[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2016 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great story
Date: 01 Aug 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
What you said in your closing A/N makes me want to read the 2 drafts you didn't use. I liked it fine as you ended up doing it, so wonder what didn't make the cut. I look forward to seeing how this story plays out. Thanks!
Date: 01 Aug 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad that Lauren is going to have to take some responsibility. Was wondering why Jessica could be in trouble but I guess her not ensuring his epi-pen was current is an issue...plus entrusting her child to a moron.
Date: 01 Aug 2016 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
This chapter was great!! Cant wait to see who moves where!! I say Bella would be easier to move but hey what do i know!!! lollol
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
You can never make any kind of mistake. Your heart always takes your words were they should go never doubt that. Read you soon 💖
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 26
Drama? Hopefully not from Jessica, more likely from Tanya and Lauren.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
Jasper's a riot.
Together again at last.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
What happens to Lauren? She blatantly miss guided her godchild. Jessica should press charges for child endangerment.
Dr. Superhero, that's funny.
Date: 31 Jul 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 26
I think you did a great job with this chapter.
Date: 31 Jul 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
I hope that the drama is not between Bella and Edward. I they are a united front.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
I loved it they just can't get enough of each other now what will Alice and Jasper think of Edward
Date: 31 Jul 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm glad Lauren has gotten into trouble. She almost killed poor little Seth. Being godmother, she should have known better. The teacher even told them about the allergy.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm glad that Lauren is getting punished in some way. But it seems like she is probably going to just buy her way out of this, esp with Tanya whore's help.
I loved the sexy times. ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 25
YES!! I cannot wait for the lemonade :D
Date: 29 Jul 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
He has made it to her!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 28 Jul 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
At last! I wonder how this will work out in the end. One of them will have to move, I think, as long distance romances rarely work out. Can't wait for those promised lemons....thanks!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2016 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story. It's part of my morning ritual of reading your update before my day begins. Would love to end the day with an update but I know real life gets in the way.
Date: 28 Jul 2016 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well when are you posting the hot chapter? come on great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 25
Of course Jessica would try to latch onto Edward instead of just being a grateful human being. Ugh.... Jasper is too funny. Looking forward to needing a shamwow. LOL
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2016 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
Ooooooo! I like lemonade! READ YOU SOON 😉
Date: 28 Jul 2016 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
Cant wait to get lucky with the next chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad they get to spend some time together.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2016 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awe I loved it they miss each other so much now fun times
Date: 28 Jul 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
Let the shmexy times begin!
Date: 28 Jul 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it! I'm glad Seth is fine and Edward is a hero. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 26 Jul 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 24
Lauren needs to realize what she did. Is she the godmother of the twins also? If she is keep her away?
Date: 26 Jul 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
Lol!! I love these two!!
Date: 25 Jul 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 24
Glad Jessica didn't go off on him. I was concerned she'd take Lauren's side.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yay! Dr. Superhero!
Date: 25 Jul 2016 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 24
Who hooo! Here comes Dr. Feelgood!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 24
LEMONADE!!!!! READ YOU SOON a86;
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
The whole dam school needs a restraining order against Lauren. Or maybe she just needs to be arrested..... hmmmm
Date: 25 Jul 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 24
So happy Seth is going to be OK. Edward needs some positive stuff happening
Date: 25 Jul 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 25 Jul 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
What a wonderful chapter. Great news all around. He is a super hero. Lemon time next chapter.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
All I can say is....can't wait for the update!
superhero smexy times!
