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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 13

Hope Em gets caught soon.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 24

I know what you are saying about the court I live in Washington and have adopted our kids what a run around WOW.  I think it is Emmetts mom and this is the start of Emmetts fall cant wait.  Rachell is a royal bitch got to love Jess lol

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 24

good

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 24

I can think of a few reason's he would want to have full custody, of Bella's boys. One child support, 2, he could get Rose off his back about having a baby, 3 even thou he's sold the house to 3 different couples he probably thinks he can back out of that and have it back too. I wouldn't put it passed his mother to put it in his head thou and helped him get a lawyer. Please this will be the last straw, when Edward and Bella take the DNA test results in and prove he is nothing to the boys.

I know why he wants the hair test done, he can test for drugs. Depending on how long Bella's hair is he can go back a couple of years to see what kind of drugs were in her hair. I know when I got hired for a job back in the 90's they said then that every inch was like a 90 days, and they took it right from the scalp.  Can't wait for Friday to get here.

Reviewer: CFG Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter!!! Loved how Jessica dealt with Rachel she is a vapid superficial woman! Please tell me that Emmet will get soon what he deserves!!! I think ot was Emmet's mother who filed the petition!! Can't wait for friday!!! Hope that everything Is ok Kasi!!!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 24

Bella really should stop answering the door

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm sure the Cullen's have the best attorney money can provide.
Will Bella be able to enter into evidence the unlawful sale of her house? Will Edward get the hair sample tested and the results in time for the hearing? Will this actually go to trial or will so much evidence against Emmett finally arise that he is arrested?
Jessica has turned into a good and loyal friend to both Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 24

I really love this story I can't wait for momma Bella to come out in court; no one messes with our babies!!!!!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 24

Ok I think it is time to bring Emmett down hard!!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 24

What?! He is nuts

 

Reviewer: JaMarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 24

I enjoyed the chapter and I am looking forward to the confrontation with Emmett.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 24

Emmett is really really dumb! Even if he was their dad, the chances of him ever getting sole custody the way the court system works is slim to none: first off he has no valid income he can claim (unless he mentions the security company and HELLO - that's a dumb idea) plus with the restraining order for Bella... He would be seen as a risk for mere visitation. I know I'm venting I'm so into this story but I really don't understand how he can really be that stupid!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 24

I was afraid that Emmett was going to show up while Edward was gone. I am thinking that Emmett's mother is behind the custody hearing. Emmett and Bella have been divorced for over a year when she got pregnant so there is no way. Emmett's mom is as crazy as he is. Loving this story.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 24

I think this should be where Emmett's mamma finally sees who her son really is. That is true karma kicking ass.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 24

OMG Rachel is so crazy!  Didn't Jessica have a fling with Edward in the past?  She seems so friendly now. Should we be worried about her being crazy too?  I can't believe the size of the balls on Emmett, suing for custody!  I have a feeling that someone had better get a bodyguard for Bella and the twins, what with all the crazies around.  I hope they get some peace and quiet soon, Edward and Bella...

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 24

This all your fault! You spoiled us with longer chapters and now... I want  my longer chapters!!!! Hmmmm ok tantrum over (lol) I was so focused on Emmett getting what he deserved that I forgot all about Edward's ex Rachel. Gee what a snooty bitch and to think Edward was with her for 8yrs!!!!!!! Kinda makes you question his intelligence 😯  READ YOU SOON💖

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 24

Emmett's mom has to be behind this court order especially since Emmett never wanted kids.  Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 24

Rachel is something else, good thing Jessica was there. Just when I don't think Emmett can stoop any lower.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

Emmett is definitely insane 

Reviewer: mjlove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for him to get what's coming to him.  

