Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
I don't know what to say..I hate Anthony, why is Bella feeling anything for him? I would do the same in her shoes, that's why I'm upset? You're such an excellent writer, you make me feel like the characters are real. So much talent you have. I envy you so much. THANK YOU
Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
The suspense is killing me. Thank you for writing such a great story. Your a great author and love all your stories especially this one.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
I seriously think that this is how Edward should have just taken Bella in Twilight...had Jasper abduct her for him....! lol...
"I have her," he said, speaking into his phone.
I swear I shivvered all over when I read that!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
awesome first chapter...you have me so hooked...there may be danger for you if I catch up to the last posted chapter...i have chains and i can chain you to a desk to write ya know? lol....
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 27
OH shit Bella. Leave the room!!! Leave the damn room!!!
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh, I love this story. I just can't decide who is love
Date: 21 Apr 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 27
Dang! This is getting more complicated and way to good!!
Maybe I need help!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 26
Omo!! Can't wait
Date: 20 Apr 2016 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 26
Confused with the timeline of events, is there going to be more reaction from Bella or Edward with what happened. I keep thinking that Edward will have some redeeming qualities but if he allowed Anthony to touch Bella that way in his presence, guessing not.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I live in Spain and its hard not to wake up and check if this story has been updated. love this story!!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well I wonder what Edward will think when he finds out how he and Anthony treated her together.
Tough story but I must say more Mafia than most.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
ohhh
i cant decide who is worse anthony cos he is a total bastard
or edward cos he is underhand but i think he has real feelings for bella
not sure
looking forward to more
well done
Date: 20 Apr 2016 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 26
The last two chapters confused me. I'm lost. Did Edward let Anthony touch her or was it Anthony's dream? At what point did Edward beat Anthony? It's jumbled!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
They are both evil but I think Anthony is on the crazy side too. Poor Bella my heart breaks for her.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
Was this the plan I hope not Edward needs to get her away from him
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
I don't know who's worse Edward or Anthony; though I'm leaning toward Anthony.
I want to know exactly what happened with Edward and Anthony when Edward walked in on Anthony with Bella's shirt torn open. Does Edward not remember the night before when he allowed Anthony to touch her? If so I wanna know how that conversation went down. What in the world could Edward say to defend his actions to her.
Though, faking her funeral and having Charles think she's dead is probably the ulimate revenge.
I keep thinking Edward is gonna have Bella go have some plastic surgery to alter her looks done.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you for writing this great story
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm shocked. But can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 24
Finally glad it was with Edward
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Such a great storyline
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love it can't put it down
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 21
Can't stop reading so good
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
I can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great storytelling
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh bloody hell. Surely they wont.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
I can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
These characters are bad but seem to like them a lot
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love this chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder what he wants to talk about
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
Can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
I always admire your stories
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Very interesting story can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the characters
Date: 20 Apr 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 20 Apr 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
HOLYSHIT!!! WOW!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
I'm wondering what is going on with Edward. Something big must have gone down if he started using drugs again after not using for awhile.
Yeah, I think once she marries Edward and is not so afraid we will see the real Isabella come out & then these two brothers better watch out.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
On Nooooooooooo
Date: 20 Apr 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh God. I do NOT like Edward sharing her with Anthony at all.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 25
WTF!! o.O
I love this story!! :)
Date: 20 Apr 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
This story makes me want cry. I keep reading hoping for some kinda redemption. Anthony and Edward are just horrible. I wish Bella could escape them. Even if its in death then to keep being subjected to the torment. I know life doesn't always have happy endings but when reading we hope for them.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
These two give me whiplash. I can't imagine what Isabella is going through.
This story is so intriguing and wild ride. Just when I think I have it figured out it twists.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
Has Edward really decided to make her his wife? Edward is a complicated man. I'm sure he has Bella confused about his behavior. I kept waiting for Anthony to barrel through the door and go blastic of them.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm almost proud of Edward for finally making a stand.
Sherry
Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
I don't know how I am feeling about this... They want to blame it all on Charlie and it makes me angry because Charlie was doing his job and the real bad guys here are Anthony and Edward. I don't care how "nice" edward is I don't like him one bit. I feel like Bella is stronger than she's being... I'm mad at the females in this story too. Gosh I love when an author evicts so many emotions in me. I'm biting my nails waiting to see how this all goes and I'm nervous. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
Edward saved the day. Or at least I'm hoping so.
Sherry
Date: 19 Apr 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Plumcrzy62- If you have something to say then say it on facebook. I already know who your talking about.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
Well.... I wish I had a comment, but I am kind of speechless!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 24
I can't wait to see what his feelings are when it's all over.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
Is Edward gonna do a bait and switch?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Now he just has to get her on board for his plan.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
That was so sweet. Loved it, thank you.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Marrying him is much better than the alternatives as he does seem to really care for her.
I have to say that the comments back and forth betweeen the facebook comments is entertaining. It is ironic to me those who attach others about being okay about men's abusive actions toward wormn based on comment they make about Edward or Anthony......yet these same people are still reading the story. This is fiction people!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
It's going to take them both baby steps, New territory for both. Could be stockholm syndrome on Bella's side or it could be an attraction to Edward.
Can't wait to see him try to win her over.
Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
That is love . Love it she talks to him the way no other would dare other than family
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 20
I knew Alice was gonna do something like that.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
I think I like Victoria, I just hope she doesn't betray Bella in the end.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella life is hell but damn, she passes out a lot.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
Those last few lines gave me chills.
I'm not liking Heidi must either.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ugh!!! I wanna smack Anthony and Edward. And take Bella away.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh shit. Anthony is the devil.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
I agree Bella, if Edward is standing in as boss, why does it seem like Anthony is calling all the shots?
Sherry
Date: 18 Apr 2016 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Finally I feel like I can breathe again. I am so glad Edward got her.
Date: 18 Apr 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm so happy Heidi is dead
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
I can not get over how awful Anthony is.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
So close...
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Charlie. Having to watch his daughter be assaulted, how horrible that would be. I think Edward and Anthony both just about alike. They are demented. Can't say I blame Bella for not wanting either of them to touch her.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
What a sick and twisted scene these two cooked up. I can't imagine how Charlie is feeling or how it effected James. He seemed to have been befriending Bella. Edward is just as fucked in the head as his brother.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think I may like this James.
Sherry
Date: 18 Apr 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
I feel horrible that Bella is in this position and she doesn't even know why.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh holy hell. She's not got a chance in hell to get away from them.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward and Anthony are both deranged. I like that Esme isn't the weak motherly figure, that she'll jump right in on her boys to get the truth. Aro isn't a smart man.
Sherry
Date: 18 Apr 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
Garrett needs to take care of Jane. She needs to get punished! Edward is turning out to be a pretty good guy. I don't even feel bad that he killed Heidi. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
It's like playing cat and mouse with Sam. Sam knows who took Bella, but he can't prove a thing. So, he'll keep chasing the Cullen's for now. I can hardly wait to find out why Charlie decided to betray the trust Carlisle had in him.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
Damn Anthony is heartless. She was so close to being discovered by NYPD, yet so far.
Sherry
Date: 18 Apr 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love his plan I think Anthony needs to die or he should of married Heidi that would of been a good punishment lol
Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
YEAH! LOVE IT, THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Gah, I already dislike Anthony.
Sherry