Date: 22 Aug 2016 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
Excellent chapter!
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2016 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 32
Well if it's not gonna be puppy dogs and rainbows then ........ I hesitantly look forward to the next update. (he he he) Now as for Alice's attitude hmmmm! makes you wonder how good a friend she's being at the moment. OK!!!!! I'm ready.....Bring on the b*tch!!!!! READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 22 Aug 2016 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 32
Will Alice be part of the movie deal as an advisor or assistant script writer?
Bella's loss of anonymity may be a rough thing for Carlisle to take. He may insinuate that Bella's career choice could hinder the twins in some way.
Is Charlie aware of his daughter's pen name?
Date: 21 Aug 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow, a movie deal!!!!!!
Date: 21 Aug 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
I'm wondering, with this news of her book possible being made into a movie, and the certainty of her being outed as a smut author if that happens, how Edward's kids and family wii deal with that. Like you said, not all puppy dogs and rainbows....Maybe they could have homes in both places....down the line. Alice took that better than I expected, well, after some reality checks from Bella! LOL! lovely story, I enjoy it a lot!
Date: 21 Aug 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
Surprises for both of them WOW.
Date: 19 Aug 2016 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
HOLYSH*T! WOW! Tanya is a psycho!! I love this story and I am dying for more!! :)
Date: 18 Aug 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 31
The lawyer needs to contact Edward about the threat. Tanya is dangerous.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 31
Did Tanya's sugar daddy just agree to her having Bella killed?
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 31
Like I mentioned a few chapters back....unfortunately her type of writing is gonna be used against them. Tanya will use it to get the kids back ( Please!!!!! Let me be wrong) READ YOU SOON 😥
Date: 18 Aug 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 31
Tanya is such an evil Bitch I am glad Aro would not do anything more for her. What is she going to try and do to Edward and Bella.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
Tanya is such a bitch. I hope Bella takes Tanya down instead of Tanya taking Bella down.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 31
Will Lauren find a way to inform Edward that Tanya is in total vindictive mode?
What will Lauren's sentence be? Some sort of child healthcare training? Maybe some public service?
Date: 18 Aug 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 31
Sounds like Rey is some sort of mafia guy or something...... Mikey better watch his back.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 17 Aug 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 31
OMG is Reynold really going to have Edward and Bella killed? I hope he finds out that she just fucked the hell out of the help and dumps here skanky ass!
Date: 17 Aug 2016 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 31
All I could think while reading this chapter was "I really hope Aro goes down for not adhering to Tarasoff!" Ahhh the life of a social worker ;) Nice chapter!
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2016 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wow she is selfish and pure evil
Date: 17 Aug 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 31
Ugh Tanya needs to be humiliated & thrown out on her ass!
Date: 17 Aug 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 31
Tanya needs to be put down like a rabid dog before hurting Bella! It needs to bid, public & spectacular and she needs to lose Reynold. Maybe he'll catch her & Mike before she can enact her plan against Bella. It won't get her children back & she doesn't even want them!
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope Bella is strong enough to withstand Tanya's threats
Date: 17 Aug 2016 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 31
Omg really. Seriously. Ok I'm in shock. Loved it though but it makes me hate Tanya so much more. Why????
Date: 17 Aug 2016 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
Tanya is a nasty whore! I hope everyone can figure her out before she does something bad to Bella.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
Well damn....what a mean bitch. I hope Tanya gets taken down quickly, I hate drama.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 30
They're so good for each other. Bella hopefully will be able to move soon.
Date: 16 Aug 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 30
those two are so sweet. Can't wait for her to get to Tampa. Still wondering about the Skankya situation and when she'll show up to make life difficult for them
Date: 16 Aug 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 30
So sad to see him leave. She will get things going it wont take her long to get back to him
Date: 15 Aug 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 30
This is going way to smoothly!! Something is going to happen i can feel it!! Tanya will probably be involved.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
What will Alice do without her?
Date: 15 Aug 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 30
The move needs to be easy & seamless because Tanya drama will surface and Bella & Edward need to be together & form a united front bit would be great if the kids love Bella & refuse to see Tanya!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 30
It can only be easy if YOU! allow them to be happy😊 (he hd he) READ YOU SOON💖
Date: 15 Aug 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 30
Awe that was hard but she will be moving as soon as she can and she is going to visit soon too
Date: 14 Aug 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
I am excited for more!!! ;)
Date: 14 Aug 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 30
Bittersweet chapter. They know they will be together eventually, but now must part. It does make sense for her to move to him, but the fact that he was willing to go to her is huge! I hope she can find library work soon, but who knows? Thanks for all you give us, your readers!
P.S. Happy back to school....
Date: 14 Aug 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 30
Does she really need her library job? I mean with her book royalties.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
She should get a library position at the University of South Florida. I tool my kids there for a gifted program when they were little. It was a nice school campus. Smaller that UF but still nice.
Date: 14 Aug 2016 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 13 Aug 2016 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think Bella should move back to Tampa as Edward has the kids to think about and she will be closer to her dad as well which will please Charlie no end lol look forward to next update and by the way love the bdms bit in this chapter xx
Date: 11 Aug 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think Bella should move to Tampa. It's where both family is and it's a lot more realistic for her to move to them instead of them moving to her like I have read in many stories before.