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 24

Jessica was great in this chapter! I am not worried about Emmett at all. There are too many people now who know the truth.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 24

So excited to see this update. You teased us with the best sampling of the chapter and left us wanting more. Edward is just so cute having a quick feel. Their first fight will be who buys groceries lol. I like Jessica she is much nicer now. Rachel of all people to pay a visit now she knows Edward is taken doubt she will get the hint though that was funny ugh kids now I have to get the place fumigated. Glad he told her to fuck off. Sure get Emmett in the court room then he can answer all he has done to Bella selling her house endangering her live and the lives of her unborn babies and all The other things he has done to her. 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loving the story! I think Emmett's mom is behind the court filing and is promising Emmett money or maybe Emmett thinks he can torment Bella and she'll pay him off. Little do they know about the DNA and it'll be thrown out ASAP.

i think doing the hair strand test will show Bella and Rose were given drugs to trigger miscarriages.

I'm glad Edward got rid of Rachel - what a bitch!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 24

Emmett's momma is behind this. Hopefully by going to court she will learn about all the s**t her beloved son has been up to. Can't wait for Emmett to finally get what is coming to him!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 23

You have captured the first weeks of motherhood completely!  Love where they are at the moment but I feel like Emmett still owed his due.  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 22

I thought that B&E finding out about each other would have been the end but the way this is laid out, there's more stuff here!!  How will Anthony fair?  Emmett needs to get his due and will we have a glimpse of Edward and Bella as a married couple with kids??? More! More!  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 20

Well finally!! Now let's figure out what we will do with evil Emmett. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

It must bum you out that people take time to write disparaging remarks about a story that is obviously meant as fictional entertainment.  It's amazing that they continue reading if they don't like it.  Understandably you feel compelled to respond for the benefit of others who may be reading the comments.  Lots of wasted energy and time.  I'm just happy that you and your collaborators keep writing fun stories for us to escape to.  And for me personally, you seem to be writers who are committed to finishing the stories you publish.  Not that I take offense when some don't, that is their prerogative too.  But you know how it is when you get engrossed in a story that never comes to conclusion. So thanks.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 23

I am with everyone else I want to see Emmett pay. I love there family's

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 23

Well at least Emmett isn't getting any more of the nineteenth from the seller of Bella's house.  Glad to see that the boys are doing good.   Still can't wait to see what happens with Emmett. I so want to see him get hurt..

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thanks!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loving it 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love how Edward and Bella just seem to fit and fall into place with each other. I keep expecting Emmett's mother, or Emmett himself show up to pull some crap.

Sherry

Reviewer: EN426 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love this. I'm always excited to read your updates

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 23

can't wait to see everything peter finds out about em. also looking forward to renata's reaction . . . wondering if she will be able to handle the truth

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

I am happy the boys are both home now!! I think Rose should be the one to turn on Emmett. That would be perfect!!! lol

Reviewer: lushlou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

loved it sooo much

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: nubian cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

 The story is coming along great. Also as part of Emmett's payback he should have a stalker from the club he used to frequent.  This stalker is getting really angry because he's not catching her hints and his attention is focused on his ex. The stalker doesn't mind sharing with Rosalie for the time being but even that must end soon. 

 

I can't wait for your update.

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story in check my email often to see when the next update comes in I have to admit I actually pulled off the road into a parking lot so I couldr read the update when it arrived

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 23

I'm so glad they've got their boys home now.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 23

So glad it did not take the boys long to get home. Where is Emmett???? Glad Bella's family and Edward's family are all getting along. 

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 23

I stop everything and read your update! I'll be patient for Emmett's punishment, but it's hard.  I love the way the Cullens have taken Bella in as family...no one is suspicious or mean, thanks for having Rose out of the Cullens.  So happy the babies are both home. Thanks for the update, as always.  

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

I was so excited to see this updated I love it sooooo much.  Edward is so cute with her. I can she her putting her touches her and there and really making this her home. So happy the boys are home we had to wait  5 months for our little one to come home the rule at primary children's is not till the delivery date and then he had a problem or two after his date so we waited patiently for him to come home. They need to find the other peoples money and get it back to them.  James was going to have a guys night with Anthony that is adorable.  Love Carlisle and Alec talking so open making Bella blush. Esme has slid into the grandma role so easily she loves her grandbabies. 

