Date: 21 Apr 2016 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
hopefully b will be ok and they will be able to nail em
Date: 21 Apr 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope that this stunt puts Emmett in jail once and for all. With being said I can't wait for Friday. I think Edward is going to be in shock when he finds out that the boys are his, and that Bella is Jill. As for Bella, I think deep down she already knows because of how she feels when touches her, she's just playing it off as him being a good man, that she could have feeling for.
Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
No it can't come fast enough. You better something horrible planned for that scum bucket, Emmett McCarty. May I just say nothing is evil enough for him
Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hey! Look at that! It's Friday! New chap? Hahah
loveeeeeeee the chap!!! I really hate Emmett!
now..they'll meet? :)
Date: 21 Apr 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
THIS IS SO UNBELIEVABLE! ALSO UNREADABLE! SO FUCKING STUPID!
Date: 21 Apr 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok I love y'all but karma needs to come and kick Emmett's ass like now. I cannot wait to see what happens on Friday!
Date: 21 Apr 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Going crazy can't wait
Date: 21 Apr 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
You guys are mean. :)
Date: 21 Apr 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love, love, love this story!! It is amazing and Emmett is a bastard. I cannot wait to see what terrible thing you hopefully have in store for him. He is a complete asshole. I just wonder how he is getting away with everything because he is a lazy S.O.B. I can't wait til you update!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
Truer words were never spoken! Is it Friday yet????????
Date: 20 Apr 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
can't wait for Friday; they are finally gonna figure out who each other are!!!!!! Can't wait for Emmett to get what's coming to him!!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Emmett is an IDIOT! Why does he think he can sell her house? Now her water broke and is 6 weeks early! Please let the boys be ok!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT TO US!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 18
i cannot believe he is like that. Mentally Unstable, has he been like this the whole time the new each other?
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG!!! I hate Emmett!!! I need the next chapter now. Please....
Sherry
Date: 20 Apr 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
Your not joking lol roll on Friday and oh emmett you are such a dick
Date: 20 Apr 2016 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh man come on we need the next chapter PLEASE!!! This is getting so good.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Omg you are evil lol. Emmett needs to be beat to death
Date: 20 Apr 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
Im pretty sure I want to throat punch and knee-to-the-junk Emmett
Date: 20 Apr 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
It's all coming together for Bella to find out that Edward is Jack, but I'm much more interested in the fact that Emmett seems to be unstoppable in his efforts to fuck Bella up! He has now caused her babies to be coming early! Can't anything be done to stop him? He could, and should, be charged with murder if the babies die because of him! Please stop him, and make it quick!! I really hate that he's getting away with all he has done!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG !!!!! He has broke the law and illegally sold her house he has gone way to far and the pigs head in her fridge disgusting. I bet he was pissed that she was home all that time and could not get in there. Flattening Jaspers tire ugh what won't he do. Can't wait to see jasper and Edward's reaction when they see each other when they realize who Bella is. So excited when I saw this in my inbox.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
It's gotta be friday somewhere.....Please Please Please give us the update!!
Cannot believe Emmett did what he did. Emmett can go to jail for this, right?
I hope they figure it out soon - Bella needs to change her locks and call her alarm company. She can say someone is circumventing her security system and maybe Royce can catch Emmett in the act!
Edward to the rescue - babies will be born - when will it all click?
Date: 20 Apr 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
You are so mean! Now I have to wait till Friday!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
You are horrible people, lol. I cannot wait for Friday and for Emmett to get busted.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Seriously Emmett must die or at least be locked in jail with a horny motorcycle gang.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
OH MY GOD!!!!! Emmett best not get away with any of this.... I am completely stressed out of fiction drama... Good Job though ladies; I luv ya!!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. Why hasn't Edward noticed Bellas ring on her chain when he's examined her?
Date: 18 Apr 2016 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
Considering that Edward thought James was Emmett, he got off lightly, I'm surprised he didn't castrate him.
Date: 18 Apr 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really enjoyed that chap.
E/k
Date: 18 Apr 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
Damn, I was hoping that Alice or Jasper would see Bella and help them figure things out. I hope that maybe in the next couple of chapters it happens. Well at least Charlie knows what has happen, I hope that when he finds out what was done to Bella's car he does more checking and finds Emmett's DNA in the gas tank. I hope he really gets what's coming to him.
Date: 18 Apr 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks for the update, loving this story. Poor James for getting punched. And it's a good thing that Bella finally let Edward know about her divorce to Emmett A.K.A The sick fkr
Date: 18 Apr 2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 18 Apr 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
At least he finally knows that James is not her husband and that she is divorced and she knows that Jane is his sister. Can't wait for them to find out the rest. Can't wait for the Chief to figure out that Emmett is the one doing everything to Bella and her house.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well, Edward made a fine impression upon Bella's closest friends. Haha
How cute is Charlie thinking about setting his daughter up with her doctor.
Do we all have to wait until the twentieth of September for Edward to sort out his situation?
