Date: 17 May 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
aww for 
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Date: 17 May 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Lauren is typical HS bully. Surprised she is deining to work at the party
Date: 17 May 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
lol for Charlie's speech
Date: 17 May 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
awww kissy kissy
Date: 17 May 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Me too. I screwed up royally with mine as well
Date: 17 May 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad B let Alice help her out. Aww for Angela
Date: 17 May 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting twists. Wonder if Skankya will reappear to make his life hell.
Date: 17 May 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
ooooh this should be interesting
Date: 16 May 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved this...thank you.......
Date: 16 May 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
So happy there's going to be more
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
A couple days is an eternity when you don't want to wait. (he he he) READ YOU SOON 💖
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
They have work through the unfortunate struggles life threw at them. Now their time has come to act on this gift. A second chance at happiness.
How will Edward's kids react to Bella's appearance in their father's life?
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
I loved it so sweet and romantic
Date: 15 May 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Perfect and I cant wait for more. How is it going to work
Date: 15 May 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
lovely! romantic and sexy. I love reading about love like this....thanks! Eager for more, am I!!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 15 May 2016 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad you are going to continue this story
Date: 15 May 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oooo can't wait for it to continue!
Date: 15 May 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
I absolutely love this!!! :)
Date: 15 May 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love the tattoo.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
It's as though they saved the adult version of themselves for each other.
Edward's doing a great job of out maneuvering Bella's male characters from her imagination. Lucky Bella. Haha
Date: 14 May 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
HS was a lifetime ago for me, but this is hot, and nice to think about...
Date: 14 May 2016 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow. Everything dreams are meant to be but real!
Date: 14 May 2016 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Holy cow! Me too!!
Date: 14 May 2016 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Who doesn't ? Very hot !
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2016 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
I loved it wow Edward knows how to please her yummy
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
dayum! I am jealous of a fictional character.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
Can someone light my cigarette (he he he not really ) Mmmmmm I can feel her orgasm all the way over here. READ YOU SOON 😍
Date: 14 May 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
They are finally getting to be together.
Date: 14 May 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is fantastic!! :)
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
You making me miss home . I lived in Tampa for 15 years. My mom worked at St joes.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Please!! Let Bella be past the pain of the past and accept what should have been all along. Oh! and give her the balls to put everyone that mistreated her in there place. (lol) READ YOU SOON 💖
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
I loved it well Edward is really trying to show her the real him now will he be able to live up to her dream or will he be even better update soon
Date: 09 May 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Can't wait to read the lemons next chapter.
Date: 09 May 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
I hope I know what happens next....at least I hope I know. I went to a HS reunion a time or two. It was hilarious and it was sad. I'm glad I went.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
Reruns of high school is one way to clear the room. Is Tanya going to make an appearance?
Lauren showed she hasn't matured since her wannabe high-school days.
Date: 09 May 2016 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
ugh, longer chapters please and post soon
Date: 08 May 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
More please- ASAP
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
They better! LOL! Truly loving this storyline
Date: 06 May 2016 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
I say Bella should go for it... she can see what it's like to be in one of her novels. Although I'm sure Edward is not expecting anything, just hoping...
Date: 05 May 2016 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Fanfriggentastic!!! I love it!! :)
Date: 05 May 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh this is so romantic!! I hope they DO!!
Date: 05 May 2016 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
I have a feeling Tanya is going to show up to the reunion and ruin everything!!!
Date: 05 May 2016 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
She is hoping they will :) to cute
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh she better!!!! I mean c'monwho in there. Right mind would pass up the chance to make a wrong... right. READ YOU SOON 😜
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
yes and please ... they WILL
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hehehehe I loved it how sweet he surprised her now how will their night go and will Tanya show up
Date: 05 May 2016 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
Lol. Loved this chapter. Edward was so cool acting with the Chief.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
They will at least make it to his room. But heavy make out sessions and deep discussions may be all they attempt their first night together.
Hoiw cute is it that Charlie is grumbling over his daughter's new suitor.
Date: 02 May 2016 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
we all have our high school stories. I was not popular either. I get that
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2016 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella's ".....minus the children" comment through me off guard. Does she want him but not the his twins? Or did she mean she dreams of more with Edward never pictured him already with kids? She almost made it sound like the twins are a deal breaker.
Date: 02 May 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
More more more asap! Love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was very steamy and I can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
This story is the smile we need more often 😊 It's a story that can go on and on and on( lol) you know what I mean. Happy. Sunday! READ YOU SOON💖
Date: 01 May 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
This sounds like it is going to get hot and streamy. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01 May 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
They get right to the point lol
Date: 01 May 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
They did, indeed! This is everything she hoped for, and more! I am eager to see where it leads! Thank you, dear!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow oh wow it seems Edward is all in and Bella is in buy holding back and damn what a kiss
Date: 01 May 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
:O DONT STOP THERE :O MORE PLEASE
Date: 01 May 2016 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
😊 READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 30 Apr 2016 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am SOOOO glad that my huge crush and I never got together. He turned out to be a really bad boy. Like landing in prison bad boy. What's that old saying? Be careful what you wish for, you might get it.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yeah!!!! Can't wait for next chapter to see where this goes. Will Tanya be back?? Will some highschool dummy make a scene???
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love this chapter!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
I was surprised that Edward was that honest so soon. I wondering what kind of books Bella has written. Maybe erotica or fetish???
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh wow he just laid it all out there now where do they go from here and as for high school crush for me no I have changed to much
Date: 28 Apr 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
*raises hand* - alas, close but no cigar
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
OMG!! This is fantastic!!! :)
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
yeah. me too! very nice chapter!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
The idea of going back to a highe school reunion and starting up a romantic relationship with your old crush is beyond me. That's because I always viewed myself as the wall-flower.
It was years later that I learned a few of my male classmates wanted to ask me out but we're afraid they would never measure up to the expectations. The religion backing my upbringing was rather rigid. The boys thought I would turn them down or my parents wouldn't appreciate them coming around. Hm, the things we imagine are not always as they truly are.
At least Edward is not afraid to go after the girl of his dreams.
It's a good thing Bella got over her nerves and voiced her own desires.
Let the romancing begin.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love th at Edward is to n the point
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well this story is very refreshing. I love how you've described the characters. Please update soon.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to see what you do with this story line.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Their timing is finally coming together.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to future chapters
Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait for the next chapter!