Date: 26 May 2016 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
lollollol!!! This Chapter was Fabulous!!! And i can only imagine what James did to Emmett in the jail, it makes me smile!!!! lol
Date: 26 May 2016 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow, the judge really threw it to Emmett. I hope Emmett's mother leaves Bella alone after she gets out of jail. I can't wait to hear from James.
Date: 26 May 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 28
seems like james might being planning something with marie's dad??
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
James is gong to be picking up where Matt Dowling leaves off. Hip hip hooray!!!!!! Beaten and bloodied he can then serve his time...if he lives.
Date: 25 May 2016 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 28
You go Jamie boy. Good on you
Date: 25 May 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 28
Curious myself!!!
Date: 25 May 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 28
I can't wait for James POV! There's something I don't think I've ever typed before. lol
Date: 25 May 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
Uh oh what did James do ? Happy to hear Emmett will be in the same prison as that girls dad and I am sure he will hear about who Emmett and will torture him quite well. Renata got another attempt of court charge she won't learn maybe she will have to stay there. Can't wait to see thier happy ever after.
Date: 25 May 2016 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 28
don't know what he did to get in...but I know who he talkeked to! Marie's father, hahaha
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 28
James found a way to communicate with that poor girl's father and Emmett has a sore butt. I'm sure whoever popped his cherry enjoyed it more than Emmett enjoyed taking the only thing left that belonged to that innocent young girl.
Renata needs to spend years in prison for aiding her son's illegal activities.
Looking forward to James'POV.
Date: 25 May 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 28
get him james he deserves it...........Momma and her baby both in jail I love it..........
Date: 25 May 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
Justice at last for Emmett and his mother!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 27
I love this story. Great chapter.
Date: 24 May 2016 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Usually I don't read stories un-finished, but I read your plot and it is great! I'm only at the first chapter and I'm eager to read more!
Date: 22 May 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
Married again! For real this time. I love the babies in a suit and thinking of little Anthony in glasses has me smiling.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2016 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 27
James was hilarious.
Date: 21 May 2016 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 27
James was too funny. Glad Harp got fired. Women like her give many of us a bad rep.
Sweet little ceremony too
Date: 21 May 2016 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 27
Love fairy god mother James he is to good lol. I love how in love Edward is with Bella so sweet thanks so much
Date: 21 May 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter ! You have done a great job with this story so far , and I am sure any epilogue you write will be excellent .
Date: 21 May 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved the wedding. Can't wait to hear from James. I know Emmett and his mom got some jail time but I am wondering if they learned their lesson.
Date: 20 May 2016 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
I have loved ever chapter I'm always sad when a great story ends.... Can't wait to see what you do next..
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2016 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 27
I sure hope Emmett and his mother get their humiliation and hopefully long incarceration. Maybe even a little ass kicking in jail too. :)
Date: 20 May 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
James in fairy wings...scary! Lovely chapter. Thanks
Date: 20 May 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 26
Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 20 May 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved James as fairy godmother! What a hoot! I am sorry to see this story ending so soon. I know it's planned and written so that it will end in 3 more chapters. I always feel this way about the stories I become most attached to. It took so long for them to find each other that it seems they have had so little time together. I don't see any glaring mistakes here. The chapter was lovely!
Date: 20 May 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
I want to see the happy ever after with a house full of kids and what a terrible life Rachel and Emmett ended up with. I love that they got married love the fairy god mother lol.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 27
The wedding was quaint, perfect for a renewal service.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
It saddens me to think the end is near. READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 20 May 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
What's the name of the Facebook group?
Date: 20 May 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 27
Beautiful wedding. Loved James.
Date: 19 May 2016 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
Would love to watch (read) nurse skank getting her due walking papers...
or at least some tongue lashing.
also, we know emmet is a loud obnoxious guy. He would
not go gently into the night...I mean jail/prison.
would love to see (read) all the crap he would pull in court and well
deserved reprimand.
it was so heart breaking to read all of the previous chapters against
Bella. Love love that she is receiving some satisfaction but need more....
with everything she went through 😋
Date: 19 May 2016 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
BELLA IS TO NICE!! EDWARD IS SO IGNORANT AS TO WHAT IS GOING AROUND HIM...
