Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 18 Dr. Cullen vs Swan
Thanx!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 18 Dr. Cullen vs Swan
Thanks for taking all the time and trouble to post this again...
Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 15 ullen vs. Sleeping with demons
He will need protective gare to sleep with her lol. Poor girl she thinks she has lost everything. Charlie better be OK
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 15 ullen vs. Sleeping with demons
The heat is building between them.
Please keep Charlie safe.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 17 Cullen & Swan vs. Time is running out
:) :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 14 Good vs. Evil
Will Charlie loose his job over the violent cop under his command?
Edward may be sleeping next to Bella but I'm sure he still values his balls. No touching.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
Whoa, Edward. Take a step back. Bring Charlie on board. Off the record. They have internal ways of dealing with crooked cops.
Poor Jessica.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 12 Cullen vs Urges
She is feeling his need to take care of her. Something so new her emotions are overwhelmed.
Edward, being a typical male thinks he has wronged her some how. Maybe she can give him juyst a little reassurance.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 11 Cullen vs. the unknown
They are both using bribery tactics of sorts.
Isabella begs for Charlie not to be involved and go ves Edward a sneak peek into her personality as well as her dark secrets. Edward is trying his best to protect her and uses his not telling Charlie as leverage.
The clothing indecent was a cute bit of levity.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 17 Cullen & Swan vs. Time is running out
WOAW it's pretty intense in here. I hope Charlie is OK. Great chapters, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 Cullen vs. Buttman
Interesting turn of events. Why would an officer of the law be entering a patients room without consent or warrant?
Their mutual attraction is becoming a greater factor in their banter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 9 Cullen vs. right from wrong
Jasper and Alice enter the picture.
Every time Isabella is attacked, it is staged to look like an accident.............
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 8 Cullen vs. Isabella's Journal
Bella has opened up her mind significantly to Edward. Even when he thinks she is shutting down.
Everything she says and does is very calculated.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 17 Cullen & Swan vs. Time is running out
Thanks!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 17 Cullen & Swan vs. Time is running out
Really enjoying this the second time around. Love the new stuff!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 16 Edward vs. Mark
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 7 Isabella vs. Edward
She is far from inattentive to her surroundings. Yet that is one of the reasons she is in this mess to begin with; she saw something she wasn't supposed to and now is paying for it.
Will Edward cave to her wishes and leave or risk her rath and stay?
Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 15 ullen vs. Sleeping with demons
Thanx!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 17 Cullen & Swan vs. Time is running out
the suspense builds...where the fuck is Charlie?
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cullen vs. the witnesses
An un expected admirerer that Isabella's protector wants to pop a cap into. Interesting.
Where was Jessica's body found?
Lauren is a conspirator against Isabella, as far as I'm concerned.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 Edward vs. Mark
Renee is dead, isn't she? and Charlie? I hope not!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 15 ullen vs. Sleeping with demons
bed hog! Hah!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 5 Officer Cullen vs. A hard choice
Isabella is protecting her father somehow. Whoever they are, must have threaten to kill him if she talked.
Edward is going to become a cranky man if he continues to be her surveillance at night and parole officer during the day.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 14 Good vs. Evil
The more I read of this, the more I remember the story. It has been a while, though, and it is still mostly new to me. I'm glad he told Charlies.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 Officer Cullen vs. Officer Swan
She and Jessica must have witnessed a drug deal or some other illegal activity. She must have recognized the someone. Now her best friend is dead and she is on the hit list.
Did Edward remember his gun?
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 Swan vs Cullen
Charlie set this all up. He knows very well what he put in motion the day he requested Edward Cullen to be his daughter's protector for the next five years.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 Cullen vs. Swan
Their first official standoff.
Bella gave up a few negligible signals of her internal struggles. But for the moist part, she kept the wall intact.
I have a wierd theory that Isabella was set up for the murder of her best friend to keep Charlie silent about something that is going on in their Town.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 5 Officer Cullen vs. A hard choice
Such a good guy.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 4 Officer Cullen vs. Officer Swan
Oh no...
Date: 11 Apr 2016 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 3 Swan vs Cullen
Uh oh... Busted!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 Cullen vs. Swan
Let it go? Yeah, not going to happen.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 State of Washington vs Swan
So many pieces still missing in Isabella's story. Can't wait for Edward to put them all back together.
Sounds like Bella's Knight in Gucci has arrived. What will it take to crack her protective shell?
Date: 11 Apr 2016 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 State of Washington vs Swan
Go get her, Edward.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 4:18 PM Title: Prologue
Need read this before. Looking forward to leaning more about these two characters. Age difference?
Bella has an office?
Arrested for what and how many previous times?
Why would Edward's name cause such a visceral reaction?
Must read on.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 14 Good vs. Evil
I am worried about Charlie. Bella feels safe with Edward
Date: 11 Apr 2016 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 14 Good vs. Evil
Im loving this story... so glad she told..
Date: 10 Apr 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 3 Swan vs Cullen
Trouble indeed Mr Cullen. Loving this story and now need to rush off to read more. Xx
Date: 10 Apr 2016 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 14 Good vs. Evil
Loved this chapter, especially your take on O J Simpson. I'm glad Charlie now knows what happened.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
and all is revealed! yes!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 12 Cullen vs Urges
OH! MUCH better!!! Thanks again. And when I ask questions about things that you haven't revealed yet, it is just me thinking out loud and I don't, in any way, want you to spoil the story for me!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 12 Cullen vs Urges
I see now what a fabulous job you are doing, re-formatting each chapter so it reads much more easily for us! This chapter is all bunched up together and that makes it more difficult to read. Thanks for all your hard work. Damn this is a sexy chapter!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 11 Cullen vs. the unknown
scandalous motherfucker. love that phrase!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 10 Cullen vs. Buttman
It's cute how they flirt. Who is that officer? a corrupt cop??
