Date: 24 Feb 2016 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 33
Like that they're talking finally, but i still think Bella is taking too much blame for how things are now. If anyone would just talk to her, she wouldn't fly off the handle so much. I think Edward is making a big mistake not telling Bella about Jacob. Everytime he tries to keep her in the dark, it always comes back to bite him in the ass later.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 33
Amazing chapter!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 33
I'm so glad they are working together, talking not screaming. I know Edward doesn't want to scare her but I think telling her about Jacob would be better.
Date: 24 Feb 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 33
Good chapter, Thank you.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 33
WOW! That was huge for them! ;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 33
Crap more issues & the dog is dead!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 32
Sleeping pills all around!
Date: 23 Feb 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella might be growing up and realize this is not a game.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 33
I hope she listens to Edward on the important stuff but still gives him a little attitude on the small things.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 33
Glad they are talking about things. Hopefully Carlisle doesn't open his big mouth and ruin the progress they've made.
Date: 23 Feb 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 33
She has grown up over night. Edward loves her so much when is he going to tell her he has watched her for years.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2016 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
POOR ISABELLA AND ALL THE PROBLEMS SHE GOTS
Date: 23 Feb 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
So sad! :( I can't wait for Edward to kick the shit out of James!!
Date: 23 Feb 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 23 Feb 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 32
If they weren't trying to pry into Bella and Edward's personal life, how would anyone ever know it wasn't consummated? I'm sure everyone would just assume they did have sex since they have been married for a bit. Thanks for writing. I can't wait for the next update.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 23 Feb 2016 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 32
Bella is growing up she is taking responsibiliy for things this is new love it.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 32
I agree with li-spar1.....Bella should play nice since Carlisle is still in charge. But once Edward takes over from him, then all bets are off. As for James, i hope he dies a slow and painful death for thinking that he can come after Bella and for kill poor Princess.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 32
Poor, poor Princess. Sad that Bella had to lose something else in her life. Edward really does need a slap upside his head. His first thought should have been to comfort Bella. She needed him and he again put her needs behind his own need for revenge. I know alot of people are hoping now Bella will behave, but she wasn't the only one in the wrong. I don't want her to take the blame for this Edward and his entire family all had a hand to play in it. Carlise can just shove his half assed apology up his ass. He's just as bad as Bella's sister. All he cares about is getting NY and Edward's claim to things. I hope Bella hands him his ass if tries to come to her like it's all in the past. Edward has alot to make up for. I have a feeling Marcus and Bella will be closer now. I have a feeling there is another rat in the family somehow. Unless Garrett bugged that hotel room. I don't see how he knew about Jacob.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 32
I am sad the doggie did not make it. But I am happy that Bella stopped Edward from killing Marcus.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
When I read reviews for stories, I am continually amazed at how much slack the readers cut Bella even when she is clearly an asshole in a story. Yet every little thing that Edward does gets slammed far worse. "Oh he shouldn't have left her that way!" Lol It's total bullshit! Sometimes walking away is best. It keeps heads from getting cracked open in the heat of passion. Lol Honestly, if i were him, I would have had that marriage annulled no matter what anyone had to say. She has done nothing but make these already horrible situations worse. Everything has to be her way all the time, and as much as I hate the fact that her dog died, I'm glad that it happened because she needs to learn that her actions have consequences. Poor Marcus could have been killed, because she couldn't improvise and roll up some toilet paper and use it as a pad like other people do when they are without. People are trying to kill you but you don't keep the gun you were given nearby. LoL
I really hope that she gets a fucking clue before someone else dies trying to protect her. Your writing is awesome by the way. Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 32
I have a feeling there's going to be more twists and turns in this story to come and I can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
Love love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 32
I am sad for Bella's puppy!
I hope that James is going to pay for that.
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 31
Well, that was exciting!
Date: 22 Feb 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 32
I'm sorry but Carlisle is an asshat. He doesn't care whether Bella wants to have sex with Edward or not he just wants New York just like Garrett. If I was Bella there is no way I could ever be a big happy family with him or his wife for that matter. I would be polite but never be more. I hope Edward doesn't just expect her to fall into bed with him all the time now after the way he left her before. He has a lot of making up to do. He has the relationship consimated she gave him that now make him actually work for her love and her body.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 32
unfortunate indeed. He still could have done it a different way. Poor B.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 31
Love it can't for more
Date: 22 Feb 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 31
I get the dog is important but jeez woman.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 31
Looks like she is going to carlisle's house. That is not going to be fun at all!
Date: 21 Feb 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 31
She is soooo stupid!
Date: 21 Feb 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 31
Bella needs to listen to Edward and stop being a brat.
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 31
Pauvre Bella, je l'espère, que la princess ne va pas mourir.
Je vous remercie.
Date: 20 Feb 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
So I may have underestimated Garrett. Bella has a lot of fight in her. I never would have left my dog either. I'm guessing Marcus got the call from Emmett to move Bella while at the store and hauled ass to get back. Edward is going to flip, but I hope he at least praises her for how hard she fought. This could be the moment of truth between them. There is a war coming. The Cullen's need to be united.