Date: 19 May 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
I knew nurse Harp was lieing to Bella. I do think Edward needed to quit the hosipal, people were taking advange of him. Can't wait until Friday.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2016 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Bella...us moms can sympathize remembering how demanding the first few months can be. Awww and Edward is alot more mature than most new fathers. They survivec there first fight 😊 READ YOU SOON 💖
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
If I was Bella I would've given Nurse Harp more than a tongue lashing.
Sherry
Date: 18 May 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yea Nurse Harp needs an awakening, what a biatch. Kinda sucks that it took Edward that long to realize he was hurting Bella
Date: 18 May 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 26
That skanky nurse, Rachel's cousin, has to go! Every couple has fights, and I'm glad they got through their first one. Kudos to Edward for cutting back his hours! Maybe they could hire a nanny? That might help them have some alone time once in a while. Thanks for this lovely story!
Date: 18 May 2016 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter.
Date: 18 May 2016 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
I hope Nursery Harpy get fired. I can not believe that Edward's son was sick and she did not page him. Glad they talked and worked things out. Can't wait for more.
Date: 18 May 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ohhh loved the chapter!!!! I Am sooo happy Edward and Bella could solve their problems! Can't wait for more!
Date: 18 May 2016 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 26
I think he should have known what was going on at home
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2016 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
Schedules are the first thing to be adjusted when you have children.
At least they are able to talk their way through their troubles.
Rachel's cousin should be put on probation by the hospital for her actions.
Date: 18 May 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
Nurse Harp is a bitch! Edward can prove he didn't get Bella's pages. Edward did the right thing...famiy is more important and people were taking advantage of hs good nature. Now onto sexy times!!
Date: 18 May 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
The nurse almost needed a doctor to fix her up once Bella got done beating her ass. So glad they got that worked out.
Date: 18 May 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
I knew that nurse was a bitch and was lying to Bella. What a ass that doctor called in Edward so he could go out drinking. I think it is for the best that he cut down his hours so he can be at home more. I think it will be hard for them to think about another person since they are so used to being single. Nurse harp needs fired.
Date: 18 May 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
I would love to have heard what Carlisle said to Edward! Great chapter.
Date: 16 May 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well at least Rose apologized. LOVED Renata being held in contempt of court.
Date: 14 May 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
Best chapter yet. Emmitt and his mom are starting to get what's due them.
Date: 14 May 2016 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love to know what kind of evidence they had to claim the babies were his and who faked that for them! If he really dosed Rosalie he should be charged with murder ! They should also file a civil suit for her medical bills for the premature labor and NICU care. Great story !
Date: 14 May 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
I was hoping Emmett was going to lose it in the court room and end up in more trouble than that right now. I know it is coming to him.
Date: 14 May 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
About time he gets his what's coming to him. I'm glad Rose finially seen the light, sorry for her brother loosing his job. After all he was fooled by Emmett too. I would hope that my brother would be looking out for me, by helping out my boyfriend. I hope that he get a lot more time in jail, as for his mom she needs to see the light too, and realize what a monster she raised.
I hope Bella don't have to go thru with a trial, and that the wedding goes off without trouble.
Date: 14 May 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wow! I'm just not happy, Emmett deserves worse than that. He got off light.
Date: 14 May 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 14 May 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
I loved this chapter. Emmett is such a douchbag. The judge was too nice. And his mother, right on. She was just as bad. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
Finally, Emmett is getting a little upcommance. Loved how the judge overseen the case. I'm glad Rose and her brother did the right thing.
Sherry
Date: 14 May 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 25
Happy dance to what has happened to Emmett and his dear old mother
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2016 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am rubbing my hands together with great glee! Especially glad that mommy dearest got 30 days in the slammer!!!
Date: 13 May 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
Glad the judge did not take anything off Emmett and his mom. They still need worse than jail time.
