[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love that Edward isn't trying to deny his feelings or Bella. And I love that Bella is planning on nipping the puppy lust Mike has in the bud.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like that your Bella has her own talents as well as Edward. I just wish she would have told off Mike....grrrr....creeper....
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love that this Bella said outloud what she was thinking about Jessica. And I really love that Edward KNOWS Bella is his mate.
Date: 11 Aug 2016 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love the story. I'm so happy on how you portrayed Bella. One thing that I hated from the twilight books it was how victimized she was shown as. I can't wait to see what you do with is. And Edward, is the best, he is not as morose as in the books. I might love this Edward bether.
Date: 10 Aug 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad she's not hiding it from E, she should tell Charlie though too so he doesn't think E did it.
Date: 09 Aug 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
As always you amaze me . I think Bella will act as She always do . To think Bella may have Peter's power or something Similar.
Date: 09 Aug 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope this Bella tells and shows Charlie about what happened with Jacob.... that will stop any and all thoughts about pairing the mutt with his daughter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
well she took it well I'm guessing that it's because she was already dreaming about it. Can't wait until the next chapter!!
Date: 09 Aug 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 15
All kinds of feels from this chapter. I just love them.
Date: 09 Aug 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
Best chapter EVERRRRR!!!!! :)
Date: 08 Aug 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
This is quite a different Bella, and I really like reading about her reactions to everything, Edward included! She wasn't kidding when she told him she has an open mind, about most things. Too bad Jacob isn't that evolved!
Date: 08 Aug 2016 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hate Jacob. He is such a tool.
Date: 08 Aug 2016 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this Bella. She is much better than the original.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
This was interesting! I wonder how Edward will react if he notice Bella's bruises.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awww!! I love it :')
Date: 03 Aug 2016 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Jeez Jake was creepy. I'm glad Bella has no interest in him.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Sounds like Jacob's already phased
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
Good... I actually like your Bella better than canon Bella. Bella really allowed herself to be manipulated by Jacob. I think that the whole Renesme thing was her way of absolving Jacob of guilt from his actions.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Seems her "feeling" is sensing that Jacob is a wolf and can tell she has been with a vampire! Those feelings of Bella's never steer her wrong. It looks like Bella is close to learning what Edward is. Wonder how she will accept that?
Date: 02 Aug 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was a very nice first date and first kiss! I was a bit surprised that they didn't stop somewhere to eat. I realize he wouldn't, but I'll bet Bella might have been hungry. No big deal, this is a fun story and I'm enjoying it very much!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yey Double Post!!! oooh the Jake thing doesn't sound good. E is so sweet with his words. I like that they are in a more normal relationship with talking and getting to know each other and such. Yes having a slacker on a project makes me nuts. Ugh Jake is such a jerk. She needs to tell Charlie that he put his hands on her, esp with the bruising.
Date: 02 Aug 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
awww such a sweet date
Date: 26 Jul 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can't wait!!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
Like Bella has a backbone and can stand up for herself
Date: 26 Jul 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can you believe that I squealed when I saw that you updated? :) :) I love this super sweet story! :)
Date: 25 Jul 2016 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
A willing shopping companion, Alice must be so pleased! Sounds like they had a successful trip, too! Bella is still noticing things about the Cullens, I see. Wonder when she will put all the clues together and figure out what they are?
Date: 24 Jul 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
Locking this story so far. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yay! So many good things this chapter. Last chapter when Edward was commenting on Rose's horrible thoughts about Bella, my first thought was that her mate had originally been human, so she's a huge hypocrite. I'm glad Carlisle said exactly what I was thinking. Then Bella and Edward going on a date! And I'm so glad Bella sticks up for herself and doesn't continuously put herself down in her mind.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm so intruiged by this whole Bella dreams thing.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wohoooooo!!! A date!!! (: love it!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
I like that the Cullens didn't feel any bloodlust towards Bella !!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
Really like this version so far ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 20 Jul 2016 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
I just love the way Bella handles Jessica and Lauren, exactly what they deserve! Here's hoping Rose doesn't throw a monkey wrench into the proceedings! It will be fun watching Alice and Bella shop and get ready for the big date!
Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
How nice for Alice that Bella wants to go shopping with her, that's sure different from canon! Of course Rosalie hasn't improved her attitude much, I see! Still grumpy and jealous! Very vivid dream about Edward glowing, no wonder Bella wants to know where these dreams are originating!
Date: 20 Jul 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love how she puts J&L in their places. Seeing E like a typical teen is really cute.