Date: 20 Feb 2016 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 31
well she was very stupid i hope the dog does not pay for her actions, but it will not live long if she does not grow up fast
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 31
Thank you for the update..thank god for Marcus
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope Princess is alright
Date: 19 Feb 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 31
glad marcus got there in time. can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 31
This is what happens when you spoil your children to this point... LOL! They become very bad adults. Oh well, hope she grows up before she gets herself and others killed by acting like a brat.
Date: 19 Feb 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 31
Poor puppy. Bella put up a good fight. Edward has to be freaking out now he is coming home to take care of James and check and love on Bella??????
Date: 19 Feb 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 31
OMG!!! Amazing chapter! I don't know how I am going to wait for the next one!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2016 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 31
Edward should have at least talked to Bella :( (I know he has a lot on his plate) He should be proud how well she did against James at least.
Date: 19 Feb 2016 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 19 Feb 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 31
Edward is going to be so pissed that Marcus left her alone. I hope Princess is ok.
Date: 19 Feb 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow, Garrett and Kate are a piece of work. I hope Bella listens to Edward.
Date: 19 Feb 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
Edward loves Bella!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
I wish he would call her.
Date: 19 Feb 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 30
How could her sister do that to her. Garrett is going to die right along with Kate. Edward loves Bella and is so worried about her
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 30
oh with the teaser of 31 I don't have a good feeling. About who is at the door.
Now I also feel bad for Marcus having to take Bella back To Edward's parents he may be better off with dealing with Garret's men.
Date: 19 Feb 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 19 Feb 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 30
Liked the Edward point of view.
Date: 19 Feb 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh for the love of Sweet Baby Jesus!! I don't see Isabella handling that very well!! I can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 18 Feb 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh hell she's not going to be happy especially after the way he left. He is going to come back to a ticking time bomb known as his wife.
Date: 18 Feb 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
I love strong Edwards
Date: 18 Feb 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 30
wow Kate has a death wish along with Garrett. Stupid move not calling himself. He's digging himself a much bigger hole to jump out of. I can only imagine the crap Carlisle will pull once she's back under his roof.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 30
love this story please update soon
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 30
Great update
Date: 18 Feb 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 30
Bella's sister is a bitch. That is just wrong to feel that way about your own sister. Especially when she has not done anything to you. I hope Bella listens to Marcus and goes with him without a fight. I want to know if Garrett helped the Russian kill Bella's parents. That would just be sick if he helped with his in laws death.
Date: 18 Feb 2016 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 29
good for Edward LOLOLOLOLO
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2016 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 29
Thank you for this good chapter.
Date: 18 Feb 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
Love it. I think bella has right to feel the she feels right now but she could've handle it a lot better. Anyway now that she with Marcus maybe she could have him train her how to defend herself.
Date: 18 Feb 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 18 Feb 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 29
What to do with these two! Both can be so annoying. I can completely understand Bella not wanting to be there. She went about it in the wrong way though I'm pretty sure it was just an idle threat. She was embarrassed by her actions that day, but she knew it would get a response. Edward on the other hand should know by now that Bella does better when he takes the time to explain things to her. I'm guessing she doesn't have a phone because of Kate contacting her last time. It will be interesting to see how she handles being left with Marcus. Hopefully Edward checks in with her soon. Esme and Carllise can both just step off. Both are beyond redemption to me. I'm telling you 2000 miles is good distance apart. hope Bella doesn't move back into that house. I would never give them the satisfaction. Can't wait to see share this goes next.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 29
I wouldn't have wanted to stay in the house with the 2 of them either. Edward could cut her some slack I mean she did give up her virginity so he wouldn't get into trouble and to just leave like that was not cool.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Balla's right for telling Esme off. She broke what little trust there might have been between them. Edward could have atleast kissed her before he left. Who knows what will happen when he gets to N.Y.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'm glad she isn't there too.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 29
She could have went about it another way but I wouldn't want to stay with his parents either.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
love it she got what she whated and she still anit happy lol love it
Date: 17 Feb 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ok, some how I missed this chapter. I saw on another review that they had had sex. I knew I had missed something.
I am glad that Bella enjoyed her 1st time.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 29
Well bratty Bella is back. Marcus is right, Edward has a lot on his mind. Why does Bella not have her phone? What if something were to happen and she needed to call Edward or someone .
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2016 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 29
She did behave like a child....
Date: 17 Feb 2016 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 29
Why can't Edward try to be a little understanding? He is the older one that is supposed to be the more mature one. Can't he see why she wouldn't want to be around his parents? Esme betrayed her trust and his dad insisted he take her virginity...discussed it in front of everyone. Then Edward has sex with her for the first time and just is going to leave her with those people and not give her any emotional support. I'm so disappointed in Edward this time.
I love this story and can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2016 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 29
First thing in a marriage never walk away mad. You never know what can happen.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 29
She has a lot of growing up to do she will learn
Date: 15 Feb 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
Not too sure how I feel about this one. Her first time was nice enough, but there is no way in Hell I would have had sex in that house with some bastard listening at the door and a demand to see the sheets. Hope Edward and Bella do move to NY. 2000 miles away from the inlaws sounds perfect to me.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 28
this was great, but u also shocked me with your Bella, great story