Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
This is going to be heartbreaking . Bella is a trooper for sure. So, now we know why Edward married Tanya.
Date: 13 Jun 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Carlisle is worried about his grandbabys . Angela is to funny so happy baby is ok. Edward is a great daddy makes me swoon ;)
Date: 13 Jun 2016 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Read you soon.
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
ah the joys of parenthood. I remember those days of projectile vometing! ugh! wonder how they wiill work this out, their long distance relationship....thanks for all your prolific offerings!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is being very understanding. Carlisle was being a touch of a dick, wasn't he? Angela was funny....glad their little family is OK.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
II loved it poor Edward sick kids are hard but twins double trouble but his dad was harsh why was it because of Tanya and how sweet was Bella on the phone but my Oh my Angela was funny heheheheheheh
Date: 12 Jun 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
Again, love this chapter. Can't wait for Bella to meet the twins. I hope they like her.
Date: 12 Jun 2016 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love love love this chapter.
Date: 12 Jun 2016 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
They can't get a break.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2016 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
READ YOU SOON 😋
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love how you update fast cause I love this story! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
That went from hot to so sweet to yucky but that is life
Date: 09 Jun 2016 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ugh. Been there
Date: 09 Jun 2016 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
How is he going to get her to stay. Poor kids they needed there daddy
Date: 09 Jun 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yummy start. Aww poor kiddos
Date: 09 Jun 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 14
again with her channeling Mafia Princess. love it when you plug your own story in another story. like a crossover. too bad their time got cut short with daddy duties. what are they going to do about this long distance thing they have going on? can't wait to find out. love the story!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Nothing leaves a body totally spent, achy, and lifeless like food poisoning.
Then to have a sympathetic sibling throwing up in solidarity.......a parents nightmare is what that is.
Edward could start an IV of fluids at home rather than go to the hospital.
Paramedics do just that for each other when the flu hits.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love this very much. I finally caught up. My life has been crazy. I was wondering will Tanya make an appearance? It's good if she doesn't. Just saying.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter!
Date: 03 Jun 2016 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
OK, SO NOW YOU HAVE NOT ONLY WETTED MY IMAGINATION FOR MORE OF THIS STORY, BUT YOU HAVE DANGLED A "MAFIA PRINCESS" SEQUE IN FRONT OF ME!!
THANKS FOR ALL OF YOUR GREAT STORIES. PATTY
P.S. THE CAPS ARE BECAUSE OF MY LOW VISION.
Date: 03 Jun 2016 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
It's going to get steamy.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can hardly wait for more, I am anxious to see how this pans out for them when she has to leave.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
No Emmett, how sad but a lovely chapter nevertheless.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2016 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
THey are moving pretty fast for people who have not seen each other for years but it is sweet.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2016 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hot and sweet, lovely.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2016 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
LOL E's a fast worker.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2016 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
THe grown up Edward wastes no time. lol
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
It seemed young Edward was a bit of an arse.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2016 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am loving the start of this.
Date: 02 Jun 2016 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
Her secret is out and he is a happy man love it
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2016 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow she told him and he had her books too now that he knows it's her will he read her other books and how will they make it work
Date: 02 Jun 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Fanfriggentastic!! I love this! ;)
Date: 02 Jun 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Glad she told him. Wonder if someone is going to find or steal the book and tell others?
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2016 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
At least Edward didn't act all weird or intimidated by the news that she writes erotic novels.
Maybe he wants her to write about some of their experiences.
Edward could always offer help her research the BDSM world to aid her writing. Hehe
Will Mrs. Cullen ever see this dedication to Edward?
Date: 02 Jun 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
That was a pretty big reveal! Wow! Sly how you used your own story title in there, lady! I'll check your tumblr for the prevy pics...thanks!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Please tell me she eventually moves to where edward is
Date: 27 May 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
They are too cute together. Can't wait for more.
Date: 27 May 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Mmmm!!! I so look forward to the next update. READ YOU SOON a86;a039;
Date: 26 May 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
That was sad about Emmett and Rose.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
I like that they are going to honestly talk about things.
Date: 26 May 2016 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
I LOVE THIS!! :)
Date: 26 May 2016 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
Sad about Emmett & Rose. Didn't see that coming.
i liked this chapter...
Date: 26 May 2016 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Now they have there own story of ruined food they are to cute
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2016 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh I love it Edward is a true Romantic and so sweet it was sad about his friends but life does go on one day at a time now how will the rest of the evening go
Date: 26 May 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
This is a sweet story. I'm sorry about Emmett. I usually enjoy him in stories. Citrusy fun sounds good...
Date: 26 May 2016 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Glad they got to talk about some past stuff.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Edward has experienced loss from several different directions. Affecting his life just as much as the painful loss Bella experienced when her mother walked out of her life.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Lucky Bella! 😍 READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 23 May 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
lol for Charlie trying to put on the dad face.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
They may be exploring the idea of the pasts lost love, but they are experienced enough in life to know roadblocks are ahead. Shear determination, patience, and desire should keep them on the right path to a well deserved future.
Bella's right, this story is too close to home to write as fiction.
Date: 23 May 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
So sweet I love her and Charlie how they along they are friends not just dad and daughter that is me and my dad.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh I love it so sweet and romantic and her dad was too cute
Date: 22 May 2016 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ah such a sweet beginning to their date. And it's great that Bella stood up to Charlie.
Date: 22 May 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
How sweet and wonderful that she is having her dream come true. Love Charlie in all his grumpy possissiveness! Love her Valentine's card to him!
Date: 22 May 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
So sweet! I love it! ;)
Date: 22 May 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
Charlie made me laugh.
Date: 21 May 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter , as usual . Keep up the great work !
Date: 20 May 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 20 May 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh I love it and damn go Bella hehehehhe
Date: 20 May 2016 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow a long distance relasionship.. hmmmmm but cant Bella write from anywhere??? I hope they make it work.
Date: 19 May 2016 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
Can't wait to see what Kinkiness Edward pulls out of her
Date: 19 May 2016 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am so happy for them they are perfect. I think Bella needs to come home to stay
Date: 19 May 2016 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
they are too cute together. Love her pervy mouth
Date: 19 May 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
I LOVE THIS!!! :)
Date: 19 May 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bella can write anywhere - she should move
Date: 19 May 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
I really hope they can stay together. If she is a writer she could write anywhere. I hope the kids like her.
Date: 19 May 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Can't wait to see how they make this work.
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
As a writer, technically, Bella can live anywhere. The question would be, can she see herself moving back to her hometown to be with Edward and closer to her father?
Date: 19 May 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
i'm loving this story. the way they are together seems natural. they will figure it out...thanks!