Date: 26 Feb 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 56
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 25 Feb 2017 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 56
Counceling they need it trust is hard to get once lost. So happy they are back together they will be strong. Nixon and Tanya are meant for each other they are both evil.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2017 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 56
I loved it well this is a start I thing going to see someone will help them both greatly but I think meeting with Tanya will be a big mistake
Date: 25 Feb 2017 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 56
IDK. What he said to her was pretty horrendous. Kudos to her for forgiving him. I don't know if I could, knowing what I know now. People don't really change. I know, it's a story and not RL. I love happy endings so I trust you to give them one. Surely one of the kids could identify the woman who approached them, couldn't they?
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 56
I would have thought he would have done something a little more....romantic maybe put a little more thought into asking WAIT!!!! cross that...beg her on hands and knees but.... It all worked out in the end...I suppose. I'm thinking the next chapter should be very interesting....to say the least. READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 25 Feb 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 56
Nothing good can come out of meeting with Tanya! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 25 Feb 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 56
Sure skankyya want money most likely. Hope they catch her before the kids get really hurt. Councilling sounds smart
Date: 25 Feb 2017 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 56
Glad they are going to talk to someone about their trust issues. Glad you did not drag out their separation. Can't wait to hear from the She-beast.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 56
Does Edward know the name of Tanya's Sugar Daddy? That would be a better link to give Seth and Jenks.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2017 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 47
I think carlisle is ready to gravel!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2017 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 46
I have lived in florida my whole life & have never heard of the dry tortugas?
Date: 22 Feb 2017 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 55
LOVE the kids giving him the silent treatment too. As far as cops..... no video of her approaching the kids? hmmm Go Mama Esme!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2017 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 45
The white van needs to go far far away!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2017 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 44
That is a long drive for sure!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2017 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 43
Carlisle is not thinking about the future w/ visitation to his grandcgildren.
Date: 22 Feb 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 55
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2017 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 41
I love how kinky he gets her to be.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2017 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 40
Hopefully after their vacation she'll just move in.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 39
I love that charlie gave carlisle a beat down!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 38
Carlisle really screwed the pooch!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 37
He's telling her to be quiet & she just keeps talking. Haha
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 36
How is it going to go when tanya shows up???
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
Maybe if liam knows that bella's mom left her too liam could bond more with bella.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 33
She is just so nasty!! Aluce is getting on my nerves too!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 32
There are so many ways this could go.....
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope reynold kicks her to the curb and tanya gets at least 5 stds!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 30
I'm actually tearing up. :(
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 28
Goodbye vanilla at least for tonight.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm glad u don't describe everytime that might make us want it less.....yeah, no i don't think that will ever happen!! Haha
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 26
I think u did good!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 24
Reunited & it feels so good!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 23
She probably had seth eat the crackers on purpose.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2017 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love out of darkness!! And i agree with edward about tanya. She would only do more damage.
Date: 21 Feb 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 55
Hahaha, go Momma Esme!
Date: 20 Feb 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 54
Dipshit! That's a man for ya! Lol!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
Maybe jealousy will get her to tampa sooner!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
I get to be the 1000 review on this site!! Whoo hoo! ( i try to find joy in the small things) i'm glad he is going to call charlie about tanya. She is not to be trusted!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope she realizes soon she needs to be in tampa!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
She is such a skank!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love that song too!! It is pefect for them!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope she sees him before she leaves!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
I bet sue & his mother read her books.
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
They can't live apart forever. She needs to move.
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
All night long. She is going to be walking a bit sideways . Haha
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
Now onto the edward's main attraction!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yes put up or shut up!
Date: 18 Feb 2017 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 55
I think she will forgive him. She has had enough time to get over it...but he better never do something like that again.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 18 Feb 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 55
Edward messed up but Bella does not need to run away from this. She and Edward need to talk and work things out.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 55
He really fucked up big time! At least she is ready now to hear from him! He had better find the right words to say to make this better, and mean them! Thanks for another great chapter!
