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Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

I love this story so far. Thanks for taking the time to write it. I seriously hate Jacob and I hope karma is swift and fierce.

Reviewer: sue blair Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Reviewer: twireader1985 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

I was never a Jacob fan, and it's going to be interesting to see how the men react to Bella the Lioness

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

Oh wow Jacob is a real a-hole in this, poor Claire but at least she'd been smart about making sure her daughter would be taken care of and I think the missing money Jacob can't find is what Claire has been taking. Hopefully if Bella and Edward find out its Claire they'll help her rather than do something horrible. Another awesome chapter, getting to see into Jacobs head and to know exactly what he's planning, I hope Bella's the one to put that pig down! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Melissa

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

Can't  wait to see Bella take on Jacob. I hope Claire & her kid get out ok

Reviewer: SilverNova3082 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

Never liked Jacob

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

I've always hated Jacob, but more so now. I hope she really hurts him where it hurts, he deserves it. Can't wait to see how this goes.

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

I love your story, it is refreshing and well written and I can't wait to read the next chapter,

to see how Bella shows Jacob his place.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

I am with you. What a slime ball. Great chapter though. 

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

:):)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

Agreed.  I hate him ALOT. 

grr

Reviewer: becky Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Love the story! can't get enough!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Love it can't wait to read more!Great story!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

She is a strong woman when she needs to be.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Mrs 'Boss' is definitely her name

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

I  love this  pair  -- they are really a hoot  to read about!  Great  job!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

His kitten is wanting some of he sugary sweet cream.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

It is a good chapter!

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

I like this chapter!

Bella is a strong woman and Edward is proud.

Thank you.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Great chapter.  Loved seeing a strong Bella!!

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Great update

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Love seeing him support her but not overpowering her.  LOVE IT

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

I love how they just fit 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Wow!  Way to go Bella!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

I love that Bella is learning to hold her own and demand the respect she deserves as a business woman and as the boss's wife.

Sherry

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Love it!!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

I love how she handled the meeting and I am glad Edward let her. 

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Bella was ace with vacilli and Edward was just being a horn dog lol look forward to next update x

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

I love how confident she was and how hot you made Edward as he watched. Yummy. 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

They are so well matched...she's growing and he's yielding!

Reviewer: MaluTara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

I loved the pants skirts debate :) she held her ground!

and she's a women of power ;)

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

I'm so glad things are going so well for them

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

thank you good one

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

There is nothing quite like watching a business meeting conducted by brains and common sense, rather than a dick.  Pun intended.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Loved how Bella who went in still unsure, which makes sense this is all new.  She was raised not to take an assertive role, just took her strength from Edward and showed that manager who was in charge.  So glad that Edward just sat back & let her do it, he was just there for moral support. 

Same thing for the pants/skirts glad he realised that he would have not been any better than her father by making her just wearing pants. 

These 2 are going to be amazing once Bella gets her groove & confidence.  I think though Edward needs to remember that some will not just sit back and let this happen.  Bella could become collateral damage if he's not careful.

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

Bella is a badass and knows how to get things done and she knows how to work Edward love it.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

:)

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

i love it

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

I love kick ass Bella!!!! I love how Edward let her run the show. He has so much faith in her. I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.
Lisa....Gail Cullen

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Bring on the pants!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

What a way to celebrate!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

Daddy's home!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Good for Bella.  Charlie is too stupid to know he is being manipulated. 

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Loved it!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

I've been waiting so anxiously for this chapter and I can't wait for the chapter to come not to mention the sexy lemons!!! Update soon!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

I love strong Bella.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

So amazing to see her go from his kitten to lioness in minutes!

Reviewer: virginie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

je suis fiere d bella Qu'elle a soutenu cont son pere peut tu mettre des chapitre plus vite stp j'adore ton histoire et je suis impatiente merci

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Thank you for sharing 

Loving this fic!

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Good update

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

So glad that E is supporting her with the business stuff.  Charlie really needs a wake up call.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

"so you are going to wear pants!"

 Love that line!

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Please update soon!  I waited two weeks hopefully more story comes quickly!! Also Edward should probably say something to Charlie or I see his (Charlie) relationship with Bella going very badly, very fast.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Wow way to go Bella. She needed to set her father straight.

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Can't believe Charlie believes jake over Bella think he's in for a huge surprise there look forward to new York xx

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

I am so proud of Bella for standing up to her dad and not backing down.  Edward is amazed by her love it cant wait for more

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

I really love all the loving going on. But I would like to see Edward in action too. Maybe defending Bella.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Love little Elizabeth!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

lol gotta love 'em. Looks like Jacob doesn't want Bella to find out what he's been up to.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

:) 

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Way to go Bella, put Charlie in his place. Come on Bella you had jeans on, I'm sure the pants Edward buys you will be comfy and show your authority. That's all he is trying to do for you.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Love it!! :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

All  Bella needed was a chance to blossom. Edward is the best thing to happen in her life.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Bella is so smart.  She is handling everything so well.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

Love how Bella handled the grandparents.   Wonderful her getting to know Lizzie too.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Glad he behaved in the club with the wankers.  Buh Bye Embry

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2016 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Please update soon!!  

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Oh I can't wait to read when she goes back to her side of the Cartel & tell them how to do their business. They aren't going to like that.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

I loved how she told off the Woods. I so can't wait to hear when Edward hears.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

Awe how sad for them to be separated.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

Big changes for Bella

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow another great chapter. Love this Edward more and more.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Wow great chapter. Answered a lot of questions.

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

I like this Edward & Bella. Great story.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

I'm guessing little Elizabeth's mother is dead?

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

real good

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: scgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2016 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Wow, I love this story!! Nothing sexier than a mobward, well maybe a dom mobward but mobward nonetheless.  Can't wait to read more! Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Love Love Love !! Love your stories and this one is my # 1 favorite Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: becky Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

Love your story! You are a great author! I get so happy when I see your updates. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent! 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Another steamy chapter

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Bella knows her stuff. She's gonna make headway. 

Sherry

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Edward is finding out how intelligent and quick on her feet Bella really is. It's great that he is the opposite of her father. I can't wait for the cartel to see what exactly she's capable of!  And I'm so looking forward to the wedding!  

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Bella kicked ass, Edward knew she wasn't just a pretty face. and this is an awesome fic , girl be pound of what you've wrote it's most excellant.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

wow i love this edward and bella

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

i'm hoping the end result is Jacobs death at the hands of the lion

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

I love that Edward wants a partner in his wife not just arm candy.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

thank you for the update...Bella is going to shine and Edward will be very proud..until you post again

Reviewer: MaluTara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

i just LOVED IT!! so HOT!!! that line before the BJ! DAMN!!! can i be Bella?? 

and she's SO smart! :) i really love it! 

cant wait to see what's next :)

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

It seems as she has won the proverbial prize in spouses,but sonhas he.

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

This Edward kicks ass

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

:):)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Bella is amazing not just a pretty face lol.  Love it thanks so much

Reviewer: SilverNova3082 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

So happy to see him helping bella reach her potential

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2016 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

Damn I love this story.  And I love this Edward and Bella.  And Petal and Mrs. C.  Are there pics anywhere?

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