Date: 13 May 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
Who was Rachel? I can't remember her. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 13 May 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
Emmets actions have caused alot of harm to all the people he has come in contact with. Roasalies brother looses his job and I feel bad for him for that but he seems to be a good man and that shows by being at the hearing and appologizing to Bella and supporting his sister. Rosalie, even though she knew Emmett was married was still with him but like Bella beleived every word he said and like Bella was betrayed. Lessons learned and hopefully Emmett will learn now that he is going to pay for his malicous actions against them, especially Bella. I don't beleive he will think he deserves it but maybe withougt Mommy there to bail him out he will get what is coming to him. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 13 May 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
I would love to hear Emmets POV and his mother's. Does he reach an epiphany yet or did he have a contingency plan in place? I know he's not done with her. If anything Edward's love for his 'cast away toy' should piss off the bully in Emmet. Edward being Bella's knight in shining armor should have him seeing neon green 😹😹😹😹
Date: 13 May 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm with you and agree on everything that you said in your closing A/N. I love the judge also and love that he threw the whole book at Emmett and his mother! I also love Jessica and how she has changed and apologized for her previous behavior! Now I want to see Emmett charged and convicted with all those counts of theft and fraud that result from his selling off all of Bella's things! I also want to see him charged and convicted with attempted murder for causing the early arrival, and endangerment of, her 2 babies!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2016 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter!! I can't wait for the criminal case. Emmett is screwed! Renata is nuts & their attorney should be disbarred. What possible proof can they have that those babies are his?
Date: 13 May 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
The best part was putting Renate's ass in jail... Seconded by Em's time in jail. I do feel sorry for Rosalie wish her and Bella could be closer but I know that's not realistic. Loved it.
Date: 13 May 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ohhh this chapter Is great it gives lots of information!!! Yay Emmet gets to go to jail
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
i mostly loved that big mouth renata got some jail time. ha
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
It would be nice to find a way for Rosalie and Bella to get group counseling together. Build a mutual level of respect for each other in spite of their connection. Maybe the Cullen family knows a nice guy they can introduce to Rose. Help get her life back on track.
The judge was great in getting Emmett off the streets for the next six months and his mother for a month.
Did Emmett gamble all that money away?
Date: 13 May 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow! That's all I can say...it's finally going to fall hard on Emmett. Renata needed a visit to jail, as does Emmett...my only worry is the people they meet in there, they could be swayed to hurt Bella. On the other hand, it could go the other way and they get their just desserts! I leave it in your trusty hand of magic. Finally Rose is seeing Emmett for his true colors...yuck! Once a cheater, always a cheater. Thanks for the update.
Date: 13 May 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
Woohoo serves emmett and his shitty mother right look forward to next update x
Date: 13 May 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
Maybe Emmett's father will run NOW while she is in lockup!! Hell I would!!!
Date: 13 May 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter.
Date: 13 May 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love the judge sticking it to Emmett and would not even let him talk and showed him what a idiot he is. Renta got what she deserved thinking she was going to get those babies. They are getting remarried so the family can be there that will be wonderful. Jasper is awesome with all the proof of Emmett's evil ways. Glad Bella got her jewelry back.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love it can't wait to see the criminal trail. I am glad that arose sees how bad he is.
Date: 13 May 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved the judge And loved the chapter.
Date: 13 May 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved renata going to jail...That was awwesome...................Poor rose she was a victim just like bella.....
Date: 12 May 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 24
Cant wait till friday..................
Date: 12 May 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yes the courts are stupid. Em truly needs to go down and soon.
Date: 12 May 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad they worked out the stuff with her house. Can't wait for Em to pay.
Date: 12 May 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow WOnder who specifically James hit, A friend of Em? Sucks that all these people got scammed by Em, but esp B.
Date: 12 May 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad she is getting all the support she needs.
Date: 12 May 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
woo hoo They are together. Love Esme. Can't wait for the menfolk to catch Em and take him down
Date: 12 May 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
OOOOHHH They finally know!!!!
Date: 12 May 2016 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ugh can anything go B's way???
Date: 12 May 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
WEll at least they both finally told the other. Been wondering how long till E went after James. hee hee
Date: 12 May 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG I really want him dead. Jasper needs to take finger prints, or put up cameras, or something. This is insane
Date: 12 May 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
Time to change security companies. Wonder how long till Jasper is going to suggest putting up cameras to catch Em.
Date: 12 May 2016 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
They really need to clear the air before Em kills B or the babies.