Date: 03 Oct 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
Xoxoxoxo...Lots and lots and lots of hugs and kisses for you. Sweet chapter but no real surprise as to who Al and Mags really were ; ) So tell me...was this chapter the quiet before the storm?????? READ YOU SOON ♥
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
omg you got to update real soon please
Date: 03 Oct 2015 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ok just knew they would get together.
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2015 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
Cant wait for more
Date: 30 Sep 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think new love is blooming on the internet. Jacob got what he deserved.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
"...it was time to take it up a notch" lol lol And here I thought they had started on the top notch::))
Yep, mighty gruesome & award winning torturing! Reading it is like driving by a nasty car accident. Human nature forces you to slow down & look::))
"AV1991" Damn! I know exactly who that is:(
"She wondered if they ever would meet" She better hope not
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
Removing a certain body part from Jacob would have been a crowning end but at least he's GONE! I know who Al and Mags are : ) ( lol) but I won't tell ( he he he ) READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 27 Sep 2015 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Av1991 aro volturi
Date: 27 Sep 2015 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Buh Bye Jakey!!!! hmmm Al and Mags. Sounds like a cute match
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2015 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
sick and twisted but great none the less and he deserved it
Date: 26 Sep 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 26 Sep 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter, as always. Jacob was a sick delusional man. Good riddance.
Who is this AV1991, maybe Aro Volturi ?
Thank you for sharing. Till next time.
Date: 26 Sep 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward was really brutal with Jacob.
Date: 26 Sep 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ok, so Jacob needed to go but.....
Date: 26 Sep 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Couldn't have happened to a better guy! Creeps like that need to be exterminated!
See you next chapter
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
Date: 26 Sep 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
GGlad that sick fuck is gone. I figured that he had some sort of plan to take Bella at some point. Great chapter!
Date: 26 Sep 2015 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
You did good. It had to be done. It should be interesting when his father looks for him and what he might have told him. Maggie is talking to al, mmmmm.
Date: 26 Sep 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Jacob is gone!! GOOD! Maggie and Alec will be a good match.
Thank you for the update and looking forward to more :D
Date: 26 Sep 2015 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Jacob Black sleeps with the fishes. That was badass. Remind me never to piss you off. It wasn't too rough for me to read. Love DeNiro as Michael. Who is Al?
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2015 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
i love how you handled him and even gave him a real small dick to lol
Date: 26 Sep 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
It's Alex isn't it. This just gets better and better.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Was Jacob high on drugs???????? Boy he had some nerve talking to Edward and Bella like that. Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait to see how Jacob handles the news that he is fired. Lol. So glad Emmett and Rose went to get married.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Jacob is delusional. Lol at Michael setting them up. Love Alex.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
I knew Bella could win them over. Love that Bella threw her knife to get their attention. Lol
Date: 24 Sep 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love their house. Loving the pictures. They add so much to the story. Hot 1st night as husband and wife.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
hmm yea Jake is a nutso. Can't wait for Mike to be taken care of finally. Nice that everyone wants to help take care of the girls.
hmmm me thinks a love connection is in the works for Alec
Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
yey for Em and Rose. Bella has some great ideas for the ladies. Good she is in there corner and Rose will be too.
Like that she isn't taking Jacob side at all. Buh Bye Jakey
Date: 22 Sep 2015 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Jacob needs to go. He is crazy and dangerous. Bella has gotten so strong.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Whoa! Jacob really is insane. At least E & B got a good laugh out of it.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
I absolutely love this! Oh, I know Alec will get his girl! He is such a good guy! ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
Beautifully done.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Another fantastic chapter
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Read this on ffn yesterday but was waiting for TWCS to review. Never did get an alert but found it anyway. Loved firing Jacob. He was nuts. I want to watch that movie.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
It's extra chapter, I enjoyed reading it very much. Jacob the Creeps is out soon.
Thank you for sharing with us.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
Aww!! this was a sweet and kinda care free chapter. I hope Alec finds love too. READ YOU SOON♥
Date: 20 Sep 2015 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Alec is awesome. Maybe he & Maggie will hit it off
Date: 19 Sep 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 19 Sep 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
Jacob was nuts..