Alice knows where the wedding took place and can assist her brother in tracking down the proper paperwork. Besides, if he decides to file for divorce, he will need all the official paperwork.
Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
I was waiting for poor James to get punched poor guy lol. They all see the attraction that Bella and Edward have for each other. I cant wait for Wensday.
Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
Hey, the truth finally!!! I can't wait until Em gets his a-- caught!!!👿😡 Sorry crazy lady with weird weekend. Thank You for sharing your work!!😀🤓
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
I freaking loved this chapter. Edward punching James was hilarious. Everyone can see they have a connection, and it sucks that they have only put part of it together. I can hardly wait for things to come together, and I'm really hoping Emmett gets busted soon.
Sherry
Date: 17 Apr 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ha they are so cute together and now we know they will get along well when they find out they are married to each other. They would have already known if Emmett hadn't destroyed the paper work that came in the mail.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
Absolutely loved it!! I'm so glad they've both sort have come clean.
I do think they both need to have that "long story" talk sooner than later. Can you imagine Edward delivering his own sons & see his spitting image??
wish I didn't have to wait until Wednesday
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
F I N A L L Y!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gee that only took what ......17 chapters!!!!! (lol) Now let's get Emmett. READ YOU SOON💖
Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love that he was defending her thinking her husband was cheating on her. He now know that she is single and Charlie likes him so that is a positive.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loving this story! That last comment that Edward made makes me wonder if he doesn't have an inkling that Bella might be his Jill ...
Ttfn
Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
Damn that Emmett! He caused this! Someone needs to stop him and make him accountable for all the damage he has caused. I love that Edward was ready to attack James when he thought he was Emmett! I'm very happy that the situation with all this misunderstanding of who the other is, is being slowly cleared up. Doesn't Edward just wear a ring at work to ward off the women? He isn't really married, is he? I can't wait for them to find out who Jack and Jill really are. OH! Now I remember. They got married in Vegas, but she doesn't remember!!!! Oh, perfect!!
Date: 17 Apr 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
Absolutely love this story! I wait every week on the edge of my seat for the update and most days it's the best way to end a day is reading the update! Can't wait for them to find out about each other but the slow burn is keeping it interesting! Can't wait till Wednesday!
K x
Date: 17 Apr 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
I think the best part was James prophecy that things are getting closer to the well deserved Karma Emmett will be facing.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Lol liked James comment on Edward hitting like a girl and I am so looking forward to the showdown with emmett xx
Date: 17 Apr 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
So much progress!!!, I really loveeeeeeee this chap!
now can we kill Emmett?? What was he thincking? Maybe Bella should sell the house? Move somewhere else? maybe with Edward?
thank you for the bonus chap! :) really amazing!
Date: 17 Apr 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter, I was kid of waiting for the James Edward misunderstanding confrontation.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved the whole chapter. Things are beginning to clear up. Is there a sign up sheet for beating up Emmett because I want to join.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
good they finally know. wonder when they will start piecing more of it together. also wondering how long em is going to get away with it
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
What an ass!! Please tell me he will get bitched slapped by karma! PLEASEEEEEEE!
I'm really enjoying your story. What is the Facebook name so I can read the teasers?
Date: 16 Apr 2016 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
I just want to say that I hope you have not taken my comments harshly. I was mostly expressing how this story affects me. I swear that I want to jump out of my seat screaming at times. But shouldn't a story do that to you? There are as few thing that I thing are dragging out a bit too long, but I was hoping that my comments were more helpful as an outside observer than hurtful. I really do love all your stories and they are generally the first updates I read. But I think I will have a heart attack before this one is completed. I am sorry if you viewed my comments as negative.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
He is a ruthless SOB of all counts
Date: 16 Apr 2016 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
I hope you have something especially painful planned for Emmett.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm really finding this hard to read. I realise this is fiction but this is just to much.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
He is one sick son of a bitch OMFG
Date: 16 Apr 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
what an asshole. wondering how long he is going to get away with this
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
a86;Sunday can't cum fast enough (lol) READ YOU SOON
Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
I really hope that Jasper or someone witnessed him doing that to her car. Emmett deserves anything he gets, like a lot of jail time. I hope besides Bella and Edward finding out that they are married, that Emmett gets caught. Can't wait until Sunday.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
Sorry but I am ready for Emmett to get caught!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
Doesn't Emmett realize he just gave his DNA up willingly in the gas tank. When they open it clean it out, they'll smell urine. Come on now, Emmett has done some shitty things, it's time he gets busted. Bella really needs to talk to Edward about her ex and show him a pic so they can put 2 and 2 together.
