getting to marry Maggie. Elizabeth is a formiddable woman. aww Sean has a new crush I think
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2015 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
First it was Edward and Bella, Emmet and Rose, Alec and Maggie and now...Sean and Elizabeth (lol ) NEXT???? READ YOU SOON♥
Date: 02 Nov 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
loving this story; what happen to your pic; not showing they always add to your story
Date: 01 Nov 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh I like the Sean/Elizabeth thing. Happy for Alec. Great chapter.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
Alex is darn sweet. Glad it all worked out. Now Aro, that prick needs a slow painful death. I hope they save some of it for the family of the girl he just killed.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love how things turned out. Laughed at Sean when Maggie made him yell in pain while he was trying to do the same thing to Alex. Lol. Can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
i can't wait for aro to get his come up ins
Date: 01 Nov 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
Sweet!!! :)
That was so sweet.. I have a feeling Sean has met his match in Elisabeth! LOL
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 01 Nov 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love this story....I just hate waiting for the next step in the story as the wait (even the tiniest one) is excruiating.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love the Elizabeth Sean connection. Excellent update.
Date: 27 Oct 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Around is so sick. I can't wait until he is dead. Alec needs to stay strong.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Another great chapter.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow Aro needs to die.....but not slowly or painlessly. Poor Lisa. Although one would think he's on video at the restaurant leaving with her.
Sounds like Aro doesn't know Alec at all. awww Alec is too cute with asking B&E for permission. hmmm wonder what Sean will do when Alec arrives to ask.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2015 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Looks like Aro just signed his death certificate.
Date: 25 Oct 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
I feel sad for poor Lisa. But it was very stupid for her to go like that with a complete stranger, even more if she was a virgin and has no idea of what could have happened.
Excellent chapter, thank you for sharing.
Date: 25 Oct 2015 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
A chapter of extremes with evil Aro on one end and sweet Alec on the other. I do not know who Lisa's dad is but I bet he is someone known to Edward.
Date: 25 Oct 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my, poor Aro's going to die....slowly and painfully, I hope! I think he just killed someone friendly to Edward.
I cannot wait for more!
Date: 25 Oct 2015 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
Liam, right? Great chapter. Are is so evil. Love Alec.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2015 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Someone who won't be to happy with what he did that's for sure.Can't wait! READ YOU SOON ♥
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
To state the obvious, Aro is a sick bastard:( Nasty!
"Edward looked up at Alec, who was white as a ghost, and practically choking himself with his tie" I may have a soft spot for & feel protective of Alec but that's still hysterical:)
lol Sean is expecting Edward, Bella, Maggie & few guards, not a whole plane load of people::))
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2015 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am enjoying your story immensely. Keep up the good work! I think that Lisas dad Is Liam
Date: 25 Oct 2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh Alec!! Good luck!
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am betting that Lisa's father is one of the Irish Mafia who is friendly with Edward and Bella. Aro's such a fucking dumbass.
Date: 25 Oct 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm not sure who Lisa's father is but anyone that can scare Aro doesn't seem like the kind of guy you want to mess with.
Date: 25 Oct 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Aro needs to die a slow and very painful death. I hope this trip goes well for everybody.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2015 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aro is a sick and evil man
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
i think caius is lisa's father love it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2015 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow excellent update. I don't know where you get your inspiration, but well done.
Date: 24 Oct 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
i think Aro needs a shot to both his heads opppps did i say that out loud :-/
Date: 24 Oct 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Another great chapter. I hope they catch Aro quickly and do to him what he did to that girl, only make it last days or weeks before they put a bullet in his head.
Date: 24 Oct 2015 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
I think Lisa father is the leader of another crime family a cop wouldn't faze Aro
Date: 23 Oct 2015 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh heartfortwlight you have outdone yourself.This was excellent.So waiting for more.
Date: 22 Oct 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hot, hot but then you add the pictures and whew. Definitely need a cold shower! Thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love love love it!!!!!!! Very hot hot hot! ! ! !
Date: 20 Oct 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
hawtness!!! loved it
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
some typos but you were probably caught up in your writing, they were easily ignored because of the hotness you wrote
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2015 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
The pictures fit perfectly with this chapter!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 9
Who HOO! Off to the playroom we go!
Date: 18 Oct 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
I need a cold shower myself. Well done.
Date: 18 Oct 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Sweet. More please. :)
Date: 18 Oct 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
I was just plowing thorough both of these stories and realized their is no next button! *sobbing* I love this series and story. I cannot wait to see where it goes. I love the photos that are put into the story. Such a great idea. Thank you for writing, cannot wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love your story cn't wait for more to read.
Date: 18 Oct 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
WOAW, it's becoming hot here, thank you for sharing.
Date: 18 Oct 2015 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 18 Oct 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh I here you! Only I'm taking hubby with me!!!! READ YOU SOON♥
Date: 18 Oct 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love the story, but I however have an issue with in regards to the Playroom. I know that this is normal in regards to that lifestyle but I feel that Edward is to hard and rough with Bella, maybe its just how I understand it but I don't like the Dom and Sub parts of the story, I gave it a try, Love the rest but not that.
Date: 18 Oct 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
That does require a cold shower!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2015 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
clo clo....... i FLOVE YOU :D <3
Date: 17 Oct 2015 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
Holy, just, wow! Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2015 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Girl, your talent for writing and pics is phenomenal. *lights cigarette and then takes a cold shower*
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2015 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it cant wait for more
Date: 12 Oct 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
There have been so many changes. Bella is no longer that meek girl at the beginning of the story.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Interesting chapter hearing about the inner workings of reinventing the crime family.
Date: 11 Oct 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Aww sounds like Seth will be perfect
Date: 11 Oct 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah everything you wrote before "playroom" was great but now I can't think about anything but that. Playroom.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh Great!!! Now I have to wait! (lol) I agree there working hard and do need alone time I just didn't want to wait to see how there d/s time was gonna go. READ YOU SOON♥
Date: 11 Oct 2015 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
Don't leave us hanging for too long. Ready to play! !!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am ready for Master's playroom. This chapter was alot of family business. I hope Seth can be trusted.
Date: 10 Oct 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
NEED MORE PLEASE :D :D
Date: 10 Oct 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait to see them in the playroom.
I hope Seth will do the job and be good at protecting Bella.
Great chapter, thank you for sharing.
Date: 10 Oct 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2015 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
Jumping around at your excellence. Woohoo, playtime.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
They are too cute.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Looking back it's amazing I ever thought Maggy's online friend could possibly be Aro! My mental state must be declining::))
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awww Mags and Al are just too cute together
Date: 03 Oct 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love the pairing off throughout the story. Yummy to the tattoo reaction.