Date: 20 Jul 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
Really like that she can play piano and is sure of herself.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
awww nice meet the parents moment. Yea I don't think Newton is going to get a clue anytime soon. LOL
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
nice talk at lunch. Newton and Stanley are perfect morons that deserve each other.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great getting to know you talk. Nice to see E acting a little more like the teen that his is with his excitement level and all.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
LOVE that she told off Mike. What a jerk.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yea when is Rose not snarky
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad she trusts herself and her dreams. aww for excited E
Date: 19 Jul 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
They are too cute together. Yea she needs to put the kabosh on Newton and quickly
Date: 19 Jul 2016 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Like that they have something in common like music and science. Newton is such a wanker.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
LOVING your confident Bella. She was such a pushover/follower in the books.
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
So much fluffy sweetness, I might get a cavity ;)
I love it.
Date: 16 Jul 2016 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hopefully, they will reward themselves for such progress with a session at the piano they both love to play!
Date: 13 Jul 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella has a gift already.. Maybe..
Date: 13 Jul 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
CCnt wait until next chapter
Date: 13 Jul 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Woww... They are so compatible... I love their chemistry :)
Date: 12 Jul 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Her intuition/gift, whatever it is, is trying to tell her about Edward, and what he means to her. That's my take on it anyway!
Date: 12 Jul 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
It's so funny that Bella thinks of cafeteria food, probably about the same as Edward does! I wonder if Mike will have nerve enough to try to approach Bella again?
Date: 11 Jul 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well can't say that I blame her! I wouldn't be able to concentrate either!
Date: 11 Jul 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like that your Bella is able to be direct with mic. I also like that you're not having Edward fight bloodlust and the whole singer thing. Please continue
Date: 10 Jul 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good rant on Newton, Bella has some class about these things, evidently! Too bad she didn't have more time to talk to Edward! Can't wait for after school!
Date: 10 Jul 2016 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
I hope you are still posting this story. I really like it! Your Bella is nicer than the "regular Bella"
Date: 10 Jul 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
I do want more!! You can continue posting!! :)
Date: 10 Jul 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love that Bella likes to play the piano too.. They are totally perfect for each other! :)
Date: 09 Jul 2016 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! I can't wait to catch up! Great job...thanks!
Date: 09 Jul 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for the rest
Date: 09 Jul 2016 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Good old Rosalie, you can always count on her to be the one voting NO! Since I never doubt Alice, I'm sure the whole family will like Bella, and she will like them!
Date: 09 Jul 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait for the biology project
Date: 08 Jul 2016 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Maybe Bella has a similar gift to Alice, except her preminitions come only while she's dreaming. More please :)
Date: 08 Jul 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
I wish Edward would go with his instincts instead of allowing people like Alice and Carlisle to dictate his relationship, but I understand his desire to seek them out since he's out of his element with this.
Date: 08 Jul 2016 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
I suppose it shouldn't be a surprise that Bella has kept her dreams to herself. She is going to be more accepting of what Edward and his family are, because of those feelings, I'm guessing. Loving this story, by the way!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'ts cute how they are getting to know each other! Edward is thrilled to finally have found his mate, after all this time, and Bella just feels she's known him forever! I wonder if Edward will reinforce Bella's brush off of Mike Newton? I'm sure she will have to tell him no, more than once!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Please continue posting
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
I always thought Bella's dreams deserved more attention in the books. I love how happy Edward is acting.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love this...please continue!
Date: 06 Jul 2016 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
Definitely yes! I'm liking your version of Twilight so farr!
Date: 05 Jul 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think you should most definitely post more. I like this because Bella seems to be Edward's equal and Edward is not freaking out about wanting to kill her.
Thanks, Maria.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome I love it.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2016 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow I am really liking this.
Date: 05 Jul 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter, although I kind of wish Alice would butt out and let them go at their own pace. I think Edward should be taking his clues from Bella on the speed of their relationship, and not Alice, afterall, Bella is in the relationship too. I really can't say enough how much more I'm enjoying your Bella vs the original one.
Date: 05 Jul 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
They really are perfect for each other! I really like this version of Bella! It's nice, too, that Edward doesn't want to drain her dry!
Date: 04 Jul 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like your Bella, she has a much better sense of herself. Mousy is never fun to read, but self-assured definitely is!
Date: 04 Jul 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would love more. I like that Bella has a backbone, and that Edward isn't running away from her. I can't stand Jake, so I would like to read some bashing ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2016 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
:) looking forward to reading more
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Existed for a new story! ! Interested to see where it goes !