Sherry
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
Emmett is just crazy. So selfish. I am just speechless about him. He really needs to be taught a lesson. Can't wait for more.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ok, if Emmett put kool-aid in her bed would she not have noticed she was blue when she took her shower
Date: 16 Apr 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
Omg, is he really crazy. Wow. Can't wait to see the outcome of this.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love this story ladies. Emmett makes me just want to punch him. I mean come on to do all that to anyone is just so wrong. I hope Bella sells the house out from under him and he gets nothing.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm not liking Emmett in this story and can't wait for him to get his. He's a real douchbag. Also can't wait for everyone to know who they are. That will be good.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my!!! You are doing a great job of making me hate Emmett. How can someone be that awful! I can't wait to see how he gets what is coming to him. I hope it is sadistic? I can't wait till Edward and Bella find each other as Jack and Jill.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no I hate him, it was so difficult to read a nasty Emmett, i hope he gets what`s coming to him ....Argh!!!!!!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
I was wondering one thing, if I remember correctly, Emmett caused Rose to miscarry twice by putting something her drink right? So on top of everything that he is doing to Bella, when he is finally caught, can he be arrested for murder or something too because of Rose's babies? Thanks, Maria
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
ugh.....disgusting
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Emmetts so evil in this and really twisted look forward to next update x
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ew! Emmett is vile! So he's a security guy and that's how he has been getting into her house and sabotaging stuff! I can't wait to see him get what's coming to him for all the things he's doing to her. Maybe going to jail and getting repeatedly ass raped would be fitting...my aren't I getting violent! LOL! I'm enjoying this so please keep it up, and thank you!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
Can somebody just KILL Emmett already! I hate this Emmett, he is such a Jackass! Wow... I love this story. Hope you're feeling better Kasia!
Krazi4twisaga@gmail.com
Xoxo
Date: 15 Apr 2016 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the update. Emmett is such a pig.. Cant' wait to read what's coming for him... Please make the pay back real good with lots of suffering for all what he is doing to Bella and now to Edward as well. Felling sorry for Rosalie, hope she opens her ayes an see the scum that he is and chops his d--k off lol...
Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow! I really hope Emmett get what's coming to him.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
boy did you create a badass!!!!!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
I can't believe people are so rude a year in hell was way more nail biting then this was and I love them both. Patience people this is just getting good is emm jealous cause Edward looks way better than him. Emmett is such a dip shit doing all that too her and now he is messing with Edward what a sleaze ball. I feel kinda sorry for rose even though she is dumb enough to stay with him. So I am glad you are standing up for yourself, this is your story and you write it how you want to.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well Emmett's a psycho. I actually feel bad for Rose because she's just being manipulated. Hopefully everyone comes together and gives him what he deserves.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
Jasper is right, Emmett is going to slip up.
Video surveillance should be installed. But by someone other than her current security company.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
Sorry you guys are getting crapped on ~ I happen to love this story!!
Cannot believe the level of Emmett's selfishness and evilness! I trust his comuppence will arrive soon! He cannot get away with this. Emmett is so cocky and with that comes mistakes so I'm guessing when he falls, it will be a complete surprise and epic!!
Royce is usually the bad guy but if Rose is his sister, Emmett's comments as well as the public sex will have to push him over the edge soon!
I hope Bella confides in someone. She needs the protection. Would love for Jasper and Edward to see Emmett's picture and start putting 2 & 2 together and realize Emmett is behind all of this...and soon!
Worried about Emmetts call re: Edward - maybe that will be the catalyst to finally finish off Emmett!
Great chapter ~ I look forward to every update!!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow...Emmett is horrible! I can't wait for him to get what is comming to him!!!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
Horrible man! I can't think of a fate bad enough for him but I bet the two of you can.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
Okay, I know I am struggling with this story, but all the miss tells is a bit too much. I hope at least this is where they all meet at the hospital, Alice recognizes her and the truth comes out. Dragging this part of it on any longer it will become unbelievable. Last, if the police want proof, all they have to do is contact the buyer to see who gave the goods over. If they think it was her, she can agree to the warrant and the police have just cause to get a wattant. Then they can find out through investigating what is going on. One tail for a few days and they are gold. Even with small budgets, the theft is now over the mark that makes it a petty crime. Add to that the vandalism and there is a real case. So I think I am ready to call bullshit on this one.
But I still do really love your writing and stories, but this one is putting me to the test. Thanks for writing!
Date: 14 Apr 2016 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
I just love this story, what is wrong with Emmit? Surly Bella would have noticed that he was nuts having been with him so long.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
Emmett is so evil. Bella needs to place a home spy camera in her home to catch him. I was so hoping the marriage misconceptions would be cleared up, hopefully next the couple of chapters. Edward is too sweet.
Sherry
Date: 14 Apr 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh wow Emmett is a real piece of work. Can't wait for her find out Jane is his sister and Bella is not married to Emmett anymore.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope that James beats the SHIT out of Emmett. So Emmett was part of the security team, wouldn't Angla know him. Or did he enter after they left. I don't really care if we hear from Emmett, he's an demented ass, and needs to be put down, one way or another.
As for Bella not telling Edward, well she didn't really have time. The only problem I have hasn't she said James name in front of Edward, so he should have put 2 and 2 together.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope the whole family is at the hospital and just maybe the pieces will start to fall into place.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
How about in chapter 101 Bella tells him she is not married. This is really going nowhere.