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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 37

Bella needs to get moved quick ;).....   *-*     Bella is a natural with his kids I cant wait to find out what kind of shit Tanya is going to pull.

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 37

Awesome.  Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 37

Love their sexual times.  Can't wait to see all the drama next chapter. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 37

Sorry I took so long to read this chapter. I needed to refresh my memory so I read 35 and 36 again before reading this. It worked well that way for me. LOVE their alone time. You write very nice, sexy lemons!  I love how Liam is finally warming up to Bella and not being such a butthead to her.  You said this story would take a different turn but it looks the same to me so far. I'll wait and see what you do with it. I'm sure it'll be great! Thanks and love the use of your story Mafia Princess in this chapter. Might this story be a fantasy of yours in some way or another? Something you want to happen to you? I wouldn't blame you one bit!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 37

I can't wait for more!! ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2016 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 37

:)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2016 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 37

Oh I loved it they are so happy together  and how sweet it was that Bella read to Lucy too cute

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 37

Wondered  when we were  going  to  hear from  nasty  Tanya again!  great  chapters  ! 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 36

I am glad they are all getting to know each other but I think Bella is smart with her compromise. Now we just have to make sure Tanya goes back under her rock...

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 33

I laughed at your description of Nixon!!! lollollollol I hope Bella takes Tanya down!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 36

They'll get there as a new family unit.
Let's hope Tanya stays away per the agreement.
When do Charlie and Sue get to spend time with the twins?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 35

Imaging the emotional confusion of the twins is almost painful. Bella's personal experiences will guide her in being what the twins need from a female figure. But she should save the sharing of her life until they are older and able to comprehend the situation better.

Reviewer: MissBlackCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 36

I'm loving this story. I'm glad I found it again. Of course it's not going to be a smooth ride but it will be interesting. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 36

She is winning them all over so cute love it

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 36

Glad Liam's at least giving her a chance.  It won't be all smooth sailing....it never is with kids.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 36

Oh I loved it so sweet they are becoming a family 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 36

OMG! I love them! ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 36

Love seeing them as a family. Glad  Liam is warming up. Can't wait to see what Tanya is up to. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 35

Wow, I did not expect Lucy to be that open with Bella.  Liam's attitude does not surprise me. 

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 36

I went to Busch Gardens in Tampa in 1966 when I moved to pinellas to get married. It was a tour if the brewery and pictures with the parrots. Lots of beautiful flowers ass it was really a garden place and not an amusement park. It was beautiful though.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 36

So this is the story you're concentrating next? This and Out of the Darkness? Or will it be one more than the other? I guess I'll just wait and see. I like that Liam is warming up to Bella. I'm eager to see the changes you have planned for this story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it 

Reviewer: Mounds01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 36

This story is great I love it!

 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 35

Good to see this back.

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 35

Thanks for the update. I missed this story. 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 35

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 34

Awe they will be happy I can see Bella melting the young ones heart

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2016 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 35

Completely understand! Congrats on your promotion!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 34

Bella needs to find something that is special for her and Liam. They can spend time getting to know each other without distractions. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 34

good

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 35

Hey... I get it! I work 2 jobs and find no time to write and update... the good thing is... us faithful fans of your writing will be right here when you come back!

 

Krazi

Xoxo

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 34

Great chapter!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 35

Sounds reasonable to me!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 34

Can def understand Liam's reluctance.  LOL for Charlie and Texying.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 35

Do what you need to do to take care of YOU. See you next time!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 33

I really hate Tanya!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 35

Love this story!

Reviewer: GinnyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 35

CONGRATULATIONS on your PROMOTIOOOOON!!!!!

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 34

Glad you are including Edward's kids actively on the storyline.  I don't blame Liam for being kind of skittish around Bella. His own mom did not want him and Edward has never brought any other women around his kids.

Do what you need to do with your writing schedule.  But PLEASE just don't quite writing. You do a great job with it. I think I am reading/following all your stories right now.  

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 35

Congratulations!  I know that we are excited and thrilled for you on getting the promotion. 