Author's Response:
laughs am I supposed to answer all these questions or are they hypothetical? giggling...muah!!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 9 Cullen vs. right from wrong
It's the same person who tried to break into her house, isn't it? That person did this. Who is it and why is she protecting them?
Date: 10 Apr 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 8 Cullen vs. Isabella's Journal
It's all good, dear. It's the story that counts, for me. I hope Edward can clear her name so she can pursue her interests in forensics.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 7 Isabella vs. Edward
ok he revealed himself with that "fine ass" comment. way to go, Cullen..
Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 Cullen vs. the witnesses
ugh. slimy Mike. It's interesting how everyone from the party says Bella wasn't beat up looking when she was there. That means the police are lying when they say her facial bruises are old ones. Are there dirty cops involved? Is Charlie dirty? Don't answer, I 'm just thinking out loud.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 Officer Cullen vs. A hard choice
Reading more of this today. I like that it's all new to me. I'm pretty sure it's the real killer, and the one who beat her up, who tried to break into her house.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 14 Good vs. Evil
:)
Date: 10 Apr 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 14 Good vs. Evil
Great post!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 14 Good vs. Evil
this just gets better and better
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 14 Good vs. Evil
Excellent, well thought out chapter. I agree with everything you said.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:39 PM Title: Prologue
Seems like this is going to be another really interesting story, especially as I didn't know it the first time ;)
Date: 10 Apr 2016 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
WOAWWW I didn't see that coming, I had no idea her mother was part of the trick. Great story, thank you for sharing.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
THANK U FOR THE UPDATES.... I LOVE IT CANT WAIT...
Date: 10 Apr 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
I loved this the first time I read it years ago and I love it even more this time around...
Date: 10 Apr 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
it was getting super good and there is no next button.... just great
Date: 10 Apr 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
good
Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 11 Cullen vs. the unknown
good
Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
I'm so happy she told him he will protect her
Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 10 Cullen vs. Buttman
good
Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 9 Cullen vs. right from wrong
good
Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 Cullen vs Urges
My heart is breaking for her so sad
Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 11 Cullen vs. the unknown
That is one way to get her to do what he wants
Date: 10 Apr 2016 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
If Edward kills him without first getting ahold of enough evidence to show Isabella was innocent, then she's stuck forever taking the blame for Jess' death :(
Date: 10 Apr 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 8 Cullen vs. Isabella's Journal
good
Date: 10 Apr 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 7 Isabella vs. Edward
good
Date: 10 Apr 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 6 Cullen vs. the witnesses
good
Date: 10 Apr 2016 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 Officer Cullen vs. A hard choice
good
Date: 10 Apr 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 4 Officer Cullen vs. Officer Swan
good
Date: 10 Apr 2016 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 State of Washington vs Swan
good
Date: 10 Apr 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
Loved it!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 12 Cullen vs Urges
Still a great chapter, lol :)
Date: 09 Apr 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 12 Cullen vs Urges
Thanks for the post!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth
Renee for the ruin. I wonder if she's dead.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 11 Cullen vs. the unknown
Nice :)
Date: 09 Apr 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12 Cullen vs Urges
Looking forward to the next update. My guess is that its a woman terrorizing Bella. Something that I read in her Journal entry makes me think so, even though I don't remember which chapter I read it on.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 3 Swan vs Cullen
Good question, there at the end. I can't wait to find out the real story!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 2 Cullen vs. Swan
I had previously marked this story as complete, so I know you finished it once upon a time. How many chapters was it then? Will it be the same now? Are you changing any of it or just re-posting? Just curious....
Author's Response:
This story is 27 chapters long. I am trying to actually get it all posted today but I have to head to my sister's for dinner aorund three...what is taking so long is my formatting isn't meshing up with TWCS so I have to go through it sentence by sentence. Just to show you what I mean I will repost the next chapter as is so you can all see my horror...lmao... I am NOT changing anything, maybe when I have the same word in the sentence twice but that is it. It IS complete...its just a little time consuming working over each chapter...
Date: 09 Apr 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 State of Washington vs Swan
It's like I'm reading a new story! I love that! I wonder too why the hell she was so beat up on the day of her arrest!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 10 Cullen vs. Buttman
Loving this
Date: 09 Apr 2016 8:12 PM Title: Prologue
I read this story long ago and am going to love re-reading it as you post it again! I can't say enough how good it is to have you back writing and re-posting again!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 10 Cullen vs. Buttman
He can't fight it any more. I'd he going to find out what the cop wants
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 Officer Cullen vs. Officer Swan
Ok, now I'm invested. You hooked me. You always hook me...sometimes i feel like i'm YOUR HandMonkey.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 9 Cullen vs. right from wrong
He will stick to her like glue
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 Cullen vs. Buttman
love it :) always love your edwards in your stories
Date: 09 Apr 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 10 Cullen vs. Buttman
dang a cliffy... WHO, whey, epps - thank you
Date: 09 Apr 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 Cullen vs. Isabella's Journal
thank you, I never read this one before; enjoying, and WONDERING what the hek is happening.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 10 Cullen vs. Buttman
OMG PLZ OH PLZ UPDATE PLZ.....LOL
Date: 09 Apr 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 10 Cullen vs. Buttman
Wonder who it is? Thanks for the post!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 9 Cullen vs. right from wrong
Great chapter!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 8 Cullen vs. Isabella's Journal
Thanx!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 7 Isabella vs. Edward
:) :)