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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

hmmm . . . interesting indeed. also seems like their relationship with charlie is good so not sure how a relationship will work out

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

liking jake

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

Alice just spoke the truth & neither of them know it yet!  I love this Bella & Edward.  I was expecting her to be more innocent but I'm so glad she has a bit of fight & spunk to her. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

Alice is going to go berserk over the double standard!  I love this first meeting!  It's new and refreshing!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

So they aren't related.... Jenks's food order made me nauseous!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 4

Is Jasper & Bella from Arthur's family?  If so everything is about to get crazy!

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

Heh Heh

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

And they're off......

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Alice

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

yepper. Rough going I think.

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

Ruh Roh Raggy! This is gonna be interesting.

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

Yeeeaaaahhh, Jasper certainly is dreamy.

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

So far Imma liking it.

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

Good start. Lots of interesting plots moving.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

So Edward has forgot about Bella already

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

Haha...way to go Alice

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

love it

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

yeah, she is and she has a point! What is fair for Alice is fair for Edward! Bella is just as much a cop's daughter as Jasper is a cop's son!  That was a lively chapter!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

Alice knows who Bella is

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

LOVING THIS!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

loving this

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

He did not pay attention  to her name ops

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 5

Jenks is full of info it has to make Edward sad to tell Alice no

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 4

Aro is creepy he knows all

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

I am glad Edward is standing behind Emmett

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it 😍

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

Lol. Have to laugh at Alice  cockblocking Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

DDid he not look at her whole name on her paperwork.  Boy is he going to be surprised. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

I am wondering if Jasper is spying for Charlie.  Is Edward the head of his family in the Mafia? What about his father? Where is he, why is his father not telling Alice what to do.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well that was an unusual dinner.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 3

Very interesting.  Hope Aro will be on Emmett 's side. Can't wait to find out what Jasper's deal is. He kind of makes me laugh. He does not seem bothered by Edward  at all. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is getting really interesting.  Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 6

I think he doesn't know her last name is Swan yet.  OOh Alice is going to get him on this one!  If she can't date Jasper, there's no way she's going to be quiet when Edward realizes he wants Bella....can't wait to see how this plays out!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

I think Edward just may change his mind about the Swans once he meets Bella...Jenks will die young if he keeps eating like that....j/s

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

ooh. More power for the Kings. That can't be good! I wonder how Aro knew of Emmett dating Rosalie? and before his own parents knew? It does look like difficult times lie ahead.....

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

Jasper only has eyes for Alice

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

I cant wait to catch up

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 6

he's going to be pissed when he finds out who she is

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

interesting

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting new story 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

well I wansn't TOO far off...not a rival family member, but the ex of a friendly, within the Mafia family member. Does the Mafia not care if a man beats and rapes his own wife? Guess not...still I hope for the best for Rose and Emmett....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Is Emmett seeing someone from a rival family? Someone older? someone younger? That's all I got....Jasper Whitlock Swan, huh? Brother to Isabella. Now I know how Edward and Bella will meet....thanks for posting even through a family illness....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am wondering how we will be meeting Bella? Will she be in a sexy workout get up?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love that Jasper didn't heed any of edward's warnings!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

seems like it wont go over very well

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Maybe Mike can work for Are as a cook?
Sounds like the Masen Family is part of a much larger organization.
Why is Emmett worried that his family won't like his girlfriend? Is she part of the police force or something?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

okay.. here we go.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love everything you guys write.Your so talented, thanks for writing and sharing with us.LOVE YA!

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love me some mafiaward. Sending out good vibes to Kasi's daughter hope all turns out well.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

good

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

I can tell already it is going to be a good one!!! I am hoping that Bella will be kick ass and give Edward a run for his money!!!! lol

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to following along... 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

ooh, so Edward is not a good guy in this story....ok. I wonder who Emmett is dating that he thinks the family won't like.  Isn't Mike Newton ALWAYS a wuss? LOL...

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope your daughter is ok! Your stories are always amazing & worth the wait!  I can't wait to see where this story goes!  The banner is awesome! 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Il est le bon début.

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start, cant wait to read the rest  

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Badass, Mafia-connected Edward, what's not to like? I do wonder, though, why Emmett is worried about his family's acceptance of his new girlfriend? Holding  good thoughts for Kasi's daughter!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) looking forward to reading this 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Reads like it is going to be good

Reviewer: dnmann Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks good chapter 

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