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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2016 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 44

Wow she will tease him again because in the end it is all good ;)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 44

Naughty teasing E

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 44

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 44

I would love for Edward to tease me like that. Lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 44

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 44

good

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 43

Edward montre qui est le maître.

Je crois qu'ils vont avoir du plaisir.

Baisers.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 43

Naughty E not letting her play 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 43

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 43

They are having so much fun just being in love.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 43

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 43

:) 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 43

Torture indeed

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 43

Sounds like they are going to have some fun. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2016 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 42

Hello naughty bella!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 42

Love this Bella.  Can't wait till see what she has planned. 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 42

Oh le gredin!

Edward va souffrir, Bella est difficile avec lui ...

Baisers

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 42

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 42

Get him B

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 42

Bad indeed

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 42

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 42

What a way to be punished lol

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2016 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 41

I like this chapter.

Bella is a big she-wolf Alpha !

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 41

Bella handled it better than I thought.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 41

Glad Bella is prioritizing what's important.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 41

I have missed the playfulness between them.  This was cute!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 41

good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 41

Love this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 41

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 41

Bella is fare

Reviewer: Roxie619 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2016 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 40

Please please update

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 40

OMG!!! I AM DYING FOR MORE!!!! :D

Reviewer: SilverNova3082 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 40

Will you update?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2016 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 40

Can't say I blame Peter for going after Jared.

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 40

Excellent

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2016 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 40

Even if she thinks no one would bother with her, I'm very glad Bella promised to stay close to Edward's protection Something pretty spooky is going on, with no clues left behind that way!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2016 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it can't wait for more 💕

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2016 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 40

I hope Bella listens to Edward and does not go anywhere by herself and just her and Charlotte. Wonder what Peter's punishment will be. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2016 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2016 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 40

Go Bella,  Go Bella!   The pack has to take the orders of an Alpha regardless if it is a she or a he.   It has to be someone the pack knows. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2016 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 40

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2016 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 40

It has to be someone they know and trust that is taking the alpha females.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2016 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 40

good

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2016 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 39

I love this story 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 39

She is probably who they are looking for.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 39

Bella just won't digest the fact that halbreed or not she is Edward's mate, making her an alpha female. I'm  worried what's happening to the others who have disappeared!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 39

Excellent

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 39

I wonder who is taking the alpha females? I hope Bella will be safe.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 39

hmmm what an interesting twist.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 39

No I was not expecting that. I figured it had to do with Bella being a half bred.  

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 39

I don't  think they care one way or a another .   No female is safe especially  an alpha  female.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 39

Not usually a fan of wolf stories but this one is interesting

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 39

Bella is wrong they will want her to.  They want to build there own pack the one that are taking them

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 39

Keep telling yourself that Bella.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 39

hmmm???

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 39

:)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 39

Well I have to give another,WELL DAMN......

Great update

 

 

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 38

Wow. I rarely read stories with short chapters, BUT I am totally addicted to this story. It may have short chaps but it isn't rushed or lacking in any way. Excited to see where you go with this adventure and I'm hanging on tight. 

Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 38

*suggestion than an order...

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 38

Thus Edward is Alfa of all Alfa!

Bella did well to join him, she has to support her companion.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 38

I thought he was the leader.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 38

Bella's man is more than what she thought.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 38

I'm confused. I thought she knew he was the Alpha?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 38

Well, that was pretty impressive! I wonder why Edward didn't tell Bella hewas the head alpha?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 38

I wouldn't have stayed in the car either

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 38

So,not only is Edward Alpha if his pack but he is Alpha of all Alphas. Why are some of the females not there?  Are they upset because of  Bella being the new Alpha female?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 38

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 38

:)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 37

Bella is starting to accept her role as Alpha female if not only to protect Charlotte.  Glad they have each other.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2016 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 37

Bella is amazing she can handle things

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 37

Bella is getting used to her alpha power.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 37

Jared is going to be trouble! I know he isn't going to take what Bella said seriously. Edward will have to do something.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 37

Glad Bella is doing her own thing and not just leaning on E to do stuf.  Like that she's embracing her role.  I think they need to keep an eye on Jared too.  Sounds like he's going to try something soon.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 37

How nice that Edward trusted his mate to have handled the problem. Somewhat better than Peter did, for sure.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 37

:)

Reviewer: Roxie619 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 37

I love your story I am from South Africa so when you post I get it in the morning it makes my day 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 37

good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 37

Very good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 36

Bella has big balls and she is very protective of the ones she cares about

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 36

Jared most likely will ve severely punished! 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 36

I really liked Bella standing up to Jared and making him back down! I'm sure there will be more objections to her as well as Charlotte. What part of finding your mate don't these wolves understand? It's not like Edward or Peter had a choice!

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 36

Awesome.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 36

How sad.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 36

Go Bella! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 36

Protecting Charlotte maybe just what Bella needs of bring her Alpha Female out and accept her.position. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 36

Well damn...

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 36

Yea Jared really is going to regret messing with the ladies 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 36

good

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 35

Bella est heureux d'Avoir un ami.

Merci pour ce bon chapitre.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 35

Bella now has a girlfriend!  She really needed someone to confide in.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 35

Glad she has Charlotte on her side at least

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