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Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 6

Junping to conclusions seems to be a Cullen-family-trait.

Reviewer: N1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

loving this story so far, looking forward to the updates:)

Reviewer: Laura Elizabeth Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 9

It's sad that we often see what we want to see and not whats real. Thanks for the reminder to look beyond. Really would like to hear Bellas POV.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

Maybe she can save you just the same loving this story and thanks for the treat

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

She is blamed for all things so sad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

She didnt take Alice there she was getting her out she gets in trouble for trying to get others out of trouble

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

Not everything is what you think it is Bella has to have her reasons

Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 9

I love it. I was so excited to get four chapters today, lol! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 9

Come on, Edward, maybe this girls doesn't have quite as many errors in her ways as you seem to think! I'm kind of starting to like her !

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

Clearly Esme is the one at fault here, not Bella. She has upset Jennifer so much she wants to be anywhere but there. Things seem to be coming to a head pretty soon and I just hope blame gets assigned where it truly belongs!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

What are the odds of Bella not being involved in this whole mess, beyond trying to help Alice, that is? Bella is trying too hard to project this bad girl image and I'm not buying it so much anymore! She keeps letting her good side show too often !

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

Keep in mind, D-ward, it only seems to be true! Bella's heart is in the right place, she just needs a bit of anger management, to learn to pick her battles. Someone like that arrogant jerk who parked in the handicap spots would hurt her if he got a chance!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

I can't wait to see how Bella gets her to talk! I'm guessing they are going to have an amazing connection! I am wondering if Edward will ever have a love connection with Bella in this story? 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

Bella calling him a douche is so bold and then to sign "D" to Jennifer is even worse. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

I hope Bella is just getting a bad rap.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

I LOVE BELLA!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

This Edward is going to make s swoon!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

It's hard to become a father to an 8 year old.  It is not gradual like a baby.  He will learn. 

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

only just found this - its great

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

I like that Tia wants to involve Edward so much in Jen's therapy.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

Edward is a douche. I assume the joint is a cigarette and a teenage-girl spending time with a boy is not unheard of.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 5

Jennifer knows Bella is a good person.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

What is her story I need to know lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

I hope Edward and Jennifer both get help.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait to find out more of Bella past and why she acts the way she does.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

So far it seems they all dislike Bella, but I have yet seen her do anything bad, just because she smokes and swears does not make you a bad person and till I see her do something that warrants me to not trust her then she is aoright in my book so far.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

New territory ahead for both Edward and Jennifer. It was interesting that Jen named Bella as her only new friend. Tia seems to be a good fit as their new therapist. See you next time!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

I see Bella doesn't suffer fools gladly, which I kind of like! She has judged Edward, just as he has judged her. It will be interesting to see if they change their opinions of each other. The way she is around Jen and Alice makes me think there is a lot more to this girl than she shows the world.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

I hope Jen is going to be okay at school, but won't hold my breath. As for Alice's friend, Bella, I will bet money that she isn't what everyone assumes. There is usually a story attached to behavior like hers, kind of like there is with Jennifer.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

As usual, Emmett is a teddybear masquerading as a giant! He's pretty much a big-hearted loud, caring guy, and fairly sensitive from the sounds of it. Alice seems to be the only champion of Bella, who I can't wait to hear about! Jen is doing real well meeting all these new people which should make Edward happy.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

It breaks your heart to read about a child in the place this one is. It's wonderful that this man has fallen for her and adopted her. I think I already love that about him!Can't wait to see how it goes with the rest of his family!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

He's being very judgmental 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

Like so far can not wait to read more .

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

I have  a  feeling  that  Bella  is not  exactly  what  Esme thinks  she  is .   And Tanya  is the  teacher ?   Bad sign!  Great storyline  so far.  Love the inclusion  of  the  horses.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

There's more to Bella than we know. She can't be that bad. Alice might be good for her to be around. 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

Don't know about this Esme

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for the conversation between Edward and Bella

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for the update.  Love the interaction with Edward and Jen. Can't wait to see more of Bella and Jennifer together. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

THEY ARE JUDGING BELLA WITHOUT REALLY KNOWING HER....JUST BECAUSE HER MOM WORKS, WHY CAN SHE NOT STAY WITH HER....PLUS MAYBE BELLA WENT THROUGH SOMETHING BAD THAT NOBODY KNOWS.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 3

I think Esme doesnt have the hole story and is seeing things that are not there

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

I think there is more to it than what Esme has decided on

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

Geez, who pissed in Esme's Cheerios!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Just started but it's you guys so I'm here!

Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

I am loving it so far, can't wait for more chapters.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

I am enjoying this and hope you post soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm not sure of this Esme. She doesn't seem to motherly. She didn't make a good first impression.  I think Bella is bored with school.  She seems smart and feisty.  I bet she takes up for the underdogs. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

OMG, I really love this story.   I've read thousands' of thess and this is on my top ten.

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2015 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

What's Esme's problem with Bella? Her exterior? She was rude to Bella and she gave it right back - not polite, but the same goes for Esme. Alice just bowled Jen over, no wonder the little girl is not comfortable with her right away.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love the little cutie pie. I think Bella is not a lot different from little Jen. cant wait for more

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loving Bella I hope she stays sassy

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

Obviously  you  will  be  telling  us what  is going on between  Bella  and Esme, because that was a strange interaction to  happen  in front of someone  who just  got  there ,   like  Edward and Jennifer .   Look forward  to  your explanation .   Keep up the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm not sure who I liked more in this chapter! Emmett is always great and I loved him with Jen but having Bella tell Esme off was so much fun!

Can't wait for more...

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

Your Bella sounds like no other Bella that I have read about. Sounds like this is going to be good.  Can't wait to read more.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

That is so sad. I can't wait to read more. My heart breaks for Jennifer. 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyed the intro... can't wait to read more of the story...

 

Krazi4twisaga@gmail.com

Xoxo

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

love it

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story aleady.  Anxious for the next  chapter.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

You have my interest!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love anything that has to do with sign language I hope you keep ASL a huge part of the story it gives such a dpeath to a story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to reading more of this 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the sound of this so far.  Interesting prenise.  Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'd like to read more.

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start, as is always the case on your stories! Can't wait to see Bella enter the story, should be fun from the story banner and description! Always, always here until the end of story!

Reviewer: HappyEverAfter Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked what I read so far.  Please continue

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds so good already.

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

very interesting beginning and quite different so far. looking forward to following along as usual ladies... Pam b.

Reviewer: Momma Big Evil Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love. Love. love the first chapter and cannot wait for more :D ... By the way.. is it Friday yet?? lol

Reviewer: timidvampire Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

really liked this opening chapter x

Reviewer: beadgirl61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2015 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

You're off to a great start!  I love Wee/Jess and Wee/Kat stories!

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