Naked Rob?? Where do I sign up?? LOL ;)
Looking forward to mroe :D
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
can't wait to see what you come up with keep up the great job
Date: 19 Sep 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
Omg! I can't believe that Jacob had the balls to mouth off that way to a Don and Donna! Clearly he is nuts and he has no sense of self preservation at all. Apart from Aro's death, Jacob’s death will be a pleasure to read. Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Cant wait for more
Date: 19 Sep 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Enjoying this story so much. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 15 Sep 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 14 Sep 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
Emmett is so adorable.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hmmm! Filling, Informative, Good. READ YOU SOON♥
Date: 13 Sep 2015 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
Jacob is stupid. He is probably thinking that not meeting his deadlines is a good way to get more time with her. If he actually had a shot at a relationship with Bella he should have known that doing the job well, on time and on budget would impress her more.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2015 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love love your story can not wait for the next chapter ..lol
Date: 13 Sep 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!! :)=)
Date: 12 Sep 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Marvellous chapter.
Date: 12 Sep 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
VOTED, no problem, for Bound to the Family. More than once.
I enjoyed this new chapter very much.Thank you for sharing.
Date: 12 Sep 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hummmm, is Jacob gonna kidnap Bella? He'll never realize what hits him if he does.
Love the story, you're doing a great job with it. Looking very forward to the next chapters!
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
great ch can't wait for more to come
Date: 12 Sep 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this Emmett and Rose. I also love the pictures of their home.
Date: 12 Sep 2015 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the way you constructed the chapter. Little teases of so many more things to come. Great job.
Date: 10 Sep 2015 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
How stupid is Jacob? Trying to go after the Donna and the Dons wife is only asking for death .
Date: 09 Sep 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
I absolutely LOVE this!! These characters are fantastic! :)
Date: 08 Sep 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Alec is so cute. Glad Bella will have him and the rest of the loyal v family on her side.
lol for the little meeting after the big meeting. Yumminess. Glad B is looking to take care of poor Maria too. She has such a sweet heart.
Hmmm Jacob better watch his back if he wants to live.
Date: 08 Sep 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
oooh Alec is a cutie. Poor Maria. Can't wait for Aro to die.
Love DeNero as Michael. He is still hawt.
Great meeting.
Date: 08 Sep 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loving this!!
For some reason this is the second story that I know of on TWCS that I did not recieve a update for .. I saw you had posted it on FB and followed from there.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2015 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
So... more trouble to look forward to huh? This chapter seemed short or... maybe I just wanted so much M O R E !!!!! ( he he he ) READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 07 Sep 2015 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
delusional much, Jacob?
Date: 07 Sep 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
I just wanted to thank you for how you've portrayed Alec. My younger brother has special needs and I really appreciate the fact that his character is very true to real life.
Date: 07 Sep 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh Jacob, you are a dead man and you don't even know it. Great chapter. Love the Alec interaction.
Date: 06 Sep 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved Alec. Hated Jacob. Bella shut Emmett up pretty fast.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2015 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
FLOVE IT :D :D :D
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
There are NO secrets in this group! Love the pictures as usual.
Date: 03 Sep 2015 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Salut
I like your fanfiction
Thanks for your work
Bye
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hi
Bella is influencing the bad men being herself without great efforts. What makes his grandfather, father in law, husband and capos very happy, lol. X
I loved the upgrade :))
PS: I have been following some time, the story that you recommended and I can say that is very good. Hugs.
Date: 31 Aug 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella knows what it is like to be treated like crap.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
"What's next, is she going to put us in pink dresses...." lol lol
Their meeting with the 1st batch started out tense but Bella seems to have unknowingly softened the hardcore thugs::)) No doubt there will be bullets whizzing past E & B's heads before this is all over.
Date: 29 Aug 2015 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
I had a great time reading this chapter. Thank you for sharing. Till next time.
Date: 29 Aug 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Extra chapter, I enjoyed it very much. Than you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella is the best!
I hope that Aro is going to keep quiet.
Thank you for this good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
reading it as well
Date: 29 Aug 2015 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Short but to the point : ) READ YOU SOON♥
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2015 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am so in love with this story....I was contemplating reading this cause I am not to much into bdsm, but reading it from the begin and now the sequal, I love it....you are truely a talented writer. I especially love mafia stories, an combined with bdsm, make it all the more exciting and erotic.
I am the avid reader, sandym
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2015 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella's kindness to Alec will probably reap all kinds of rewards in the future. It's already started.
The woman pictured as his mother, and Aro's wife Monica Bellucci is such a beauty. Hope she never has to set eyes on Aro again.