Date: 03 Apr 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Esme needs her ass kicked
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
i knew there was more to Bella then what Mike and Esme were saying about her....I think Alice stole from the store that they said Bella did it...i think alice is trying hard to get her mother or families attention.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love this story, can't wait for more. :)
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can I just ssy I hate waiting for chapters. Fortunately I can pretend to be patient; but please hurry.
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
Gotta say, this Esme takes some getting used to.....then I want to bitch slap her to breakfast and back.
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
I just knew if he gave it enough time, the truth would come out! I also feel there is more to be revealed!
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
Excuse me for just a second, while I slap the shit out of his mother! What a horrible person to do that, and in front of Jenny, too! After I take care of that, then I need to kick Mike, right where it would hurt him the most! I'm still in the dark as to why everyone hates this girl so much!
Date: 12 Mar 2016 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love it!!!! Update soon..:-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2016 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
Finally maybe he will start seeing alice's issues.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2016 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I can't wait to see what bella wears to paint in. I'm guessing that's when he will realuze there is an attraction to her.
Date: 02 Mar 2016 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great, story so far...keep it coming!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
Interesting storyline
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2016 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
loved it - let's keep it moving like this.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Aro's plan to have Edward really see Bella, seems to be working. His subtle warning about sisters and familys is sinking in, too. I'm glad Edward has finally begun to question what he thinks he knows about Bella!
Date: 01 Mar 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
Don't tell me Edward might just be rethinking his opinion of Bella? He's a smart guy, he ought to realize a child's radar is pretty accurate and Jennifer would be so attatched to Bella if she was truly a bad person!It was cute that the brother and sister kittens both came home with Jen!
Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
I loved it! I'm can't wait for when they all find out that Bella is keeping Alice as safe as she can.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward does need to open his eyes. He may be surprised.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella made Edward think about his attitude and gave him a new insight, I'm glad they're trying for a friendship of sorts. Maybe Aro's advice about Alice and his fondness of Bella will make Edward think some more. Jenny will be so happy when she finds out that Bella is going to paint her room.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love Love Love thanks for the double I thought my eyes where playing tricks on me lol. I hope he pays attentioin to what Aro says.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
Now Edward is getting to see the real Bella. Is Jenny going to rat Alice out because Bella keeps taking the fall for her.?
Date: 01 Mar 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved the double update. Glad Edward is giving Bella another chance.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love that Edward is turning a blind eye to their meeting in the garden. He knows deep down that Bella is not a bad person.
Date: 01 Mar 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Login the story. How many chapters do you think there will be?
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2016 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh, I can't wait until the next update, I need to see what happens & that Edward finds out Bella isn't that bad at all & Alice is trouble.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2016 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
Interesting storyline, keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like it so far
Date: 18 Feb 2016 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wonderful story!
Date: 17 Feb 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
Such a great end to this chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward will be asking for forgiveness VERY soon!
Date: 16 Feb 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
How can Edward not see that he doesn't have the whole story of Bella? He needs to talk to Alice.
Date: 16 Feb 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella & Jenny need to tell Edward the truth about Alice.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow. More please.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
Gosh, Edward is so slow. It's infuriating how he doubts Bella on every turn, but doesn't question why Jen won't speak to Alice anymore or why she's uncomfortable with her grandmother, why Aro is trying to protect Bella. He should feel bad, too, that she was beaten up in jail - his responsability! Bella is still his advocate with his daughter despite his abysmal behaviour, if that doesn't make hm reassess he's hopeless.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm hooked!
Date: 15 Feb 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
So many secrets. Can'twait for more.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
He ought to feel confused, since things are not at all what he thinks they are! I hope Bella isn't hurt as bad as it seems from the way she moves! That little conversation he overheard was kind of revealing, if he stops to ponder what was said.
Date: 14 Feb 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
Jenny needs to let him know what happened and Edward will have to figure out how he feels.
Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
What has happened to Bella, I knew they were judging her before they knew the truth.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
I feel so bad for everyone in this fic. Yeah, I'm pissed as hell at Edward's parents, Mike Edward and practically the whole damb town except for aro, maybe... Know one else has any sense.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
Jenny will hopefully start signing when she sees Bella is back.
Date: 08 Feb 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward needs to open his eyes and Bella needs to start telling the truth. She isn't helping anyone by taking the blame.
Date: 07 Feb 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella! Poor Jenny! Poor Alice! Can't wait for more.
Date: 07 Feb 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Dear WeeandJess.....You just made me cry. Edward is a d**k and Alice is a shitty friend. I know Jenny will be happy that Bella's back home....The end.
P.S.
I love and read anything you guys write.
Date: 07 Feb 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow! Very good writing job . I think it is going to take some work to get through to her . She is pretty damaged .
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ugh I don't see why she's covering for Alice and I Don't see why Alice isn't coming forward and manning up and taking responsibility for what she did! Plus Renee is a real piece of work god she seems like a bitch!
Date: 07 Feb 2016 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is such an idiot. He's always asking the wrong questions and listens to the wrong people - no wonder his daughter is unhappy with him. He's not even surprised Bella was beaten up. I hope Judge Aro gave him something to think about. Where did Alice hide her pathetic self?
Date: 07 Feb 2016 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
Makes me want to cry. Aro is the only one that sees the good in her.
Date: 07 Feb 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella seriously needs to stay away from Alice. She's a horrible friend
Date: 07 Feb 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
What happened to Bella in jail? Glad Aro has not written Bella off. Hope Edward finds out some details on Bella.
Date: 07 Feb 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
One way to make up for the long wait is to post again ahead of schedule. :) Really love the story!