Date: 24 Jul 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
Will anything happen to Lauren? She shouldn't be anyone's godparent! I'll bet Jessica will never let her near Seth again. I'm so glad Seth will be ok. Edward is awesome!!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 24 Jul 2016 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
So glad that Seth is ok. Glad his mom and the press are singing Edward's praises.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm mildly disturbed that there is no mention of repercussions for Lauren. As his godmother, she should have known about his peanut allergy and been aware of what she was feeding him. I'm also prone to wonder why his mother didn't make sure Lauren knew. I'm glad he's ok now, though. I'll get back to focussing on the main story now between Edward and Bella.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm glad Edward has such a good support system. Who knows, Bella may turn him into an optimist yet. Or at least not such a pessimist. Can't wait for the reunion.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank goodness Seth is ok and now Edward can feel better about his day but with Edward in the news will Tanya make things harder for him
Date: 22 Jul 2016 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
That dumb twit he's her godson and she didn't know he was allergic to peanuts, seriously and worrying more about getting her phone back and then his mom sent him with an expired epi-pen when she should have gotten a new one before the other expired goodness that's her sons life she was gambling with. Ok I'm ok now that would just drive me crazy especially when my youngest who was in the NICU after she was born came home with an apnea monitor because she would forget to breath every once in a while and it would alert me when it would happen and she had to wear it for quite a while and I had to constantly monitor all the things connected to it to make sure they were working properly it was a lot of work but I did it for my daughter because she means the world to me just like her 2 older sisters so I get a little testy when I read about things like this even though it is fiction it still makes me want to find those two fictional twits are shake some sense into them. Lol. Another great chapter can't wait to read the next one.
melissa
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
Lauren is a waste of space.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
She called her babies parasites. No way would she see them again. Esme can help during puberty or better yet, Bella.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
I don't see her doing BDSM. She is a romantic, but with a little kinky loving.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
Ugh. Lauren should be charged with something due to her neglect of Seth! Jessica should be held accountable also for having an expired epi pen! I bet nothing happens to either of them. I need me some Edward and Bella! Hope they are up soon....
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow and that was her God son how did she not know what a bit*h I hope the school bands her from having anything to do with anything
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
So basically his godmother tried to kill him. Nice. Now will Lauren and Jessica try to blame Edward for the episode or be grateful he saved Seth's life? Stupid bitches!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh thank god! Dr daddyward to the rescue, that was scary. Hope Seth is OK, Edward would be gutted if he wasn't. That bint needs a slap, I hope she's not thinking of calling Tanya or doing anything to Liam & Lucy, (maybe I just to suspicious).
Date: 21 Jul 2016 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh man! You can't leave me there! That was an adrenalin filled ride! I need more. I can't wait. But I have too. Ack! Love your fics, even if I don't reply much. Thanks for all your great writing!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
NOW!!! he'll face a law suit and Tanya's "Slime Ball" attorney will somehow twist sh*t in her favor. Who else saw that coming a mile away? ( yeah I'm on a roll here due to a sucky day ....SORRY) lol READ YOU SOON : )
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 23
Stupid Lauren should have several restraining orders against her as well. She almost murdered Jessica's kid, because she is a dumb bitch. I would have slammed her phone on the concrete.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Too bad he couldn't use the scissors on Lauren's throat!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
Dumb Lauren...
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
So much for the Godmother taking care of her ward.
Jessica needs to find better friends.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Lauren needs to be shot!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
Sadly some people are useless that way. Lemme guess, his parents will blame e for it despite the messed up Eli-pen.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
Jessica is not much better sending her allergic son off with an expired epi-pen! Neither one should be responsible for children ! Bet all those kids will want to be doctors !
Date: 21 Jul 2016 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
What a horrible Godmother! I'm glad my children never had horrible chaperones like that at their school. I'm glad Edward could save him. I hope he will be alright. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 21 Jul 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
Between Lauren and Jessica, Seth is lucky to still be alive. At least Edward was there to save the day. I work at a public facility with kids and we are not allowed to administer epi pens due to liability issues. Gotta love our litigious society. And as for Lauren, some people never leave high school. The fact that she is still stuck on Bella means that her life must really suck. It will be interesting to see Jessica's reaction at the hospital.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
SO, first, I LOVE THIS! GO DR. DADDYWARD!!! ;)
Now, I want to punch the ever lovin shit out of that stupid B*TCH Lauren Mallory!! And why in the samhell was Seth's epi-pen expired!!! For the love of all that is hopl!! His mother should be slapped too!!! >:(
I can't wait for more!! :)
Date: 21 Jul 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
That is so scarry Edward is so cool under pressure and someone needs to slap the shit out of Laraun
Date: 21 Jul 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
If Seth is Lauren's Godson then she should know that he was allergic to peanuts. Hope Seth is going to be ok. So glad Edward was there.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
Someone should bitch slap Lauren and get her arrested for being stupid.
