Date: 21 Sep 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 52
I think Bella can be scarry she has proved it. Tanya is such CU@T
Date: 21 Sep 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 56
Don't leave us like that!! Just kidding it will give me something to look forward to tomorrow. I'm still hoping someone takes Tanya out. Idk why but she bothers me more than Royce. I know he will get his.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 51
They are all freaking out lol love it
Date: 21 Sep 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 50
Aro is a good man and loves his family but dont mess with him
Date: 21 Sep 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 49
Royce is an idiot I cant wait till he find out who she is
Date: 21 Sep 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 53
Is it just me and i over read the part but.....Edward never asked Bella to marry him. Is he ever? If not that sucks.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 47
Jake is beyond good and Bella is beyond honest
Date: 20 Sep 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 51
Oh I would love to see Royce's face when that happens. I hope he does something stupid so that it will give an excuse to whoever gets to fuck him up!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 52
royce and tanya are craaaazzzzy!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 52
Think two need to have unfortunate accidents ASAP
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 52
Lol! !!!!!!! Jake and the guys are worried about Bella being soft. I have a feeling she can hold her on. Edward and Bella's family will have to watch their backs for quite a while. How did Jacob know what happened in the men's bathroom? Plus how did Jasper know about Tanya in the ladies? Do they have them bugged. I hope you update again real soon today. I am dying to know what is next.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 52
OMG!! That was awesome!! Go Princess B!!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 46
Jake is the best gay man ever love him
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 45
I felt sorry for Jenks
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 44
Edward has a new repect for Aro and he is going to love him like a grandfather.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 43
I think they should just kill of the Kings
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
So Aro is the one that only has 2 years
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 40
Edwards head must be spining
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 51
Royce is so smug and such an asshole. I can't wait to see his reaction.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 51
good. hope your next break is soon :)
Date: 20 Sep 2015 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 50
This story has the best Jake!
Thank you for all the frequent updates, it makes so much more enjoyable.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 39
I am speechless lol
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 38
OMG I love you always keep me guesing I am blown away lol Bella is full of suprises lol love her
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 37
Wow didnt see that one coming so Aro was not talking about Jane lol
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 50
omg your killing me i love it cant wait
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 36
I think Royce is behind it and not the way she should have found out but she did tell her he had something to tell her.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 35
I think Aro is screwed in the head if he thinks Edward is going to marrie Jane now way
Date: 20 Sep 2015 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 50
Great chapters
Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 34
Got to love Jake one min he is all protective the next he is drooling over man meat lol
Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 33
That dude needs to learn to keep his mouth shut I think Edward will keep reminding him lol. Jasper was impressed
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 50
Thanks for all the updates! Luv them!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 38
Talk about a fucking twist!!!! Holy shit this is getting good!!! Soooooo she better not be dieing! I cant wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 49
I'm not sure who like more, Jake or Aro! These characters are nothing like I'm used to. I think that is one of the biggest reasonings that this story is so addicting! It also helps that you are posting chapters like crazy!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 48
I'm so glad Edward got the door changed & new locks! We need them to not be interrupted!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
He made it clear NOOO Tanya at all
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 47
I love that Edward doesn't agree with Alice at the drop of a hat. It's refreshing!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 46
Jake was bad to the bone!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 45
I do look forward to Bella & Edward being king & queen of the mafia.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 34
i love jake in this whooo hooo
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 44
I was thinking they might own it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 43
I'm surprised Alice hasn't lost her cool yet.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 50
I hope you put Royce out of our misery soon....
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 49
It's obvious that Royce is allied with the Dwellings. Is that their name? Anyway, Mike is the grandson, so there is the link...
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 48
this chapter is doubled up again. 2 chapter 48s are on this one chapter page.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 47
on with the training...
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 46
Jake has mega skills! I think it a bad idea for Edward to train Bella. He can't be objective!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 45
I like Jake too! Can we get someone for him? A love interest?
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 44
For once, there is an Aro I can like. Thanks! Royce, now, he is another story and I hope he meets a painful end....
Date: 20 Sep 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 43
I think the Kings think they will overthrow Aro and the Denalis and take over. Little do they know that one hell of a kick ass woman will do them in....I'm loving this?
Any word about where else I can read this story? Please?
Date: 20 Sep 2015 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 50
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 20 Sep 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 50
I am so loving this story. Bella definitely doesn't let Aro get away with much. Glad they all had a good day.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 49
Mike has a unhealthy liking for Bella and now it seems that Royce does too.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 48
Can't wait for the party. It sounds like it is going to be great. Love Edward and Bella 's new Christmas tradition.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 47
Lol. Loved the story of Jasper and Maria. I am still asking why is Jasper not taking over the Mafia if he is older than Bella?
Date: 20 Sep 2015 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 46
I laughed at Jake winning 3 for 3. Edward really does need Jake to train him. Lol.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 45
Poor Edward and Bella. It seems that everyone was keeping secrets from them. Can't wait to see what Jacob does with Edward.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 44
Aro is definitely a different person around Bella but that is understandable.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 43
Very interesting. Can't wait to see what stupid stuff Royce does.
Date: 19 Sep 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 42
I am LOVING this story. I have read everything posted yesterday and today. I can't wait for more!!! Of course, I've loved all of your stories!!! Sometime I re-read them waiting for next story. 😊🌹
Date: 19 Sep 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 42
I am loving all the chaos. Lol. Still do not know why Bella is taking over the family and not Jasper, if he is older.
Date: 19 Sep 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 41
I am assuming that Jasper has not explained who Maria is. Loved Jake in this chapter.
Date: 19 Sep 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 40
I thought Jasper was older than Bella. Why is he not taking over the family business?
Date: 19 Sep 2015 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 39
So Aro is Renee's dad. I really wonderful what Charlie thinks. I am in shock about these turn of events. I know Edward and his family have got to be.
Date: 19 Sep 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 39
Whoa, tying our problems up with a neat little bow?
Date: 19 Sep 2015 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 38
So Bella is not dying. So is Aro Charlie's dad or Bella's mom's dad? So Aro wants Bella and Edward together marry. Then why did he asked Edward to consider consider marrying Jane. Love that Bella had possible figured out that Mike is Dwellings grandson and none of the Mafia has not. She will do well running the Mafia. So is Charlie a good copy or a bad cop?
Date: 19 Sep 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 37
What the fuck? ?????????? So Aro has known the whole time who Jasper and Bella were. What is his deal? LOVE that Bella is not scared of him. Lol. I have a feeling that she is the only one who puts Aro in his place. Lol. I am assuming that he is Bella's mom's dad. Right???
Date: 19 Sep 2015 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
Billy should be very proud of Jake and I loved the way he put Tanya in her place to funny
Date: 19 Sep 2015 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
OMG WTF are they talking about NOOOOO Tanya
Date: 19 Sep 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 40
can't wait for the reveal
Date: 19 Sep 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 29
He never wants to let her out of his sight
Date: 19 Sep 2015 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 28
The ball game was not that good because Edward could not keep his mind off of Bella lol
Date: 19 Sep 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 27
I am wondering when Aro is going to stick his nose in
Date: 19 Sep 2015 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Edward is going to lose his shit worrying about her
Date: 19 Sep 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 38
seems like b is on top of things better than the others