Date: 07 Feb 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
I think Edward cannot see the forest from the trees. He is snowed by Alice, Esme & Mike. Sue & Jennifer know the truth but Edward won't see, talk or listen.
sad
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella. At least Aro sees the good in her
Date: 06 Feb 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm beginning to get a bit pissed at Edward. He's letting himself get carried away, judging Bella, and I'm positive she is better than he thinks she is! Renee is a phony and I'm not very sympathetic to his mother's attitude, either!
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love it, can't wait for more. I feel so bad for Bella.
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella needs to tell the truth. Alice needs to realize she has a problem and how dare she call herself Bella's friend. She is a horrible friend.
Date: 18 Jan 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
I had a feeling Bella was covering for Alice. I hope Jenny tells Edward the truth
Date: 16 Jan 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
knew it. although Alice needs help. she won't get better if Bella keeps bailing her out.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh, I knew it. Bella is taking care of everyone around her while there in noone looking out for her. Maybe it would have been an eye-opener for Alice's family if she had to spend the weekend in jail. I'm so, so angry with Alice. Manic depression or not - she lets Bella ruin her life because she is too cowardly to own up to her crime. I'm sisappointed in Edward, too. By now he must know that something is terribly wrong with the family-dynamics at the Cullens.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
I knew it had to be something like this, and not be Bella's fault. I hope to hell she makes it through the weekend without being too hurt by that Joy bitch! Now I'll just worry until the next update!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hope somebody tells Edward the truth
Date: 16 Jan 2016 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
I just knew Bella was a pretty good person, but lying for Alice is not helping her situation....Sometime it takes tuff love for them to learn and get help....And its hard, I just was put in a similar situation with my son and I can say he is much better now.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow! This storyline just keepso getting better and better !
Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
Jenny is not going to do well with this when is Alice going to get busted and find out who she is.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
This is really bad! I hope Bella can beat the crap out of joy! Maybe Jenny will speak to help Bella!
Date: 16 Jan 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
I knew it's Alice! Why is Edward being so blind? Aargh
Date: 16 Jan 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMGosh! I knew she was covering for Alice . I hope Bella talks to Edward about Alice. Can't wait to get more information on Bella's background.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
It was Alice, obviously.
Date: 13 Jan 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella covers for everyone she cares about. The truth needs to come out soon.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2016 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my goodness how can he be so stupid to not realize Alice was the one shoplifting!
Date: 11 Jan 2016 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
How can Edward be so stupid to believe Bella was the one stealing and Alice be so selfish to let her friend get arrested instead? I bet she told Jennifer not to tell Edward. Can't say it enough: I hate Esme and Mike for their bias.
Date: 11 Jan 2016 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is an idiot! Bella is obviously covering for Alice.
this story is different from your others.....intrigued
Date: 10 Jan 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
i am willing to bet it was Jenny...or Alice. probably Alice. Bella is just trying to cover for them.
Date: 10 Jan 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
I don't think it was Bella that was stealing. I really like this story - keep up the good work!
Date: 10 Jan 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hi there,
I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story!
And I'm really sorry that until now I was too lazy to write a comment ... shame on me.
I'm really annoyed right now because Alice doesn't have the balls to tell everybody that SHE is the one who does all this shit (sorry for the word) and that Bella is just trying to protect her.
My only hope is, that Jennifer spills everything to Edward that Bella was not the one who stole anything ...
I really do hope for the story to make a turn now because I really can't bear it anymore.
Sorry.
Looking forward to you next chapter ;-)
Greetings from Germany,
leinchen
Date: 10 Jan 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Alice is the one that did it and Bella is taking the blame. Alice needs to come clean
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Aww, that's sad, probably a misunderstanding.
Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Seems as if judgemental may be inherited, since he just assumes Bella did it! My money is on some other explanation!Jenny tried to tell him as wellas Alice, but Bella is taking the fall for the theft!
Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well, Bella did not steal. It was either Alice or Jenny and Bella is covering for them.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
I don't believe Bella did it
Date: 09 Jan 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
I don't think Bella stole anything....maybe Alice or Jenny had something in their hand or forgot to pay and Bella is taking the blame..Lets face it everyone is down on Bella without really knowing her or finding out what happened in her life...I feel sorry for Bella, she is hurting from something that happened to her in the past
Date: 09 Jan 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait to find out what Bella's story is and why she acts like a tuff girl. Thanks for all the updates.
Date: 09 Jan 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am concerned that Jenny does not want to stay with Esme. Why? Is it because Esme and Alice were fighting.? Is something going on with Esme?
Date: 09 Jan 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
I meant to ask in the other chapter, who was the guy who parked in the handicap space.
Date: 09 Jan 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Who are the 2 guys with Bella?
Date: 08 Jan 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
Esme seems a little crazy and Alice is immature and not responsible. Bella seems the most mature of the 3. She is passionate about her believes. I do hate the smoking though. She is too smart to have such a bad habit.
Date: 05 Jan 2016 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
She is just misunderstood, where are her parents or family..
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2016 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
Things are looking up. Ms. Denali needs a good punch to the face!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder why she can't stay with Bella?....
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2016 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
She is so smart to fake being drunk so Alice can get away.
Date: 03 Jan 2016 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
.... or the other way 'round.
Date: 03 Jan 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
Esme needs to get a grip on all the shouting and bad-mouthing, no wonder little Jen does not want to be in her company. The way she behaved at the police-station - her son's work-place - was more than embarrassing. Who's causing a scene now?
Date: 03 Jan 2016 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love the story I hope u keep the signing it adds so much to the story
Date: 03 Jan 2016 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Could it be Alice was feeling a little rebellious - I would with parents like hers - and called Bella to the rescue? I wonder why Edward didn't ask any questions.