Date: 20 Jul 2016 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think that Bella is going to be the mother that Liam and Lacey need, only Edward and Bella don't say that out loud right now. This is ok because they have to figure some things out first, but I'm sure it is going to happen.
Tanya and Lauren are going to learn that they cannot always do and have what they want. There are rules to follow and no Volturi can take the kids away from Edward! Edward is cautous and this is absolutely right, also he's got Charlie on his side and I think he's a force to be reckoned with ;)
Date: 19 Jul 2016 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 22
I I agree with both Edward and Bella. They both have valid arguments.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
I agree with Edward, the only reason Tanya got pregnant was to get Edward to marry her but she didn't even want the twins which is horrible you should never purposely get pregnant and on top of that you especially shouldn't do it when you never even wanted those kids that's just cruel to those innocent children. So I completely see where Edward is coming from. I know Bella means well but with a mother like that it would probably do more damange to those kids than help them because I can just imagine how she would treat them, I'm sure she would put on a show in front of everyone but her true colors would show when she's alone with those kids and they don't deserve that. Children should be cherished because they are a tremendous gift. Anyway that's just my opinion on the topic.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
As the responsible parent, Edward has the correct approach. He knew the twins would be to young to miss someone they didn't bond over during their formative years.
Bella's situation is different. She was old enough to understand and suffer the consequences of her mother's departing action.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 22
I hate to be a kill joy but PLEASE tell me that it's not gonna be Bella's ghost writing that gives Tanya what she wants. 😩 READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 18 Jul 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
I see both sides but if I had to choose, it would be Edward.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 18 Jul 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
I can understand her asking the question though. . She needed all the info so she can support him too.
Date: 17 Jul 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
That is so cool that you are writing a story in a story!
I think Edward knows what is best for his children and keeping Tanya away is best. Maybe by the time Lucy needs a mother's guidance, Bella will be in that role. Right now Grandma Esme is filling the role of mother figure for them. I don't think Bella had someone doing that for her.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 17 Jul 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love that you're using your real life stories in this story. I get that you have to change their names. I do see where Bella is coming from, always having longed to know her mother, but glad she can see Edward's side with regards to Tanya. Just what is Tanya up to? Has she forgotten she signed those papers, or does this new sleazy lawyer think he can get them set aside? I wonder how Bella and Edward will work out their bi-costal relationship....maybe she can write from anywhere? I'm so loving the story!
Date: 17 Jul 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
I agree with Edward. Tanya was just an incubator nothing more.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2016 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
I loved it Bella and her friends are great for each other a family really and now Edward is added but will Tanya come in a make problems for Bella and her family I can't wait for more and I am looking forward to your next too
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2016 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 21
Tanya sounds scary and then she hires a crooked attorney to f*ck with Edward because she hates Bella...There is some serious shit coming isn't there? If I may be so bold and ask... Please!! not too much angst 😩 this is my comfort story right now😊 READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 15 Jul 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
Muito legal. Amo SUA Escrita. Desculpe POR não escrever em inglês mas .... bom na próxima eu escrevo. Até breve
Author's Response:
Obrigado pela revisão . E com a ajuda de Traduz Google , eu era capaz de entender.
Date: 15 Jul 2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no I dont like the mention of Jacob!!! I have a feeling him and Tanya might team up against our couple though i hope not!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
I wonder if Aro will try to use Bella's profession against Edward and try to take the twins away from him, even though she doesn't want them herself, just to hurt him! Am I close?