Date: 18 Dec 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
fin... seriously well that sucks
guess you just got tired of it but for a loyal fan I am totally dissappointed
There's a third installment that will begin posting on Wednesday. I did not get tired. I just broke up the story. It was in the authors note at the beginning.
Date: 17 Dec 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 20
Fin??? That means the end. This can't be the end of the story! I understand her fears of being found out and labeled a deviant. I do. There has to be another way to salvage this lovely relationship. People can be so narrow....
Date: 17 Dec 2015 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
Aro and his Brother's will see a decrease in Bella's enthusiasm for life. But, it won't affect the quality of work she accomplishes. It will however cause them to ask her to take some time off to regroup and figure out how to move forward.
Date: 16 Dec 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well damn, I saw that coming. James is massive clingy little douche of a man who has to make someone else suffer for his mistakes. I'm hoping the third part of this tale involves the trio kicking ass and taking names...together. Love all your stories but this chapter got me all choked up. Damn holiday hormones.
Date: 13 Dec 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hopefully the boys can talk Bella into seeing that there's nothing wrong with their relationship and that she has done nothing wrong! They may need to get Esme to talk to her. Poor Bella! She's finally happy and then wham! I can understand why she's upset and understandably worried about her career. Even Aro saw nothing wrong with her relationship as a consenting adult. My heart goes out to Bella! I can't wait for the next chapter.
I hope you and your family have a very Marry Christmas and a safe and Happy New Year!
Date: 13 Dec 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah, well...y'know, the witch of the West did threaten the dog, too!! 😉
I I hope the boys are able to talk her down. Especially Edward. They're going to be pretty well heartbroken. James deserves FAR more than he got, but I am very glad that Aro is a fair and considerate boss.
Date: 13 Dec 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my. Thought James would try to directly blackmail her not go to her clients. Sadly I'm not sure if the cops got all the copies of the videos. James may have stashed them somewhere too. Sigh for her wanting to give up both guys now. Sad
Date: 13 Dec 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can see why Bella would do this. She's scared and feels like if this got out people would judge. However, what Aro said is correct. It was something done by consenting adults and was a private affair. Or at least should have been. I hated Carmen at the beginning!! Hated her. I don't care if the Devil himself is representing me I want the best lawyer in order to keep my son. Her reactions were not only irelavent to the case but none of her business. I understand her caution and worry since they were in fact sent to her but that's it. She could have put her son's life in jeopardy over something that didn't have anything to do with her adoption. I don't think Bella is thinking clearly. Poor guys.
Date: 10 Dec 2015 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Whatever it is, it's good. He didn't say office or coffee shop. He knows after she finds out she won't want to goo home.she will be able to stay at his place until the cops find all of the cameras. James is such a dumb sleazy creep. I hope he gets locked up for this.
Date: 09 Dec 2015 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
My guess is that James got A weeks worth of lemony goodness and is either posting it online already --- or threatening to expose Bella and her unconventional relationship together by sending it to her boss maybe even trying to get her fired make her lose everything like he did
Date: 04 Dec 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Please don't take this the wrong way because I absolutely love, love, love your stories especially this one BUT in case you are thinking of publishing later I have a recommendation. James is a douche and idiot. He is not a good person at all. I know this but he seemed so unhinge and crazy when he blamed Bella for his demise EARLIER. If you ever publish have him go crazy after he sees her with Edward and Garrett. See, he's so delusional and wants to spy on Bella and puts the cameras in because he's a creep. He wants to win her over and assumed she would be waiting for him. Who wouldnt? When he sees how hard working she is he remembers why he stayed with her for so long. She's the perfect girl for him. He starts to get angry because she won't answer any of his failed attempts to talk to her since they met. He starts to get angry and then loses it when he sees her with two guys at the same time. This is what drives him into madness. How dare she move on and with two much younger, much more handsome, well off men. This is when he flips everything and it's no longer love but hate he feels towards her. He starts to blame her.
To me this would make more sense. Just saying. I love it either way. Also, I'm not a writer so my opinion doesn't matter. Thank you for sharing. I can't wait for the next one!!! I already know it will be hot!! Like fan worthy. Get it Bella!!
Date: 03 Dec 2015 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh why, why must you have james get the upper hand (with the cameras)
on the threesome...so unfair...he is obviously completely
insane to believe bella had anything to do with his demise...
it was all on him...please, don't allow james to have any real
control over them/bella...not even for one min.
ps. fire the security guy and the girl who allowed james up to bella's place.
no matter the circumstance, the story, they should never have allowed that.
Date: 03 Dec 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm gonna be upset if they accidentally film a porno for that creep James to show everyone and put on the internet. They hopefully will spot the cameras before anything happens or I am gonna have to bail. This is touching on my rape/forced humiliation trigger. :(
Date: 29 Nov 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
James is a sick and twisted asshole! I am so worried for Bella and what all James will get on his cameras. I hope and pray that the Volturi love Bella enough to get past whatever James throws out to ruin Bella! I can't wait for the next chapter!