Date: 30 Aug 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
i hope she don't give in to soon in a dom and sup they have to agree to things not just what he what's
Author's Response:
Oh I can asure you she wont.
Date: 30 Aug 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
great start
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 30 Aug 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, not sure about this. Did Edward and Alice leave so they could be together? Or is this another way to protect Bella & Jasper from what ever? Doesn't flow well if all the sudden Bella & Jasper are supposed to be together???? I love BDSM in anything but, I doubt Bella is going to be submissive to anyone given the heart break she's already dealt with. I think she'll feel pretty angry and betrayed again. Why the hell would Edward leave... again???
Since I haven't read this before I'm curious how your going to pull this off. Should be a good read. :)
Author's Response:
The Alice and Edward questions wont be answered for a while but do eventually. The more you read the more the time line is explained.
Date: 30 Aug 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm intrigued