Date: 12 Oct 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 35
I am.glad that they both have each other
Date: 12 Oct 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 35
From the few things Bella has shared, her life has been a pretty lonely and friendless one. It really is nice that Charlotte is here to be a friend now!
Date: 12 Oct 2016 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 35
Bella needs Charlotte almost as much as Peter well maybe not lol
Date: 12 Oct 2016 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 34
Charlotte is not one to take shit.
Date: 11 Oct 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 34
Makes me feel kind of bad for Charlotte, being angry and overwhelmed all at once! What happened to her isn't something you hear about every day!
Date: 11 Oct 2016 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 11 Oct 2016 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 34
Hope Charlotte takes some time to let it sink in and all before she lets him off the hook
Date: 11 Oct 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 10 Oct 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella is so caring she is being the perfect Alpha female.
Date: 10 Oct 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 33
So Bella is about to get a look at what goes on between packs. Probably a good idea since she is alpha female of hers. It will ease her mind to see how Charlotte is doing, also.
Date: 10 Oct 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 33
I wonder what she'll walk into
Date: 10 Oct 2016 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 33
Glad she is going with Edward and supporting him.
Date: 10 Oct 2016 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 33
Glad she is interested in learning about the pack despite how she was treated her whole life. I agree with her wanting to check on Charlotte too.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 33
This story makes me smile!!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 32
So at least Charlotte isn't angry enough to reject Peter. Sounds like they will be able to work out the details.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 31
That's just the sign of a mate who really cares for you, Bella!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 30
Well of course she would be there to help her friend through this ordeal!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 29
Life looks to be getting some better, for Bella as well as Peter.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 28
That really was a pretty nice way for them to seal the deal, especially her marking him before all the pack.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 27
I wonder if he carries through on his threat?
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
Seems as if Edward is a wise pack leader, even with his own mate.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
After all, she can just let her savings accumulate interest so she'll still have money of her own. Frankly, I think it's a good idea for her to quit working in a bar, too, too many potential problems.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
I guess she hasn't thought about the differences in the way Edward rules the pack, compared to the way his father did.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
I was right, Bella did a number on Irina. Now maybe she'll have some respect for the alpha female!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
This uoght t be fun, because I'm pretty sure Bella can take Irina and whip her ass!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
So the lust isn't only on Charlottes side!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
I get the notion that Bella might as well save her braeth with Charlotte.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
This ought to be interesting, Peter watching out for his leader's mate, as well as the other girl there.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh dear, she works in a bar, with drunken men all around! Edward isn't going to like that very much.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yes indeed, things are definitely looking up for Bella's happiness!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad he told her the truth, maybe it will help with her feelings of isolation.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
I kind of thought Bella could stand up for herself, so wisely, Edward listened to Jasper's advice.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
So, this wasn't just a random thing with him, he's always wanted her! I wonder if he'll ever tell her?
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
Seems to be starting out okay. Maybe it won't be as bad as she fears?
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
He must have know exactly what to say to calm her fears!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
I have to wonder if this girl has ever heard the phrase, cut off your nose to spite your face?
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
If he changed her in her sleep, he really must have alpha powers!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think a public diaplay wasn't anything Edward wanted, either. It worked out well that their mating was away from prying eyes.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
I fail to understand why she keeps fighting this, because I get the feeling it's what will make her happy!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
As I was saying, resistance it futile!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Pretty sure it would be useless to resist both him and the spirits!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
She might as well fight being female, for all the good it will do her!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have a feeling all this running isn't going to do the poor thing any good!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
I figured it wouldn't be long before he tracked her down. Should be an interesting conversation!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
Okay, if she is his chosen mate, why let her run from him?
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
It sucks to be a halbreed, I see. Don't much blame her for her attitude, either.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 32
Liking this story can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 32
Looks like bella needs to do some claiming too!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 32
Fantastic
Date: 06 Oct 2016 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 06 Oct 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
Glad Charlotte is pissed at him and let him know it
Date: 06 Oct 2016 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 32
I love that Charlotte is giving Peter hell. They could be a fun and dynamic couple. I can definitely is sparks flying with them.
Date: 06 Oct 2016 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 32
Charlotte is not taking this easy but she will love this life
Date: 06 Oct 2016 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 32
I love your story it's awesome
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2016 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 31
I'm glad she is getting more comfortable with her role as Alpha female.
Date: 05 Oct 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 31
Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 05 Oct 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
She is so worried about her friend and Edward is worried about her
Date: 05 Oct 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 31
Glad Charlotte made it through her transformation. I don't blame her for being pissed at Peter, I would be too. He did not do a very good job at explaining
Date: 05 Oct 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
Well done I love it
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 31
I'm curious. Since they mated in wolf form would she have a litter or a baby if she got pregnant?
Date: 05 Oct 2016 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 05 Oct 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 31
Glad he is being considerate of her feelings and staying there the night. Charlotte should be pissed at Peter for taking her choice away from her.
Date: 04 Oct 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 30
She should be mad at both of them for just taking what they wanted. Cruel to Charlotte if you ask me. At least B was born into it.....although not really staying by her own choice.
Date: 03 Oct 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 30
I'm glad Edward didn't stop Bella from helping. I don't think the guys handled this right at all. Just how many changes does she have to go through?
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 03 Oct 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
I am glad that Bella is there for Charlotte.
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 30
Someone may have wanted to explain this to Charlotte before the change.
Date: 03 Oct 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 30
Awesome I love it
Date: 03 Oct 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 30
How will she react to Peter after the change?
Date: 03 Oct 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 30
Bella is a great friend! I'm glad she finally came around with edward
Date: 03 Oct 2016 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
So much pain Bella's heart is breaking.
Date: 02 Oct 2016 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Date: 01 Oct 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow I love it.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awe, she trusts him.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 29
Can understand her reluctance. So much changing so fast. And esp for Charlotte who won't know what hit her all of the sudden
Date: 30 Sep 2016 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
Excited to get another update. It is good they are talking things out. She is trusting him more and more.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
Hi, hope you are feeling better. I am so happy to see this story updating, it is one of my favourites. Thank you for all of the updates over the last couple of days
Date: 30 Sep 2016 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see you back hope all is well or as well as can be for you! Loving the new chapters
Date: 30 Sep 2016 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 29
He is so sweet and she gets it now trust is hard for her to do.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2016 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 28
Glad she finally gave into her wolf and Edward.