Date: 25 Jun 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 3: Caught!
First of all, I'm not a Fifty's fan but I did read Master of the Universe to completion while it was a WIP. I'm a Twilight fanfic reader from here to eternity. :)
But, I started reading this fic and I chuckle (because you've obviously thought about it) when you've made it so easy for me to change the character names in my head while reading to Edward, Bella, Jacob, Carlisle, Tanya, etc. All I can say is that I enjoy Christian (Edward) having to "work for it." ;)
Date: 25 Jun 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 3: Caught!
Christian is coming on a bit too cocky. Jose is a lot slimy though. Ana may just have bad taste.
Thanks for your review, however, if you don't like Christian already, then you won't line him in the rest of it.
Date: 23 Jun 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 2: Boardroom Festivities
This feel very derivative of another story, especially his lines to José a and the boardroom meeting, but I believe it was an Edward/Bella story. Was it one of yours ?
Yes it was Twilight story before it was a Fifty story. I just rewrote it to Fifty as my heart isn't in Twilight anymore.
Date: 19 Jun 2016 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Anastasia Steele
i love ur new story , is she still virgin in it ?
something else i love the way u write maybe u try something like a story a bout 10 years age diffrence between them or ana being a superstar and he get smitten
something like that
Date: 19 Jun 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: Anastasia Steele
Is this a rewrite of a story from when you are on fanfiction? It seems so familiiar.
Yes it is. I had it as a Twilight Fanfiction but took it down because I didn't like the direction it was taking. Then my heart wasn't in Twilight anymore so instead I revised it as a Fifty Shades story, going in another direction.