Date: 18 Feb 2017 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 55
I would have an extremely hard time forgiving him if I were Bella. Those were really harsh words. I may forgive him but Seay times will definitely bel on the waiting list.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 55
I hope she forgives him....but This issue with low self esteem is a little bit of a concern? If she wants to be a parent then that has to be addressed.... cause we all know if mama is f*cked up you know the kids ain't got a chance in hell. READ YOU SOON : )
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2017 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 55
Oh boy he really has his work cut out for him what will he try first
Date: 18 Feb 2017 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 55
Way to go Esme, knock some sense into Edward.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 55
I'm glad Bella isn't brushing her own feelings aside. Edward needs to grovel. Yay for Esme telling Edward what for and yay for Bella's new friend Sarah.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 55
they have to kiss and make up. Esme knows how to put him in his place.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 55
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2017 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 55
At least Bella was able to communicate with Esme to let Edward know she is ready to hear him out. Love momma bear Esme.
It was a bit surprising that Edward called Jasper. But, it also shows Bella that he is will to seek out her friends for answers.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 55
Ugh more, more. Love this story.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 54
I do not blame Edward for being upset but he took it way to far. Bella should have said something earlier. I yelled at my husband when he lost our daughter. I was scared. Yes I over reacted but that is one is my biggest fears if losing my children. Everthing turned out ok thank goodness. Bella should not have run off. She should have stayed at talked after the kids went to bed. Even if her feelingswere hurt.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2017 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 54
I can see why he flipped out but he took it way too far poor Bella
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 54
That's a huge hole Edward dug for himself.
Tanya is getting exactly what she wants, putting a wedge between Edward and Bella, creating a lack of trust between Bella and the twins, and uncertainty in a future the little family of four was trying to build.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 54
That's a huge hole Edward dug for himself.
Tanya is getting exactly what she wants, putting a wedge between Edward and Bella, creating a lack of trust between Bella and the twins, and uncertainty in a future the little family of four was trying to build.
Date: 15 Feb 2017 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 54
OMG she screwed up big time.
Date: 14 Feb 2017 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 54
I think Bella should have told him about the first time to be honest. No one ever forget someone creepy, upsetting you or your children. Maybe if she had Edward wouldn't have blown up on her. And I'm sorry but I don't let my 7 year old go to the bathroom on his own. Thanks for the update.
Date: 14 Feb 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 54
Yup...get some knee pads Edward...commence groveling
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2017 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 54
Edward getting out of that hole depends on you (he he he) READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 14 Feb 2017 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 54
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 14 Feb 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 54
He needs to grovel for this one.
Date: 14 Feb 2017 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 54
If he's going to treat Bella like that, then he's not ready to have her live with them. It's easy to say "I'm sorry" but the proof is in the pudding! He needs to report this to the authorities. He needs to make this up to Bella, big time, if he expects her to trust him. I'm not too fond of Edward right now. Like father, like son??
Date: 14 Feb 2017 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 54
Yea quite a bit of a temper tantrum. Hope Bella got home ok.
Date: 14 Feb 2017 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 54
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 14 Feb 2017 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 54
Edward is a douche canoe.... GAH!!!! Death to Tanya!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2017 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 54
He deserves to stew a while and then grovel. And why isn't anyone pressing charges against Tanya? Shouldn't the police be called?
Date: 13 Feb 2017 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 53
ooh yumminess. Hope no one saw thier rain time.
Date: 12 Feb 2017 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 53
I thought it was sweet, sensual and passionate!
Date: 12 Feb 2017 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 53
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 12 Feb 2017 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 53
You make my weekends worth looking forward to.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 53
Keep. Writing
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2017 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 53
That was pretty hot to me! but I get what your saying. Can't wait for the next update. READ YOU SOON : )
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2017 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 53
That was sexy and fun I loved it
Date: 11 Feb 2017 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 53
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 53
Finally some one on one time for Dr. Superman and his Wonder Woman. Hehe.
Little Lucy is just excited to celebrate her daddy's award with him. Family time is equally important to this young family of four.
Date: 11 Feb 2017 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 53
Love the lemony goodness. I hope we get more information on Tanya and her plans. I feel that part of the story has gotten pushed to the back burner. Please don't get me wrong in have enjoyed reading about Edward and Bella and the kids but I am dying to know what is up with Tanya and if she is the mystery lady.
Date: 11 Feb 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 53
I love it! lol ;)