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love it! 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 23

So Jasper has Peter working on the unsavory aspects of Emmett's lifestyle.
Once light is shed on all his misdeeds, will Rosalie learn that he caused her miscarriage. Essentially killing her baby?
Will the twins have to go back to the hospital for anything other than their progress checkups?
Has Emmett learned about Bella's new residence and that she is really married?
Chomping at the bit to see what mega punishment you have devised for Emmett.

Reviewer: Intsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 23

I love this story and am happy that they are all finally home.  Can't wait to see what you have in store for Emmett.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

I am very much enjoying reading this story!  It's just everything how Edward was attracted to both Bella and her babies while she was still pregnant. He recognized them and his feelings didn't steer him wrong. Hers too. She knew, but couldn't , that he was the one.  I'm so glad both boys are ok and home now, and can't wait to see Emmett get what is coming to him!!  A lemon or 2 would be nice....I know they have to wait a bit longer, but am anticipating....

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great  chapter !  Can't  wait  for  Emmett  to  get  his comeuppance !  Should  be  a long  prison  term  just  for  selling  the  house  four times, not  to  mention  all  the  other  activities !   So  glad  Jack and Jill finally  found  each  other . 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

Thanks!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 22

Emmett doesn't strike me as the master mind behind all the scamming his been doing. lol... I too loved James in this chapter, especially when he ratted out Edward for being Bella's husband. All-in-all this was a fantastic chapter.

Sherry

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh I didn't think I could hate Emmett more but I was wrong. Can't wait to see Karma get him. Love this story and this Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 22

uh wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 22

Emmett's mother has a lot of nerve, coming in there demanding to see her "grandsons".  I hope Emmett gets his soon, the sooner the better.  I can't wait for the boys to come home. Is Bella going to let the young couple keep the house?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 22

OMFG Emmett needs hung by his balls and beat in the head.  I feel sorry for the family in the house Bella will make things right with them because she is a good person.  God I love Edward he is the best man ever.  James is my hero he love Bella like a sister and takes very good care of her and is funny as hell.  Thanks so much for a great chapter.

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 22

I love this story! It is truly one of my top favorites. I love Edward and how he is so protective of Bella, even before he knew she was his Jill. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 22

Awesome awesome chapter there was so much that I loved about it can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 22

I loved it! EPOV are my favorite. I really hope they talk - Bella needs to know how Edward feels about her and that he considers them a really family!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

What a wonderful chapter!  I loved Edward's POV. You made it different enough from Bella's POV of the same time frame that I didn't feel like I was reading the same thing over again. The new material was wonderful also. I have a feeling that the family who moved into Bella's house will get to stay there. I hope they do. They were Emmett's victims also and Bella can stay with Edward.  Renata needs to be arrested also for helping Emmett do all his dirty deeds. The nerve of her trying to see those babies!  Can't wait for more!!! ....but I sure will.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved Edwards pov in this chapter. Hope Emmett ends up being someone's bitch in prison 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 22

OOMGosh! I can not believe that Emmett has sold Bella's house 3 times. That is just crazy!!!!!!! Now we know why Charlie and Sue could not stay at Bella's.  

Love that Edward had a nursery ready for the boys.  

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

This Chapter was sooo sweet!  I love the two of them together.  They make me smile.  I hope Emmett gets hit by a bus LOL!  He makes me sooo mad.

Reviewer: PoseyRosey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love it, cannot wait to see Emmett get his comeuppance, I do hope it's soon, the stress that nasty sh*t is causing needs to be sorted.lol

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 22

This chapter brings back so many memories of when I volunteered as a "cuddler" in the NICU. So many of the babies had parents that couldn't be there full time so the cuddlers stepped in and helped to fed and love up the babies. It truly was a memorable time in my life.

