Date: 14 Jul 2016 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
Jasper is to funny lol. Charlie loves his girl. Tanya is an evil bitch .
Date: 14 Jul 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
Hilarious! Control + ALT + Delete Jasper reboot. Lol..
Date: 14 Jul 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved Jasper on this chapter. Can't wait to see what Jenks has to say.
Date: 14 Jul 2016 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 21
Too funny. Charlie is scary!
Date: 14 Jul 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved Jasper's reaction to finding out about Bella's nom-de-plume! This is a great story so far. I only have one small complaint : when someone says an animal that has been fixed is no longer a "he" or a "she." When a woman has a hysterectomy is she no longer female? If a man has his testes removed due to cancer does he stop being "male"? I suppose it is just a pet peeve of mine (pun intended).
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2016 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh my Charlie was awesome gotta love him but how bad is Tanya going to make things for them and poor Jasper his brain does not compute
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
Jasper will never be able to look at Bella the same way from this point forward. Lol.
Maybe Bella should write a story about an erotic author who ends up giving sex advise to men once her identity is leaked out. Sounds almost plausible. Hehehe.
Will Tanya once again set her sights on Bella?
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
Charlie is such a great Dad. Like the idea for Dad/Kid date. DEF tell the school.
lol for frying Jasper's brain.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
I dont think I need to hear what Bella thinks about Tanya most of it is not very nice lol. face time was hot as hell WOW.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
Omg!!!!! Seriously!!!!! *fans self*
I hope they're together soon. tanya just doesn't deserve visitation, and I just know she's doing it with horrible intentions.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
The long distance relationship will help him in the interim while he navigate the mess Tanya is trying to stir up. Tanya can't use the excuse that his new relationship is causing him to be a bad parent.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
One of the hottest long-distance lemons I have read! Good job! Keep up the great work . I love this story
Date: 11 Jul 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'll be waiting and waiting and waiting (he he he) READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 11 Jul 2016 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
Best lemonade ever!
Date: 11 Jul 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
well that was HOT! Edward all covered in jizz....oh my! I still wonder what Tanya is up to...and who will make the move to the other. Or will it be something else? lovely story!
Date: 10 Jul 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
Can't wait to find out more about what is going on with Tanya. I'm kind of worried about her. Hot FaceTime sex.....wow.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2016 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it awe Edward needs his Bella now what will he find out about his ex
Date: 10 Jul 2016 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad he got time to reconnect with his kids. . Smart of him to talk to lawyer and Charlie. . Yummy end time
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2016 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love the phone sexy times.... I do hope Edward gets on quickly with calling his attorney and Charlie and doesn't get distracted by something else. I'd hate for him to keep PLANNING to call them and then something bad happens (Tanya wise), because he didn't get around to it. And Edward better not dare ask Bella to move to Tampa. He knows how tramatic her life was there. It would be different if she volunterred to move, but he better not ask her to. He would be an unfeeling douche canoe if he did.
Date: 10 Jul 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Jenks is his lawyer. But why is he going to contact Charlie? Love the kids being involved in the story.
Author's Response:
Order of protection against Tanya. Edward needs to make sure that it's still in place. Tanya is not allowed near her children and Edward needs his advice.
Date: 08 Jul 2016 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
Long distance citrus...Short distance citrus any citrus is good.( lol). READ YOU SOON😊
Date: 08 Jul 2016 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
OMG! I love it! ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh Edward is a great daddy but Tanya is really trying to mess with him and the kids just because how horrible I hope they out a stop to her fast
Date: 07 Jul 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
These kids are the cutest!! If Tanya gave up her parental rights there is nothing she can do. Unless Edwards lets her see them, which i cant see happening.
Date: 07 Jul 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
So sweet!
Date: 06 Jul 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
very nice chapter! a big awwwwww from me about daddyward and his 2 adorable kids! I wonder what Tanya is up to now....
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2016 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm just glad that Edward isn't blowing off the phone call or his worries about Tanya.
Date: 06 Jul 2016 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
Tanya is just doing this because the thought of being replaced by Smella is intolerable and Lauren is a jealous bitch.
Date: 06 Jul 2016 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 06 Jul 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad we'll be seeing what Tanya is up to
Date: 06 Jul 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
aww Don't blame him for taking a bubble bath. He's lucky to have great parents to help with the kids. I wouldn't let my ex within long distance viewing distance of my kids. Guessing she needs a family to get money or something from some relative.
Date: 06 Jul 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 06 Jul 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
He cant let that evil bitch near is adorable kids they are so cute
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Lauren ruffled Tanya's feathers with her tale from the high-school reunion. Tanya thinks she can scrape together some sort of bond with her offspring that might interfere with their Daddy's romancing a lost love.
The kids are smarter than that.
Let's hope Jenks filed away some type of contingency plan (other than the restraining order) in case Tanya ever reared her ugly self again.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2016 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Writing her fairytale about her and Edward would be intrusive unless Edward suggested it...... No not even then it could cause trouble for their relationship in the end..... but then again what do I know???? READ YOU SOON😊💖
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2016 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
I loved it Alice was too pushy but I think everything will work out and poor hungry Edward but that life of a doctor
Date: 30 Jun 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 30 Jun 2016 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
How long will it be before Bella realizes that she can write where ever she wants??
