Date: 19 Sep 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 42
It certainly has taken an almost wacky turn here, but I'm enjoying the ride!
Date: 19 Sep 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 41
who knows what happens next, at this point! you guys are good with surprises....I know this story is already pre-written, but I hope you find someone for Jake. He deserves love too!
Date: 19 Sep 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 40
It's good to have more than just one person looking out for the next Queen of the Mafia!
Date: 19 Sep 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 42
Love the twist to the story..
Date: 19 Sep 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 39
I love this! Bella is one bad-ass, take-charge woman! Yes!
Date: 19 Sep 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 38
Oh man, you are full of surprises! Her secret isn't that she's dying, it's that she is to head the organization when she turns 21! This couldn't be any better for Bella and Edward!! They were meant to be together!
Date: 19 Sep 2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 37
oh gosh! big huge reveal!! wow! I had no idea!!
Date: 19 Sep 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 36
The Kings...or maybe the Volturis....or maybe the Denalis
Date: 19 Sep 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 35
Not the best way to say the ILYs, but not too bad....
Say is there any other platform where I could read your stories? TWCS has had a font issue now for a few weeks that is quite annoying. I have to adjust the font to read the chapter but the place to write the reviews is small, then, If I make the story font small enough to fit the page.
Date: 19 Sep 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 34
LOL! You made me laugh out loud with that last line! Oh no, Royce and skank Tanya HAVE to go. Let's have Bella shoot them in self defense, shall we? or maybe Jake?
Date: 19 Sep 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 42
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 42
The men's group, it makes me laugh how cranked up they get.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 41
Is Alice going to attack Maria?
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2015 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 40
Funny Jake trying to cuddle with Edward!
Date: 19 Sep 2015 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 42
Damn. I've read too fast, once again, and am now stuck playing the waiting game. Lol. This is great so far.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 38
This just gets better and better. Love all the twists.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 40
I don't understand why Edward does not tell them how Aro instructed them to watch their backs with the swans and keep a distance. When the boss says do not tell, you do not tell. Edward has the best excuse there is. But I would have liked to see Aro grovel more.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 39
That was an overload. But if I was Edward I would still be pissed at Aro for trying to keep Bella & Jasper away from him & Alice. Not to mention throwing Jane at him. But at least I was right about the calculating looks toward Edward. So I was right about something, albeit small. Hah.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 37
Well Snap! That is what makes your writing great! I love the twist! I would like to see how Grandpa talks his way out of this one. I love that it is Aro in the hot seat now.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 39
Edward needs to unleash some good lovin on her tonight!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 38
Yep Jasper was all cocky for a reason!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 37
I was thinking grandpa might be in the mob but it didn't cross my mind that it could be Aro. That was a GREAT reveal. It explains a bit more about Jasper too!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 36
She knew who the mason's were....
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 35
Funny that she told him to take it back!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
Bella just got a 100 degrees hotter now that Edward knows she carries
Date: 18 Sep 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 34
HA! Taylor Lautner! That is good.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 37
This should be interesting... LOL!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 37
Oh damn. Ok so Charlie isn't from the other family. And what is up with Jasper? LOVE IT
Date: 18 Sep 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 37
Whoa...didn't see that coming!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 36
The Kings are behind it. They have got to be. I am assuming that Bella knows who the Mason family is. I hope she let's Edward explain.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 35
I knew Aro was up to something. Edward has to find out a way to turn Aro down. I am still wanting to know what is wrong with Bella.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 34
I am loving this Jake!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 33
Eleazar has some nerve. I don't blame Edward for flipping out. I just hope Eleazar does not team up with the Kings against Edward.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
He is a very good guy
Date: 18 Sep 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ohhh, I've been pondering the genetics thing. Has she been going so much because Charlie is the family aro is looking for which would mean B is mafia too, just other side of aro?
Date: 18 Sep 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
She is part of the family they are looking for OMG
Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 33
I'm wondering if Jasper has any idea just who these people are. I bet he does....
Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 32
Oh I wouldn't want to go shopping with that bunch if you gave me a million dollars! Well.....maybe I would for a million...
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 33
I really really really want to know what Bella has & what is Jasper up too?
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 32
Tanya isn't done with Bella.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 33
e seems to be adding enemies
Date: 18 Sep 2015 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Will they make it home before they jump each other? Love Jake he is a good friend.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
That was priceless lol. Royce is pond scum and that is insalting pond scum
Date: 18 Sep 2015 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow, I did not expect Edward to blow up like that after Bella and her family left. I am like Jake, Edward has some nerve fucking Bella with Charlie just downstairs. Lol
Date: 18 Sep 2015 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
There are lots of sharky remarks flying around the room. Lol. I am thinking Bella could hold her own. She may be shy but she seems to have no problem stating how she feels when someone is trying to belittle her or someone she loves.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thanksgiving is going to be real interesting. Lol
They might have some fireworks for Thanksgiving.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 29
Edward and Bella both have it bad for each other. I just have a feeling that Royce is going to cause problems. I just hope Bella doesn't get hurt.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 31
He is finding a good spot with Edward too
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 30
Tanya is going to stir the pot.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 29
It seems both of them could die any day.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
Edward is a wild man!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
To funny no one is getting any lol
Date: 18 Sep 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
Alice is a spoiled prinsess lol. I am not sure if kissing Bella is a good idea with dad in the room lol
Date: 18 Sep 2015 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
I dont think Edward like what he does
Date: 18 Sep 2015 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 32
I was kind of hoping the Danali clan was looking to align for protection purposes not marriage. Too bad because the Mae clan could use the backup if Aro does not nip it in the bud.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
I love this Jake so much and I hope that he is the glue that brings them all together. I think he could single handedly lasso the world to do his bidding. I want more Jake!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Aro is seeing what he can see and I think he sees that Edward is in deep with Bella already.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 27
Maybe critic is a bad doctor?
Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow, Edward is slipping in his being aware of what is going on around him. He better be careful.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 26
Tell him Bella we all want to know!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
Edward has to find a cure for her!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 27
I am wondering if Alicecould ask Jasper about Bella's health.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
I didn't expect that!!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am wondering if it is something else. I don't know what it could be but I have a feeling that Edward is jumping to conclusions.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hope we find out soon what is wrong with Bella. Glad they talked and found out more about each other. Edward's story/past wad a little sad.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
Hopefully very very good!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
Jake is so perfect!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 31
Geez, will someone hog tie Tanya and tape up her mouth? She has to be the rudest bitch ever! I love Jake! I love how Bill defended him for once.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
Tanya. Yikes! She will ruin everything. Does Bella really have an illness that will take her life or is Edward assuming that because of what he heard?
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Alice is a brat! I wasn't expecting her to be such a twit.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 29
why are there 2 chapter 29s posted here? duplicates. Is that a mistake? All this is happening very quickly. I wonder how his family feels about this...
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 19
What is Jasper up too?