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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 53

I find nothing wrong at all with the lemony goodness you write lol.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2017 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 53

not meh. you're too hard on yourself. no pun intended. it was great! yeah, i fear that was Tanya. when will you tell us? 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 52

Loved! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 52

Can't blame B for not wanting to accept the apology just yet.   

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 52

I'm still curious as to who the blond in the restroom was?????? Although the obvious one would be Tanya but.... you never know!! (lol)    READ YOU SOON : D

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 52

I'm still waiting for Tanya to do her worst. I know it's coming...Carlisle's apology was kind of weak. He didn't even give it to her without threats from Edward and Esme. I think he is sorry for his actions, but maybe for the wrong reasons. Still, Bella was just a bit harsh in her refusal to accept. I guess that is her right. Can't wait for those lovely lemons!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 52

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 52

Edward's reputation as a leading young doctor is to fragile to place them in an area where they could by viewed by any passerby. Make the setting random, romantic, and yet concealed.
Esme is being everything Bella needs right now. Friend, confidante, and supporter of this new little family.
Carlisle needs to put forth an effort to help find out who is following bella, thereby jeopardizing his son's family.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 52

:) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 52

Nice update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 52

I love the way Bella talked to Carlisle I think he has a lot of ass kissing to do for the way he acted to her.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 52

LOVE!!! :D

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 52

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 51

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 50

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 49

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 48

Uh-oh!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 52

Another awesome great chapter!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 47

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 46

Loved it!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 52

Loved it can't wait for more 💗

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 45

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 44

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 43

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 39

Go Charlie!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 37

Fantastic!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 33

I absolutely can't stand Tanya! She's a gold digger!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 32

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 31

I can't stand Tanya!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 23

Edward is amazing!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 17

I hate Tanya!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

Poor Liam!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 51

nice update

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 51

Ack for the crazy lady in the bathroom.  The egg donor I'm assuming.  Sweet presents they got.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 51

Oh I loved it they are one happy family but was that Tanya at the restaurant and will Bella tell Edward about it update soon

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 51

Mystery woman has to be Tanya?   Edwards day has started out so good.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 51

I am thinking that the mystery woman is Tanya

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 51

How long has Tanya been following the kids around? When will the restraining order become useful?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 51

:) 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 51

Yeah ,   you  promised a lemon   (whine)!  But  it was a very cute  chapter    

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 51

Yeah ,   you  promised a lemon   (whine)!  But  it was a very cute  chapter    

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 51

No mystery there. READ YOU SOON : D

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 51

tanya?

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 51

I know the creepy lady was Tanya!  The pictures were so sweet. What a special day for Edward!  Looking forward to the next chapter.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 51

I think the mysterious woman is Edward's X. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 51

I love the cuteness!! :D

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 51

I'm guessing Tanya was the bathroom lady 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 51

I'm betting Tanya is the mystery woman. They need to make sure she doesn't try to take the kids away.
Thanks for writing
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 51

Great as always

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 51

That mystery woman was Tanya, right? I love the gift shopping trip and the present opening scene. Very nice. Thank you!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 50

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 50

Loved it can't wait for more 💗

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 50

Loved it can't wait for more 💗

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 50

greast update

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 50

A little vitamin C is always a good thing! (lol) READ YOU SOON.   : D

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 50

I am glad that Quill grew a conscience in came to Bella and told her some of what was going on. Hope she and the kids are safe on their outing.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 50

I think Quil is trying to be good we all know who he was working for that bitch needs to go down.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 50

Glad Quill has somewhat of a conscience. I really want to see Tanya  go in flames

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 50

No Tanya and followers with Bella and kids venture please.

 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 50

Glad Quil told her.  NOw hopefully they will get Tanya!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 50

I hope with this they get the key to breaking the case now how will Bella's date with the twins go 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 50

Can Seth get Quil to cooperate by offering some sort of deal regarding the previous charges against him? Maybe Chief Charlie can help the guy turn his life around by this one act of cooperation?
Seth has a grudge to settle against the man that cost his father's life.
Bella's dress is gorgeous. Love the color.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 50

Glad her school isn't being stupid.  Well at least Quil did one thing right in quitting and telling her.  

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 50

At last, they have some kind of a lead on who is harrassing Bella! We know it's Tanya, don't we?  That ex-cop PI should know better than to break the law doing work for Skankya... I hope they find her soon before she does some real damage to Bella! Boo no citrus...maybe next time...thanks!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 50

This is great! I can't wait! ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 50

:) 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 50

Lock that hoe Up!!! Down with the Killer Beeeeeeeeee!!!!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 49

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2017 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 49

Go super seth!!! Glad the first interview went well. Good thing Carlisle did the right thing and not flipped out again

Reviewer: mom3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2017 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 49

Can't wait to see more

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 49

Really  love this  story !    Keep  up  the  great  work !  

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2017 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 49

I think she handled it al very professionally. Which puts Tanya that much more beneath her. Looking forward to the next update. READ YOU SOON : D

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 49

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2017 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 49

It sounds like Tanya if it was that will mess her plans up lol.  I am so glad Carlisle didnt go crazy.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2017 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 49

OH SNAP!!!  Tanya is ugly, and not getting any better.  Cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 49

nice update

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 49

Yay Carlisle he finally did the right thing!! I want to hear from Tanya now that Bella has come out!! I cant wait for Kid and naked time!!! lol

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 49

I LOVE IT!!! :)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 49

Emails are either directly from T or sent at her direction.

So glad you had Carlisle do the right thing

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