I'm so glad they are finally together and can't wait to see what karma has in store for Emmett.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

You mentioned not caring for multple POV'S because it usually means repetitive chapters but you did really good with Edward's POV it flowed nicely into were you left off (you shouldn't doubt your magic)  I know I'm a selfish reader always wanting MORE!  ( he he he ) but it's only because of your magic with words. They have a lot to iron out to be perfect together but..... Even with all the craziness going on around them they are perfect for each other. They didn't say the boys full names so I wasn't sure who got what name. OK....now let's get down to the shit with Emmett and have him meet Bella's..... HUSBAND!! 😛 READ YOU SOON 💜

Reviewer: twimad55 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 22

i love james, i wonder what they have planned for emmett, his mother is needing god kicking too

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 22

Bella's support squad has solidified. Banding together with Edward's. Just another factor to prove their are destined to be a family.
As this story unfolds it's easy to forget that Edward and Bella haven't spent the normal time getting to know each other as a dating couple would. So Bella being dislodged from her home is another stressor she has to concede.
Will James get his chance to physically harm Emmett?
Looking forward to Emmett becoming someone's sex slave in prison. They'll teach him how to prevent pregnancies. (Maniacal chuckle)

Reviewer: psychovampirefreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 22

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Loved hearing Edward's thoughts and love how his family and Bella's are supporting them.

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

I CAN'T WAIT!!!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

good

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love it ohhhh sooooo much.  Edward was going to get a anullment from jill so he could be with Bella well now he does not have to worry about it.  Wow how could he sell it to so many people he has no conscience now he has fraud on his record multiple times. James is so funny could not stop laughing at the situation. Jasper will have such a fun time giving Bella and Edward a hard time.  That is so cute she got to change his diaper and got to hold him. Renata is crazy thinking they are Emmett's babies he probably told her that he was the dad.  She was checking out the hottie on the bike and know she knows it was Edward.  Thank you for Edwards pov.  

Reviewer: KimiD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love the charater twists... maje for great reading-! Yeah, he is a piece of work... I like your mean version of Emmett, great writing...

Did not know who the wobderful writers behind weekittyand tat were before! Now that I do ... must let you know I have read several of your stories and had already put you as afavorite on ff.net long ago... LOVE you ladies' writung!!! Congrats on you published book!!! KimiD

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 21

That was so sweet!

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

Can't wait for Edwards pov and also to see what James wanted Edward for x

Reviewer: trixielou Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

Here's pulling for those little boys.  Ready to see who and how they pull together to kick Emmett's ass.   

 

Loving this story.  Can't wait for the next update.

 

Thank you for sharing with us!!!

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 21

Looking forward to EPOV!!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 21

I chuckled at Charlie's reaction to learning Edward is his new son-in-law.
Esme is very gracious and the best teacher Bella could have in this situation.
Any news on the Emmett front? Have Bella and Edward family and friends figured out how he has been able to access Bella's things as well as sell her home?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved this chapter.  Glad that both boys are doing better. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 21

good

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 20

Love Esme!!

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 21

Well it's good to know that the boys are doing good. I do want to hear about what Edward thought. I would also like to know what Emmett has done now.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 21

I just love this Edward and Bella together. Such a great chapter and can't wait to find out what's in store for Emmett too.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 21

I love it but am so curious what is going on  at the homefront.

Looking forward to the next installment

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

This was a very sweet chapter!  I'm glad Bella has Esme to tell her what this was like and to sympathize with her.  Edward couldn't be any sweeter! I just want to eat him up! What is happening on the Emmett front? Did they catch him yet? He needs to pay for all the rotten and dangerous things he has done to Bella!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

Oh please tell me Charlie is staying at Bella's and catches Emmett. 

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 21

Is it time to kill Emmett and Rosalie now? Cam Renata get some karma, too?

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 21

Love this chapter.  Esme is so sweet bringing them homemade food. I understand how the nicu is my nephew was in primary children's hospital when he was born way to earlier. All the bells and beeps and buzzers drove my sister crazy.  Cuddled together they are so cute.  So Edward being a twin gave her a good chance at having twins.  That was sweet of Edward to let Charlie stay at his house.  I saw that you were writing the Edward pov that will be awesome thank you for that. Can't wait to see Emmett's karma being paid back full force. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 21

I noticed that Edward gave Charlie his keys to his home and not Bella's, calling it their home. I'm guess Emmett really did get the sale of her house to go through. The picture ideal was fantastic. When do we find more out about what was happening last chapter, concerning Emmett.

Sherry

Reviewer: bmthespian Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

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