Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 64
I love Jake he is all over everything they all know a good thing when they see it.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 63
Aro is going to be taken care of if he likes it or not lol
Date: 23 Sep 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 67
You are still leaving us with a cliffy. Poor Alice. Poor Jasper. Whoever is behind this is going to die at some point. Can'twait till tomorrow.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 66
Loved the mustard story. I wonder why Tony had not been active with the Mafia. I assume he has not, since Royce treated Rose so bad. So glad you are not having us hanging with the end of this chapter. Can't wait to see what is happening with Bella.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 65
Ronce is such an ass. Everyone else seems to be gentlemen except for the Kings.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 67
Damn your cliff hangers. Post soon?
Date: 23 Sep 2015 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 64
I hate Bella gets so upset about the restaurant. But Jake will make it better than before. Busted out laughing at Jasper and Maria. Lol!!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Sep 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 63
So Rose's grandfather is somehow part of the Mafia too??????? I love how the woman tell Aro what to do. Lol
Date: 22 Sep 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 67
can't believe only 10 chaps left
Date: 22 Sep 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 66
tony's amusing
yikes hope the girls are ok
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 67
:) I hope you are feeling better soon
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 62
Esme must be a match.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 61
Yes and after all the exhausting questions they need a little one on top of one time. Haha!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 60
Felix & jake! I love it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 59
So it looks like mike's family is setting her up.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 58
I wonder if Royce is using Tanya to make her the scape goat and Tanya is stupid enough to fall for it.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 57
I'm guessing Tanya did along with Royce & Mike.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 56
Ok it doesn't seem that bad yet....
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 55
I LOVE tony! Elderly people who talk like this always make me laugh! I imagine myself to be like that when I'm that age.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love your Jake. The story is good too, but I don't understand why Edward doesn't know who Bella is. He had her fill out papers but didn't get her last name? That's not making sense to me right now. All in all it's a great story.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 62
Esme is a match for Aro? Eleazar does not have both orrs in the water lol
Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 61
Tanya is a nasty bitch dont like her now I dont lol
Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 60
Bella is going to be an amazing leader
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 53
I'm thinking both families are going to be losing some members.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 52
Bella is a bad ass!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 51
I'm thinking some foul language is about to occur.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 62
she's going to be his donor?
Date: 22 Sep 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 61
What I would like to know is why Mike was allowed to enter the restaurant in the first place. She has a restraining order on him and he KNOWS that is her work and business. Why did she not just call Charlie and have him put away for a few hours or days?
Date: 22 Sep 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 62
Loved it so ready for more!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 62
Oh wow he is crazy will he ever stop
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 62
not a clue. can't wait to find out!
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 61
Come on Bella, just a punch at least.
dont let Tanya keep disrespecting you, the head of the family.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 61
I still don't like Tanya and think she is lying.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 60
Wow she handled herself with strength and grace
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 60
Yeah I thought they were phony FBI too...
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 59
The Dwellings. Mike was just a ruse, to throw them off the mark.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 62
Love that Edward hit Eleazar. Lol. Can't wait for more.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 60
To be Mafia, Edward is pretty flipping clueless. Is he the one that has been kept in the dark instead of Bella??
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 58
I'm glad Bella and Jasper are ok, but am done guessing what will happen. You fool me every time!
Date: 22 Sep 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 61
I don't trust Tanya or Royce. Plus I think Eleazar is up to something too.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 57
Must have been the Dwellings...
Date: 22 Sep 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 60
I thought they were already intense too. Love how Bella can think so quick on her feet. She out the FBI in their place. Lol
Date: 22 Sep 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 59
There are twist and turns everywhere in this story. Can't wait to find out who is dealing with Tanya.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 59
Oh boy so much happening poor Bella but Edward and family are there for her but who was it and why
Date: 22 Sep 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 58
OMGosh! The Masen's and Voltera 's can't trust anyone. So happy that Jasper and Bella are ok for the most part.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 53
I'm just surprised how Tanya can talk like that to Bella since essentially
Bella will become aro (his position as the head).
Just imagine what would happen if Tanya behaves like this against aro...
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 59
Not sure....but I hope Tanya is getting piece of her ginger hitch hair ripped out one by one....Oh yeah.....torture for the ginger hitch then she meets her maker!!! More soon please!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 59
Poor Bella she is trying to be strong but hard to do with everything that is happening
Date: 21 Sep 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 58
Thank you for Jasper being safe
Date: 21 Sep 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 57
OMGosh! I hope Jasper is ok. That is scary. Glad Jacob had such an alarm
Date: 21 Sep 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 38
Ok...so not what I thought!!
Y'all are good
Date: 21 Sep 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 57
Please make Jasper safe. I think Royce was in on it that is why he wanted Bella to stay safe.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 59
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 21 Sep 2015 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 56
It just keeps getting better and better.. Can't wait for more.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 53
Will she not get a real proposal and ring? Or was this it?
Date: 21 Sep 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 56
Mike is going to die soon and Royce needs to go right along with him
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 56
Hmm mm to many people are there at once they all know something
Date: 21 Sep 2015 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 55
I love Tony fisty old fart lol
Date: 21 Sep 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 54
I think Maria is cool and will work right into the family. Esme is a great lady very cool
Date: 21 Sep 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 55
I love Tony! Love how he wound Emmett up!
Date: 21 Sep 2015 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 54
I like that Maria is making friendly with Alice and helping at the club. She isn't a spy, is she? I hope not! You've fooled me a lot with this story and I've loved every moment of it.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
What is Eleazars problem he is not taking no very well
Date: 21 Sep 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 53
They are cute. Sweet. When they're alone.....but when they are around "family" and someone does something stupid, they're deadly.....
Date: 21 Sep 2015 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 56
So he is admitting that he is a Dwelling. Esme sure got Bella's restaurant back up and running quickly. Who is Tanya meeting for real? Can't wait for tomorrow.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 55
Lol. I have a feeling that Tony is going to keep Emmett on his toes.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 55
Best character to be introduced is Rose's grandfather. Hope we see more of him
Date: 21 Sep 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 54
I think Maria is going to be good to have around. Glad Esme is up to donating.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 53
What is Eleazar"s deal?
Date: 21 Sep 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 38
that was a wonderful twist. Never saw it coming..
That's why I love you guys.
E/k
Date: 21 Sep 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 56
Uniting the Voltori and the Dwellings??
I hope they kick Royces ass no matter what they do!
Date: 21 Sep 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 56
Loved it can't wait for more 😍