Date: 11 Aug 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
I love this story!! I love this chapter. I am just finding it a bit...well, it's weird that Edward had brought up doing this with his ex in the first place but then for Bella to go and give it the old college try... o.O Anyhoo...I think it's great for them to play and have some fun but I am hoping they don't turn this into a life style...I don't know. It's just me being in a funny mood I guess! ;)
I love them I just hope they don't turn into a BDSM story. Although, you know I love that but just not with these two! :)
Date: 11 Aug 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 29
She should move back to Tampa. He has kids and family there and she can write anywhere.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 29
Edward has a larger support system in Florida but I'm not sure they are all in agreement with him bringing Bella into the family. The children are a priority.
Bella would be closer to her father. Old drama would definitely rear its ugly head.
Alice can still edit from wherever she lives. But it would be nice if she and Jasper moved in support of Bella.
Hm, how involved in the BDSM routine will they venture?
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2016 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 29
That was a sweet and adventurous chapter for Bella. As for who should move it would make more sense for her to move back home, besides it would be easier than to uproot the kids which should always come first. (You're better than you think at writing about BDSM) you go girl! READ YOU SOON 💖
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2016 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh wow yummy but still sweet too
Date: 11 Aug 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 29
Bella should move to Tampa
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2016 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 29
You lost me at the spanking.... No hitting of anyone of any kind for me.... I'll check out your next story... sorry :(
Date: 11 Aug 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 29
no more spanking....:(....that was good, though. I enjoyed it! As to who should mo ve? IDK. Seriously. They should be together so one of them should. Maybe since Edward has children, it should be Bella who moves so the kids don't have to change their friends and school?
Date: 11 Aug 2016 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 29
Love love love this chapter. Awesome job. I thino8ng that Bella should move back to Tampa. Her father lives there and Edward's whole family lives there. I know Bella had a hard time growing up but she is an adult now. She can put the bullies in their place now.
Do you have any stories to recommend for BDSM? LI've reading them.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2016 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
oookh yummy chapter. Mybe they can pen the novel together. hmmm
Date: 11 Aug 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
I think Bella should move back to Tampa!! She can write from anywhere and her father is there also.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 29
Tampa! All their family lives there.
Date: 10 Aug 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 29
I think Bella should be the one moving since she can write anywhere but I think the Cullen's need to be put in their place when it comes to Bella
Date: 10 Aug 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
I would definitely let Edward dominate me.
Date: 10 Aug 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wasn't expecting that! Woohoo!
Date: 10 Aug 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hmmm can't wait for net chapter
Date: 09 Aug 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 28
Damn that was wow, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
melissa
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
An experienced Edward in the Dom arena is going to rock Isabella's world.
Alice may just get her wish and a number one book to promote.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2016 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 28
Yeah! Yeah!!! Great chapter.... but now I'm off to seduce the hubby. Oooooo!!!! he's gonna know I've been reading (he he he) READ YOU SOON 😋
Date: 08 Aug 2016 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 28
He is going to show her how much he loves her
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2016 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
I'm kinda sad that he did the BDSM thing with Tanya. It's like every single one of his firsts belong to Tanya. It just made me upset to read it
Date: 08 Aug 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oooooo, Edward dominating!!!!!! Can't wait. Glad they had a good time with Alice and Jasper.
Date: 08 Aug 2016 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 28
I cant wait until the next chaper!! This should be fun to read!!!lol
Date: 07 Aug 2016 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 28
Alice hyper and Jasper stoned. Hmmm....I do like the BDSM touches. Look forward to the lemon, but not the separation. Until next time...
Date: 07 Aug 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
You're not sorry at all.
Great update
Date: 06 Aug 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
Please please update soon! I'm really into this story, I hope to see to some more action with exes soon
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2016 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 27
I look forward to it. READ YOU SOON 💖
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
Aww they are adorable together I just wish one would choose to move and I'm not sure who it should be because Bella has the people who were horrible to her in school living in her hometown where Edward lives but her dad does live there and so do Edwards parents but then where Bella lives is like a fresh start for both of them away from all those they went to school with but it means moving his kids away from his parents and their friends so that's why I can't choose who should move. I do hope they figure it out because long distance relationships get hard and a lot of times you'll have misunderstandings that you can't talk out in person and the distance from them not being able to touch that person or wake up to them every morning gets tough. Love this chapter can't wait to read the next one.
Melissa
Date: 05 Aug 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
Love that they can't keep their hands off of each other
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 27
The cuteness factor between these two is almost overwhelming. But so good.
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh I agree with Bella hot sexy guy who can cook gimme gimme
Date: 05 Aug 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
Awesome :D Cannot wait to see how the kiddos react to Bella :D
Date: 05 Aug 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good for them.. lucky horney rabbits.
Date: 05 Aug 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 27
I could wake up to Edward fixing me breakfast!
Date: 05 Aug 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 27
so you're the writer and you get to decide how in detail to go with each lemon. your perogative. i'll live. lol! nice story. good for them to have some time alone before the family stuff takes over!
Date: 04 Aug 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wonderful they are getting to spend time together.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 26
They are sizzling together. It would be easier if Bella moved back to Tampa. They would both have family around and Bella needs happy memories from her home town.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;