Date: 21 Oct 2015 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start Sounds like E isn't much in the relationship department.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
oups, ils ont le papa de Bella autour!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
vous nous embarquez dans quoi là, LOL!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
J'aime bien cette histoire.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
problèmes, problèmes...
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
j'aime bien votre Jake.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 77
I really love a happy ever after and this was a great one! I loved this whole huge family, too!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 76
That went beautifully, except for the morning sickness, of course!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 75
Jake will be the perfect nanny, too, I have no doubt, Bella's own personal gaurdian angel!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 74
How nice that things are working out for Jake and Felix, even down to a shared honeymoon with Bella and Edward!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 73
Aro just has eyes and ears everywhere, so of course he knows all!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 72
Everyone in the family he hurt and abused got their shot at him before his brother shot him!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 71
It was really the right time for Edward to propose. Now they can go and take their revenge on Royce and tell him the happy news!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 70
The plot just turned into a pretzel and must have heads spinning! I'm glad it's all going to get squared away now.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 69
Please don't let Jasper be really dead, or Bella, for that matter!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 68
Now they know for sure that Royce is behind all this crap, with a bit of help from Tanya!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 67
Bella must be right about Royce planting a trace on her, since Alice wore the bracelet and they took her instead of Bella.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 66
The mustard story was pretty funny, but the girls being under attack is no joke!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 65
As far as I'm concerned, Royce is just like a snake and he makes me want chop off his head with a hoe! Best way to deal with snakes! Looking forward to Tony's tales!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 64
I sure can't blame Bella for mourning her restaurant, but Jake has come up with a brilliant solution for rebuilding! The dynamic between Jasper, Alice and Maria is also a lot of fun to see!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 63
I'm still curious as to who is behind this attack, but probably not nearly as curious as Edward!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 62
Eleazar just never seems to get a clue about Edward and Tanya ever being a couple! The news Esme has for Aro must be about the transplant match.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 61
Something is off about this whole deal and sure as hell Royce is mixed up in it!
Date: 08 Oct 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 60
Yes, I thought that also! How much more intense is it going to become?
Date: 08 Oct 2015 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 59
Evil cabal, perhaps? That was my first thought when the list of suspects was compiled.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 58
I have to wonder if Tanya knew about this or if she was just a pawn in the game to take out the Volturis and the Masens!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 57
Royce and Mike are in this together, Mike as the puppet of King, no doubt! I hope Jasper and Jake are okay, Bella and Alice would be devestated if he isn't !
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 56
What is wrong with Mike, does he have a death wish?
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 55
Rosalie's grandfather is a riot and one shrewd old man! As Edward said, Emmett's life is about to become a lot more fun and interesting!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 54
Alice has had a good idea and Maria is right about letting Alice grow up , so that's all good! If Esme is a match it will be the perfect solution to Aro's health woes!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 53
Eleazar acts like he's lost his mind, telling Bella Edward led Tanya on, when he knows it was his ideas that got her hopes up!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 52
That devious duo will stop at nothing to gain what they consider thei just due! I only wish there had been real ammunition in Bella's gun!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 51
Royce may just lose his mind when he hears the news and try something really stupid! One can only hope it gets him killed for his filthy mouth if nothing else!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 50
A lot of the small problems are being straightened out around that dinner table. I do worry about Royce retaliating and trying to hurt Edward through Bella! Hope all the guys can keep her safe!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 49
Royce just sounds like the sick bastard he is! It will be interesting to see if Esme will be a living donor for Aro.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 48
It's very nice that they use all that money to give others a nice Christmas, instead of lavishing it on themselves! It is more blessed to give than to receive, after all!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 47
It's going to be tough on Edward and Jake to get Bella ready for what she has to face heading the family. As much as they love her, they know she has to toughen up!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 46
Jake is the best one to guard Bella since he can whip Edward handily. As for training Bella, full out, bad idea!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 45
Probably that Comache thing he and Jasper were talking about.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 44
Looks as if Aro is growing on Edward, now that he knows the truth of his relationship to Bella!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 43
I can hardly wait for the Kings to get what's coming to them!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 42
They may be Mafia, and half of them crazy, but I really am liking this family!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 41
It sounds to me as if Bella is having no trouble taking command of things!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 40
This is really working out nicely! Bella and Edward are together and Jasper and Jake are guarding them, plus they are aware of who is coming after them!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 39
The more I loearn, the better I like it! Bella is going to be a kick-ass head of the family!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 38
This is just too delicious for words! All this time, Edward's worried about telling Bella who he really is and it turns out, she was the one with the big secret! She's not dying in two years, she's taking over the family!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 37
Well, knock me over with a feather!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 36
Poor timing on Mike's part, for sure! I'm thinking Royce is behind all the shooting and kidnapping attempt! It's awful that Bella got hurt!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'm happy that they finally said the words, but upset about Aro practically ordering Edward to marry Jane! From her attitude, she hates the idea just as much as he does!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 34
Well, of course , because it's too funny! I sure don't like the sound of what Royce did! That creep is stalking Bella, sure as hell!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 33
I would have done the same thing if I could have! Where does he get off thinking he can just tell Edward to marry his daughter?
Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
I really don't blame him for blowing his top like that! It's going to be a most interesting shopping spree!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 31
Three cheers for Bill's defense of his son! I really chuckled at what he told Tanya!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 30
This may turn out to be the worst holiday any of them have ever had!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 29
My only surprise is that at least one of them hasn't said it already!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 28
Of course you love the Bears, just as I love the Seahawks. It's all in where you live, I guess. Wonder if Bella will come to Edward's for Thanksgiving?
Date: 07 Oct 2015 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
If she finds out he's been snooping, it could cause all kinds of trouble!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 26
Jake is kind of like valium for tense moments!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
There were two very interesting background stories, though I', sure neither of them told the whole truth!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 37
OOps that was a turn I did not expect..
Date: 07 Oct 2015 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh dear, what could be wrong with Bella?
Date: 07 Oct 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
This should go okay, but I hope he takes Jake's advice and warns Bella against Royce! I don't trust that bastard any further than I can throw him!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think I really like this version of Jake, he's kind of sweet and still brave! Someone needs to kill Royce and dissolve the body in acid! May I volunteer?
Date: 07 Oct 2015 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
To the people involved I'm sure there's nothing comical about any of it! It's kind of funny that Edward and Bella had such a chaste date, especially compared to Alice and Jasper's time together!
Date: 07 Oct 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Typical Alice behavior, I think. She may calm down now that she has official permission to date Jasper. Looks like Edward can't keep from wanting more time with Bella.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can see trouble coming down the road and surely it will involve Bella and Edward being hurt, and probably Jasper and Alice, too!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looks to me as if Aro is still testing, people and situations as well. There is still something up his well-tailored sleeve!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
Hoping Aro isn't stupid, I'm still uncertain if he's a good guy or a bad one! Something is about to happen, that's for sure.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
No indeed, Edward is a very smart guy! He just can't seem to tell his heart what to do!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hell no he won't get over her! There has to be a way to work this out but I don't know what that might be! The Kings clearly want to run everything and do away with the Masen family. I'm wondering what Aro thinks about all this?
Date: 06 Oct 2015 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
He's definitely sinking fast, head over heels for Bella!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'll just bet he loved helping her hide her eyes from all that bare skin, especially her brothers!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Jake is fun as a proud gay man, even if he keeps trying to hit on Edward!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
It makes me think Edward likes to play with fire!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
That creepy bastard, Royce knew just what buttons to push with Edward, it seems!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah, I kind of like him, too!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
I like their dad's attitude about marrying into a Mafia family. It would be a minor miracle if both Jasper and his sister felt like that!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
So, little sister is pissed at his no date policy! That little bit of flirting was kind of cute.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
It's just fine now, because he has no idea who she is! I suppose he'll fall for her and then find out, when it's too late. Then Alice will have a good arguement for dating Bella's brother.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sure enough, Charlie is a cop! That just may break Alice's little heart, but I can see why Edward feels he can't have the son of a cop dating his sister!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
I see trouble ahead for Edward and his siblings. I'm looking forward to him meeting Jasper's sister, too!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't see a problem with Em dating Rose, but I also don't know all the background, yet. Sounds like Edward isn't real pleased about Aro's visit, either.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh boy, brothers of little sisters, sure are fun when some guy starts making a move on their baby sister! I can't wait to see who Emmett is dating that he thinks the family may not like!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
I honestly think this should have happened in the earlier version of Twi.. Don't really like Tanya. but then again that Edward was not my favorite, yours is much better.
Date: 03 Oct 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 31
I am glad they are supporting Jake in his life style that is hard for men.
Date: 03 Oct 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 28
good one. thanks
Date: 03 Oct 2015 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
no idea.. not going to get to sit here longer. That is what happens after knee replacement surgery. I can not sit long with my legs down. .
Later Wee!
Date: 03 Oct 2015 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 23
well here we go, at least Alice is not going with them.. hooray for me.
Date: 03 Oct 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love Jake in this so funny. Put Mary alice with Royce.
Date: 03 Oct 2015 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 21
Yep Alice as ususal all about her.. can not stand her.
Date: 03 Oct 2015 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
This please marry Jake makes me want to strangle Charlie. I am No Fan of Alice
Date: 03 Oct 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bloodline for sure.