Date: 18 Sep 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
Edward is so taken with Bella that I think he will slip and reveal himself to her. I wonder how she will take knowing who he really is....
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
He was testing Edward. I thought he was going to demand Edward marry Heidi. Thank goodness that didn't' happen!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
Can't wait to find out
Date: 18 Sep 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 24
OMGosh! What the hell does she mran by that? What is wrong with her?
Date: 18 Sep 2015 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
I have a feeling things are going to get hot and heavy with Edward and Bella, unless they get cockblocked again.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Seems like Ali needs a reality check. If Charlie finds out anything it seems like it would be bad all around
Date: 18 Sep 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
Lol!!!!!!!!! Loved that Royce got his ass embarrassed.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
Seems like a bad idea
wonder who purposefully broke the tail light
Date: 17 Sep 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
thinking he might want e to head the family
Date: 17 Sep 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
Lol!!! LOL!!! THAT is too funny. Loved it. I am just hoping that Edward and his family did not have anything to do with Bella's mom'said death.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 27
Is Charlie the missing son of that other family? And he doesn't know it. Love the story.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
I don't like Julia. She couldn't be a real friend to Bella....
Date: 17 Sep 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
She's seeing a geneticist? Could she be looking for a relative? I hope she didn't mean her life would be over in 2 years. She'll be 21 then. Maybe it's something that she needs to do before she becomes an adult? You've got me here....
Date: 17 Sep 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm dying to know her secret. It's interesting that he told her so much about himself without telling her THE thing...
Date: 17 Sep 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh no. Does this mean she's really sick or is it something else?
Date: 17 Sep 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
Are you hinting that something might go wrong on the trip home? It could only be Royce....
Date: 17 Sep 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
This has to be one of my favorite, ever Jacobs! Royce is a total slimeball. Someone needs to teach him a lesson!
Date: 17 Sep 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
I vote that Edward cockblocking Alice and Jasper was more comical...
Date: 17 Sep 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am thinking that Aro sees the restraint and calculation in Edward. Always looking for angles and reading between the lines. I say that Aro will allow Matt to get to the wedding but tear the rug out from under him and hand it all to Edward. This will prove that he only wanted Heidi for the position. He is still a father after all. But I think that Edward will come up with evidence before that which will tip the decision for Aro.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
Even though Alice is a spoiled brat I just hope she does not get hurt.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
OOk between Edward and the guys about shit a brick when they got pulled over with that much cociane on the car.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am not sure about Aro. I wish Royce and his family would screw up somehow.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
Sorry, but bratty Alice is such a cliche. I hope she changes and gains more depth. Edward is playing a dangerous game here. I know he clearly likes Bella, but must also satisfy his "family". This could be tricky...
Date: 17 Sep 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bad idea. Alice isn't calm enough for the job. I also think someone broke their taillight on purpose to set them up to be busted....
Date: 17 Sep 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think Aro is up to something with regards to Edward. Not sure if it is good or bad. My guess would be bad.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can't wait to find out what Aro is up to. Royce is truly a asshole.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yes Edward is fucked. Lol. He is just now figuring that out. Boy he is slow. Lol
Date: 17 Sep 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 17 Sep 2015 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope you have a plan. Because I just don't see how Edward and Bella are going to be together.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am kind of thinking that Edward is thinking with his heart at the moment.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward is in so much trouble. Lol
Date: 17 Sep 2015 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Aro does not get upset with Edward. Love how flamboyantJake is. Lol
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
I think Edward is screwed. Lol
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really hope the King family does not get to take over. I hope Matt does something to screw up his chance with Heidi.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
A gay Jake....lol. Glad Edward did not flip over Jake.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for showing us why Edward is in charge of the family and not Carlisle.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
Aro is always the bad guy. I want Edward and Bella together yesterday!! Ilove this story,I can't wait for more. Love Ya!
Date: 17 Sep 2015 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think Aro has figured out that Matt is not in love with his daughter I hope
Date: 17 Sep 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
She has him right by the balls and she doesnt even know it lol
Date: 17 Sep 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
wonder what the relevance to her always being off to the side is
Date: 17 Sep 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
He will never be able to get over Bella and he knows it.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
He is in deep already
Date: 17 Sep 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Jake and Jasper to funny lol
Date: 17 Sep 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'M REALLY HOPING HIS A GOOD GUY.....
Date: 17 Sep 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
IDK. Seems like Aro is a bad guy, but who knows. The Kings are bad! They need to go!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
Rut Ro! Something is about to go down....
Date: 17 Sep 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
We already knew that, didn't we? The question is....will he stay and try to fix things his way or leave the family. We all know how the second way works out for most....
Date: 17 Sep 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
no. no, he won't. there has to be a way....
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
He's thinking with his smaller head, that's what he's doing! I think he pictures Bella in his dreams of home and family.....
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Edward we could have told you that 5 chapters ago! She has you hook, line, & sinker!
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
That's hilarious! I want to see Jasper and Jake strip!! Seems Edward is going for Bella despite Aro's objections. Wonder what will happen?
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
I DO love Jake! He's a hoot! So Edward is still trying to get dirt on Bella, is he? Seems like he is being friendlier to her than that!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
Charlie needs to die or Aro & the Kings need to die. Problem solved. Haha!
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
I think Edward will do what he wants to do, no matter what, and that Aro and Royce's days are numbered. At least I hope they are....
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think if Bella goes home with him he won't want her to ever go home!
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well he knows NOW! I say he should just take Aro out and become the head of everything, then he can do what he wants!
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
I do like gay Jake! He seems to like Edward better than Bella! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
How are they going to get this past Aro?
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
No! That can't be it already. :( I read too fast. Damn. Pleas mass post soon. Thanks.
Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
Does Edward not know that Bella is Jasper's sister??
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
He told vickie like it was!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
I think Edward can use the excuse of keeping your friends close & your enemies even closer.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Is Edward going to be fuming mad about Bella now?
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2015 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
It puts a smile on my face when I see four updates in one day!
Date: 16 Sep 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm loving this so much. Sorry I'm not reviewing every chapter, I just get caught up in the story. It's great!
Date: 16 Sep 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm loving this story so far. You're updating quickly, but I hope it all goes up soon since it's already finished. I'm already hooked. :D
Date: 16 Sep 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is showing he is territoral lol
Date: 16 Sep 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Royce is a creep and Aro knows it. Edward better be careful but he wont be able to not see her
Date: 16 Sep 2015 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love this story thus far. Perhaps aro will hand the reigns to
edward rather than Heidi if she marries Matt...
i also appreciate how quickly you update,
instead of having to wait some indefinite amount
of time. It makes the story all the more enjoyable.
Hate all of the incomplete stories having to wait months, years
for an update. Thank you and plz, keep up the great work!
Date: 16 Sep 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
The cat is out of the bag now what is he going to do.
Date: 16 Sep 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love a gay Jake to cute lol
Date: 16 Sep 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
He trying to be a good big brother
Date: 16 Sep 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my God, stripping for the chief, that is the best take on that scene I have ever heard! That is some funny shit.
Date: 16 Sep 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
I do love this Jake!