You are one of my favorite authors and most definitley will be here waiting patiently for updates, and most likely re-reading other stories of your, which I'm currently doing anyway.  If it's overwhelming and feels like work, you won't want to write, so definitely do what you need to do to still make it enjoyable for you and for us as well. 

I wish you all the best with your new job and will be watching for alerts for new chapters.

 

Reviewer: Cynthia24cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 35

Congrats on the promotion!  

Of course, we understand your time constraints and will wait patiently for updates to your amazing stories.

But I must beg you, please don't abandon any of them!!  They are too good to let go and having read everything you've written, I can say that you are among the best and I cannot bear the thought of any of your stories left hanging!!

Thanks!!

Cyncabc

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 34

Bella's finally met her dad's girlfriend, haha.
Liam will only come around when he can see visual evidence that this woman will be his fiercest defender and protector. Someone he can gradually trust.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 35

Thanks for letting us know and good luck in your promotion. 

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 35

Don't stress, Fanfiction is for fun.  Thank you for writing, take your time and update when you can.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 35

I'll be patiently waiting... :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 34

I love this!! I think Liam will come around quickly. Bella is such a wonderful person. He will see! ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 35

You have to do what is best for you and your family

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 34

I will stick with you to the end :).   I am so excited for her to meet the kids lucy loves her now she just has to work on Liem

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 35

No worries - I'll still be here. Just hope the TWCS alerts start going out again. I'm checking back daily since I can't tell 

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 35

Good for you. I don't know how you kept up with so many stories in the first place. You do what you need to do to enjoy writing. When the joy is gone, it does become work and that is no fun. 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 35

Real life always comes first!! You always update all of your stories so frequently,  I wondered if you had super powers!! We all know that you won't abandon the characters.  We will be here when you get back to this one! :) 

 

-Kate 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: prnlutz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 35

Relax and don't stress out.your true fans will be waiting for you.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 33

Glad Bella was honest with Edward about the kids.  Tanya is a whole. I hope she gets what she deserves by the end of this story.  Great job.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2016 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 33

Nixon calls them like he sees them and whore is what he see and he is so right.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 33

Congratulations on your promotion!
Stepping back to reevaluate is the right thing to do. Your emotional and mental health are key to enjoying life.
Writing should bring you pleasure and joy. Not stress over a production schedule. We do understand life comes first. We are still your biggest fans!
Thank you for sharing a special part of you.
Will Bella choose to release her secret identity just as Nixon is about to tell Tanya or will Tanya get the jump on her and create a problem with the media?
Loved the line about a 'boil on the butt of society '. Hahahaha

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 33

Omg Tanya is the one who needs to go down. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 33

good

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 33

Tanya needs to go DOWN! There won't much if any dirt on Bella.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 33

Glad E&B got to talk.  While I think Nixon is a sleezy dude, he def has Skankya's number.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 33

oh no, I loved Colombo! I would never picture him as that sleazy scumbag you described! Ugh!  Now Donald Trump I can imagine....Tanya is a whore. She's going to find out about Bella being Marie Cigno, isn't she?  She's going to out her before she gets to tell Edward's kids and try to use that against her! I can see it now! I hope I'm wrong! 

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 32

Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 31

I really hate Tanya!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2016 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 32

I LOVE THIS!! :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2016 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 32

Alice should not make Bella feel bad because she wants to move. She is going to her home town to be with the man she loves. Alice overstepped her position. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 32

Wow the kadt few chapters were amazing. Yes Tanya is a whore and I hope she burns in hell for going after Bella.  Glad Aro could break the documents she signed waving her rights.  Bella should move to Tampa and Lauren deserve anything they throw at her. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 32

ooh a movie.... that is great news.   Now ehy do i get the feeling that Skankya is going to use B's books and such against her...like not a good influence on E's kids or something stupid like that.

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 24

Edward is amazing!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Jasper!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 17

I really hate Tanya!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

Edward is such a sweetheart!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it! Poor Liam!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

Go Bella!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 6

Amazing chapter!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2016 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

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