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
Alice was a bit pushy about the BDSM story and Bella's personal life entering her work life. Boundaries were crossed.
Bella needs to keep the writing separate from everything else in her life. Stick with the imagination.
Date: 30 Jun 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 18
She should only do a BSDM if she feels comfortable with it.
Date: 30 Jun 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
I friggen love this!! I can't wait to see what Bella comes up with! ;)
Date: 30 Jun 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
I noticed you were using your own titles here and believe I mentioned it in a review. Did you see that?
I think she should write what her inner self, her muse, brings to her. I look forward to more of this story.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
Maybe some slash porn? LOL
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love that Bella isn't a pushover or a doormat any longer. And that she doesn't automatically forgive Alice for being a pushy bitch. That trait gives me confidence in her future.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm more worried about the skanks... Even if she doesn't want Edward, I'm sure Tanya doesn't want him with Bella and Lauren is just gross, evil & jealous!
Date: 29 Jun 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yes, BDSM would be very good
Date: 27 Jun 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 27 Jun 2016 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
Tanya can go swim with the fishies!
Date: 27 Jun 2016 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it d84;a039;
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my goodness she is a grade A B**** I can not believe she can't just leave Edward in piece to be happy, she is a miserable, horrible woman who shouldn't even try to call herself a mother to those kids, Bella shared more care asking after them and she hasn't even met them. I hope Tanya gets a big dose of Karma. Ok I'm done ranting. I loved that chapter, can't wait to read the next one.
Melissa
Date: 20 Jun 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Boy Tanya really is a bitch.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good luck Tanya you ain't gonna find anything, but Bitchy McBitchface better not make anything up I may have to hurt her.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG!!! Please tell me what ever she is planning is not going to work!!! Dont let Edward fall for Bella ever being mean to his children. Hell she hasnt even met them yet!! ugggg same ole bitch Tanya!!
Date: 20 Jun 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
They won't find any dirt on Bella. She is as honest as you get. Edward and Charlie will have a fit that Tanya is going after Bella.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bitch is an understatement. Gold Digging Whore comes to mind.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
What a shollow bitch dont like her at all.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow, she is a piece of work.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
Tanya is definitely a bitch!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well....even if Tanya is a bitch, Reynold's detective shouldn't find anything because there isn't anything. Unless he makes it up. Bella isn't even in the same state as Edward or his kids right now.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
oh ugh! Now I'm picturing Tanya as a frankenstein combination of PA and SC. Not that SC is so bad, but....just, no! What is she going to find out with her PI. Bella isn't mistreating her kids, besides they aren't hers anymore! I hope her implants leak and explode and get lopsided!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 17
Is Tanya that stupid? Bella doesn't even live anywhere near her ex-husband. What does she hope to find? Besides, Bella has law enforcement on her side.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
Now now! That's not a nice thing to do to Scarlett Johansson ! She's actually a good actress Although I really like this story ! Where else can I find a story set in TAMPA? Keep up the great work !!
Date: 20 Jun 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
Selfish bitch! Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh wow I hope this blows up in her face
Date: 20 Jun 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
Tanya needs bitch slapped. At least Rocco won't get much since they live in two different cities.
Date: 20 Jun 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bitch......-_- how dare she gold digger
Date: 16 Jun 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awww!!! Please dont let them be apart to long!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh that was sweet and sad but still hopeful
Date: 16 Jun 2016 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
Long distance is so hard. One is going to have to move.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
aww he's so sweet. can't wait to read what happens next.
Melissa
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2016 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great pictures to accompany this chapter.
Bella may find herself moving back to Florida. She can write from anywhere.
Charlie was adorable.
Date: 16 Jun 2016 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter. I think that when Bella gets home, she's gonna realize that home isn't Seattle anymore. Her real home is Tampa. I love Rascal Flatts. "Don't" by Billy Currington is the song that got me hooked on country music.
Date: 16 Jun 2016 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Breaks my heart for them to be apart they cant be apart for long.
Date: 16 Jun 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
Maybe she will move back to Florida? IDK he can't leave his kids and parents and his life there. Seems like a long shot, this long distance romance. I have faith you'll work it out!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
NO DRAMA!!!! NO DRAMA!!!!!! 😫😫😢😥 (he he he) READ YOU SOON 💔💔💔💔
Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
Charlie is too cute. Cant wait till they get to see each other again.
Date: 16 Jun 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love love love this chapter.
Date: 16 Jun 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
Sad they have to be apart.
Date: 14 Jun 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is such a good daddy. Glad everything went ok with Angela and the baby.
Date: 13 Jun 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm really not liking Carlisle! Isn't he part of the reason Edward was with the Evil one to begin with? He had to live up to daddy dearest's expectations.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 13 Jun 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Carlisle is an arse. B is so understanding. Yey for Ang and Ben
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2016 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
Is Carlisle a jerk or just overly protective of his grandchildren? He and Esme see things differently.
It was to soon for Bella to meet the twins.
How will this long distance relationship work out?
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Edward. It is tough being a parent.