Date: 29 Apr 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it!! So sweet!!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
i want to know what has happened to emmett and the house, i hope they kicked his ass
Date: 29 Apr 2016 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
You've already posted this one :(
Date: 28 Apr 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love your story!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love this Esme. How do Alice and Jasper know James and the girls?
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loving this. Can't wait for next update. Esme, so awesome. Gotta love her.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
So, so cute!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it ! Love your story can not wait for more..
Date: 28 Apr 2016 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
wondering what is going on with em and what everyone is taking care of
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 20
I think i would rather die than have my mother in law rub my boobs.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it and loves sassy esme!!! Worth the wait, thanks
Date: 28 Apr 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
I loved this chapter. I think they handled the discovery of their marriage well and I am glad there wasn't any forced drama. Personally I feel that her ex provides plenty of drama all by himself
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
Awe love it, post more soon
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
I loved how they found out, I thought it would involve Alice, instead of Jake, but I'm glad it's out. I want to know what Emmett, has done now. I hope you let us in on it, oh and I hope he gets what's coming to him.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am so happy that it's out!! They both deserve some happiness. But I can't wait to get back to the evilness that is Emmett. What had he done now? So excited to see what's going on. Great chapter! Awesome story!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm so happy they finally found each other. I can't wait to see how Emmet will respond to the news of her birth and then that she's married to the guy he tried to destroy. Let Emmet get his due but not quickly. Maybe Rosalee kicking him out and he have to go live with his mom's since his bank account will be frozen from the house investigation. Or maybe Royce will kick his butt, or his dad will step in to stop his son's antics.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
They worked out the news far better than I thought they would, and Edward handled fathering the kids better than expected. Esme rocks. Though, I'm dying to know what Emmett has done now.
Thanks for a great chapter.
Sherry
Date: 27 Apr 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
Gos the beginning of this story was rough, but like all E/B fics, I can survive as long as they are together. It will be so crazy from here on out, but at least now I can handle it. That was a rogh road. i love Esme and Alice too. I think that the women in this story will be a force to rekon with. I also hope that Rose's brother sticks up for her since she doesn't for herself and sticks it to Emmett too. Rose may be bad now, but if she had someone to give her confidence, friendship and love she may see her own worth and stop the damaging behavior. I pity her a bit.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved this Esme. I am so glad everything is going well and I wonder what Emmett did this time.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
Esme is so funny love her. That is a lot to take in for all
Date: 27 Apr 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
The reveal went splendidly! I loved it! Esme is just great. Love her humor and her warmth!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
Another awesome Esme. She is the force behind Edward's family. She better grill her son for all the details of Vegas.
Will you eventually give Edward and Bella a renewal wedding or a reception celebration with friends and family?
Let's hope the growing number of enemies that Emmett has acquired will somehow cause him to slip up. He needs to be sent away for a long time. Royce needs to smarten up and get his sister out of this mess.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yay!!!!! So worht the waiting! I luv this story!! You rock! NOw i have to hibernate or something until Friday.... maybe you could post it early in the morning for me???? Wishful thinking but i had to ask!!
Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved the chapter! Can't wait for more!
Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loving esme and lol the lesbian comment was hilarious wondering wat emmetts been up to now and looking forward to next update x
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm relieved they finally know the truth and love that Edward is jumping in with both feet! Love this Esme and I hope to see more of her sassiness. Now lets gets that asshole Emmett out of her life for good and behind bars where he belongs!!!
Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
Esme was great! Now, let's all go after Emmett.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
great now.. I want the chief to get with Jasper and get Emmett and his crew locked up or shot either works for me.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME chapter!!!!!!
Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMGosh! Emmett needs to die. He has made Bella go into labor early.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
About time!!!!
Can't wait until next chapter! Bella found her husband/baby daddy!
Edward found his wife and kids!!
Can't wait to see how the families react
Date: 23 Apr 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
God this is so good I can't get enough hahahhaha
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
I would have never thought jake would be the one to disclose everything. Now edward can't get in trouble since those are his babies!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope emmett goes to jail for a very long time!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ong. Really end it there. Omg. Hanging on
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ok so that makes sense about him having a different name.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
I have never heard of this koolaid prank. I have to get my husband with this.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'M MORE IN SHOCK! FINALLY! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
awesome; they finally know. Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 23 Apr 2016 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
Best chapter so far. LOVED IT!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Eeeeeekkkk! Finally!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
The shock of figuring out their situation will be felt on a mutual level. The acceptance will be all the easier since the attraction is still present.
Jasper figured it out during the drive to the hospital, didn't he. That why he was making all those strange sounds.
Jake finally confirms the suspicions.
Edward delivered his own twins. Will this be a problem for the hospital since the accusations of inappropriate behavior towards a patient has been filed against him?
Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my goodness what a great chapter... I think there both in shock
Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yay! Yay! Yay! Finally, the truth is out! Now Edward can really get to be the father he wanted. And hopefully here can help put Emmett in his place.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
Omg omg omg
i am on holidays and saw this update and stopped everything to read it!
Cant wait for Edward to realise he just delivered his sons
Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
finally! can't wait to see what happens. also hoping em get his ass kicked soon
Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
Holy hell, I'm excited!!!
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
(I understand this is fiction but just a little FYI.... after giving birth you spend at least an hour in RECOVERY)... that being said it was a an emotional chapter. It didn't sound like Bella put it all together like Edward did. Maybe now that Jake confirmed it'll all come back to her. READ YOU SOON 💞 😊
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
Both in shock I'm sure! Now that the truth is out there lets get that pig Emmett and string him up by the balls! Please?????
Date: 22 Apr 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yess!!! But now i need more, the wait has been excruciating, and something has to give with emmet, he's evil!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yea!! They are together!!!!!! Well almost!!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG!!! PLEASE don't let me wait till Wednesday to see them together!! :)
she's going to tell them the baby's are his??? Oh my! :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Way to drop the big one on the woman who just had preemies. But she did need to know.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh yes! The moment has arrived! Now if someone could just put the clues together about Emmett sabotaging her in many ways. He needs to be held accountable for her going into early labor!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yeh! At last. Great chapter your story is amazing, so looking forward to the next chapter. I think Bella will be more shocked.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Omg I'm so looking forward to next update now go jake for telling Edward and bellas reaction to this in next update x
Date: 22 Apr 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank goodness the wait was killing me. Now can we beat up Emmett!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love love your story but please you are killing me..!! I need more...!!!😰😰😰😀😀😀😀
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Holy s***!!!! OMG, OMG, OMG.....dying here for the next update!! That was just cruel, *pouts* that we have to wait days for Bella's reaction, and the realization that the boys are Edward's! Oh Wow, we need a pov from both on their reactions, pretty please???
This was an awesome chapter, and such an amazing story, and I can't wait to see Emmett get his just desserts! One thing that is driving me nuts, is why with everything happening, has Jasper not asked for cameras and fingerprints of the places that things are coming up missing? And, yes, I realize you could say he used to live there so there would be fingerprints, but not recent ones after over a year away and not on the things that have been tampered with or left in her house. I trust y'all 100% to give Bella her justice and fry Emmett, but wow is he just super EVIL!
Thanks for the awesome update, take care!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH you just had to leave it there. Loved the chapter, I hope the babies will be okay. Now that Jasper is done will please have him go and arrest that Jerk Emmett.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
Omg so happy they know thank you Jake lol
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yay!!!!!!! I think both are in shock but I cannot wait until next week!! Please update sooner!! So happy but I think Bella is in more shock
Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally ... this is the best story -- great layout and perfectly written. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh yes finally!!!!! I am so glad they know now. Can't wait for the next chapter. I think Edward will be more surprised since Bella has already had a flashback.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you!!!!!
I love it...just want the tiniest ones to pickup now....and Emmett to get what's coming!
😁 T
Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah he knows! Can't wait to read more and can't wait for Emmett to get what's coming to him.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
Best chapter yet! I'm so happy Edward and Bella are figuring it out.
I hope Emmett gets what's coming to him soon. I want to kick him in the balls!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
WHAT DO I THINK???? how the hell I am going to survive till the next chapter!!! Please please tell us you will update soon??? Xxxx
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder if Edward has even considered that the babies are his?? I can't wait to find out!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ok this is the first and probably last time I will ever say this but jake saved the day and I like him for a minute or so there. Loving the tattoo's and she finally saw the green eyes she knows it now that they are one in the same her dream man is real and he loves her back. Yes Edward she is jill and you are married to her. Awesome Charlie will love his new son in law. So much happened in this chapter loved it. May have to read it again.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
When are you going to update iam dieing here
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
FINALLY!!!! can`t wait for more!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think it was more of a shock to Edward. I'm tickled pink.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
About fucking time.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
Absolutely loving this story! I can not wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
Jake for the win!!! finally!!!!!!!!!!!! Worth the wait, but Jesus, finally! :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm on pins and needles here!
Oh no the babies are coming to soon.
Jake is the key.
The judge that ruled over the divorce proceedings must have record of ownership for the house. But how does Bella prove forgery of the selling documents?
The bank would know that Bella must be present at the time of sale. How has Emmett assumed power of attorney over her affairs?
Date: 21 Apr 2016 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
I feel so badly for her.
Date: 21 Apr 2016 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
I no it's only 6:45 am here in Houston, but I'm pretty sure that it's Friday in some part of the world. So it's ok for you to post the next chapter now. Go ahead, it's alright.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 21 Apr 2016 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
I ho your not going to keep us waiting too long!!