Date: 03 Oct 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
oh he is getting close to them to get information?
Date: 03 Oct 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wee I am trying to catch up. I read all your stories and you got ahead of me.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 77
Loved it from start to end!!! I can't wait to see what you have for us next!!
Date: 26 Sep 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 77
As usual, you guys are the bomb. Always a pleasure...
til next fic
E/k
Date: 25 Sep 2015 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 77
I loved it and loved the way you crossed the T's and dotted your I's life is good
Date: 25 Sep 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 76
I have loved and so sad to see it over so cant wait for what you do next
Date: 25 Sep 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 75
Im not sure what Jake has planed but they should just go with it lol So excited she going to have a baby
Date: 25 Sep 2015 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 74
Dont bet against Jake lol
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 77
Thanks so much for this really cute story!
Date: 24 Sep 2015 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I went back and read the epilogue again. Sorry I guessed I missed that part
Date: 24 Sep 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 73
Aro has eyes everywhere lol Jake cant keep a secret lol
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 77
Great story!!! My only complaint is that Jasper didn't marry Alice.
Author's Response:
They did Marry, you just did not get to read their wedding. In the Epilogue it talks of how Jasper surprised Alice with a wedding in the flower garden at Ren's. It took him 11 years and 5 kids to do it.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 77
That was awesome!! I loved this story. I can't wait to see what's next.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 77
Great story! Thanks for sharing
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 70
I'm really shocked!
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 69
I hope they are faking!
Date: 24 Sep 2015 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 72
That was a good ending to him everyone got a piece lol
Date: 24 Sep 2015 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 77
Thanks for sharing!!!
Date: 24 Sep 2015 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 71
I love when they just get to be together
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 77
Totally Rocked!
Date: 24 Sep 2015 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 70
Thank god I was praying for a set up
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 77
I loved it thank you for another great story I love getting lost in the writing thank you again
Date: 24 Sep 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 69
No No No this cant be happening
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 75
["Let's get a look at your baby," she says as she pulls out a sex toy] lol lol that's exactly what they are::))
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2015 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 74
Jake knowing more about Bella's periods than she does is kind of disturbing! lol
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 70
I think Tanya earned an Academy Award!
Date: 24 Sep 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 77
Thank for this. Sorry for the lack of reviews again today but this cold is kicking my ass. I enjoyed the many twists and turns you took us through with this story.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 77
As always great story, thank you!
Date: 24 Sep 2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 77
Great story. :)
Date: 24 Sep 2015 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 77
LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have truly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. You have done an amazing job writing it. I am sad to see it end.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 76
Perfect wedding!!!!!!!!! What the hell is Jasper's deal? Why was he acting such an ass? I hope Charlie oreceiving someone straightens him out.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 75
I am just wondering if Jake can keep the secrect.
Date: 24 Sep 2015 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 74
I knew it!!!!!!!!!!! Edward did not use a condom when they had shower sex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Sep 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 73
Prefect!!!!! Glad Aro and Esme came through the surgery fine.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 77
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 58
No doubt many other people will eventually need to be killed but it would be nice to see Mike, Tanya & Royce dead any time soon! Eleazer probably wouldn't be missed much either::))
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 52
"Cutting him off by grabbing a hold of his neck...." lol how many times is that now? Eleazar's head is going to pop off his neck pretty soon if he's not careful::))
Date: 23 Sep 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 72
Glad Royce can't hurt anyone else. I can't believe his own brother killed him. I don't blame Edward for normal trusting Tanya just yet.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 72
that was brutal to read, but he deserved it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 50
"You ever think that maybe he was conceived during anal sex?" lol lol lol
Date: 23 Sep 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 71
things seem to be going very well. what else could go wrong? *knocks on wood*
Date: 23 Sep 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 70
once again, you fooled me! you certainly know how to weave a convoluted story, and I mean that in the best way~
Date: 23 Sep 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 69
oh no! Jasper is dead? this looks bad...
Date: 23 Sep 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 71
The one thing I noticed is that Edward did not use a condom this time!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 69
I am a bit disappointed that Bella was "weaker" than Tanya ans was captured
by her. Wish Bella was more kick ass than she is.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 72
This what I think of your work. I think you should be published. I love everything you guys have written. You have a lot of talent when it comes to telling a story and keeping people interested. Read o couple of chapters and your hooked to the end. Can't wait to see what your next story is going to be about.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 72
I though your story This Thing of Ours had a lot of twists and turns, but this one I should have taken notes to keep it all straight. But I love a story that keeps me on my toes. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 68
Royce and Tanya get to go to the same place HELL
Date: 23 Sep 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 68
can't wait to see b kick tanya's ass - lol
Date: 23 Sep 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 70
This story has more twist and turns and secrets than any other story I have read. Awesome story! !!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 69
OMGosh! Please tell me Jasper is ok. That he had a bullet proof vest on and he is getting the bomb off Alice. Also tell me Bella has on a vest and is going to be ok.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 43
"...then I'll get Jake to shoot you in the ass again." So Jake shot one of Aro's brother in the ass? lol lol
I have to agree that this is one of the best Jake's I've read::))
Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 68
sorry for not commenting yesterday. i'm still reading. i'm really sick with some sort of summer cold and just can't breathe and feeling really shitty. I love the kick-ass Bella here and can't wait to see her get rid of Tanya. I hope Alice is in one piece....
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 42
Interesting how, before the big reveal, I thought Aro was his usual evil & scary self. Now I see him as a big softy & am worried about him::))
Date: 23 Sep 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 34
Is it terrible that I like Jake gaya more than straight.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 68
Oh snap they are out for blood now was is only Tanya or is her father behind it too update soon I need to know how Alice is
Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 68
I feel sorry for Royce.......NOT!!!!!!! I hope they do not automatically kill him. I hope he suffers a long painful death.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 67
Wow Oh wow will they get Alice back and what will Jasper do to them
Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 68
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 68
i hope you plan for them to get royce and tanya alive to
torture them to their slow deaths....gaaa, im being quite bad.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 38
All the stress Edward went thru regarding the Swans & Bella turns out to be Aro's granddaughter::)) Seems Aro's been 'playing' Edward for awhile now!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 37
lol lol Aro's in big trouble::))
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
I just went into speculation mode! I doubt she's sick, but something will be happening when she turns 21 that she doesn't want. Many other things are on my 'Hmm' list.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
Other than the worry at the back of my mind about Royce, this chapter is absolutely hysterical!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
Geez, Charlie needs to have a little talk with Bella about stopping to talk to Daddy when he's giving someone a warning on the side of the road::))
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
"I was glad to get home just so I could scrub the yuck of the night away in the shower." lol Funny how I was thinking about taking a shower myself::)) Hope the girls make a good chunk of change for dealing with the nasty wankers!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 67
If Bella has the option to trade herself she will do it. Edward will lose his mind if she does.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 66
That was smart about the chills. Royce has something to do with this too.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 65
The pink belt aka skirt, that's funny!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 64
I'm glad they have a solution better than just the restaurant.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 63
I hope you and your family feel better soon!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 67
Thanks so much posting even sick. Mike needs to be turned inside out. Royce needs to die
Date: 23 Sep 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 66
They where having such a great night hurry get to her
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
"A/N: What do you think of Jake?" I always love Jake if he's imprinted, gay or dead::)) lol
Date: 23 Sep 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 65
Royce was lucky Aro showed up or Tony would have taught him a leson lol
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 67
I'm dying right now!! I really hope Alice is alright! Can't wait to see Royce's reaction when he finds out they got the wrong girl!!!!