[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awhhh poor girl she's really felt like a outcast
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really like this story. I like all your stories. I am getting a little aggravated with how Edward talks to Bella sometimes. The "one" word commands he givers her bothers me. I understand they are shifters and are part wolf, but, they are also civilized human beings that can say whole sentences. Plus, I really don't think he needs to command her to do anything.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Je viens de lire ces premiers chapitres et j'adoré l'histoire.
Bella dans les petits rebelles, elle-loup, il est très bien.
Merci. Bisous.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
That went pretty good. Can't wait to wait to see what the rest of the pack does.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am really enjoying this story. Thanks.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well at least Jasper and Em were nice to her.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Good chapter. I like the dialogue
Date: 22 Jul 2016 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love your story
Date: 22 Jul 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ugh okay so you hooked me on this story but the short chapters are killing me. And seriously do you have the updates set on a timer or something lol. So that I'm up til 2 am (EST) refreshing your profile waiting for a new chapter. I'm kinda spoiled I tend to skip the fics that are considered Drabble because I get too irritated by the short chapters but something about this story caught my attention and now I'm addicted. My husband is less than amused at my grumbling (notice I said 2am yeah he gets up for work in about 5 hours and lil ole me is still up reading, my 4 kids are going to run me ragged in the morning).
Like ken I said I am enjoying the story so please don't take any offense to my late night grumbling. I'm am anxiously awaiting more and it's plauging my brain wondering where the characters are headed and where the other "traditional" characters will come in to play. (Ie jake, jame, Tanya, Victoria the vulture ect since they seem to be fanfic regulars) Okie dokie I'm going to attempt sleep now but I bet with the fresh on my mind I end up dreaming of a hottie Edward shifter yummy
Author's Response:
lol I'm sorry that I am keeping you and your husband up. I'm in Scotland so we are in different time zones. Ugh for kids and lack of sleep. I know what it is like with 3! I thrilled you are enjoying the story. Drabbles work for me because they encourage me to write a little bit everyday which helps with brain fog and fits into my life better hehe xx
Date: 21 Jul 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love your story. This is really good. Can't wait til the next update!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
So glad that she finally has someone on her side.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella needs to feel loved. And Edward can do that for her.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well at least he's finally had a calm conversation with her instead of just taking what he wanted. Here's the rub though, if he knew she was being treated wrongly by pack members AND her own father, why did he allow it to continue?
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
I like her aggressive attitude.
Date: 21 Jul 2016 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
Breakthrough!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;..
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yay, that was so sweet. :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella's a real pain in the ass. Poor Edward. Lol
Can't wait for more! 😊
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh boy.....she is so stubborn....hope more is on the way!
Date: 20 Jul 2016 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow!!! Bella is so Stubborn and anoying!!! She needs to just go with it already!!! lol
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm all smiles, look forward to reading your story as soon as you post.. :D
Date: 20 Jul 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
UUgh? What the heck is wrong with this girl! To be honest she has too many freaking issues! Man do I feel sorry for him!
Date: 20 Jul 2016 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward is being really patience with her. Bella just needs to tell him how she really feels.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Stubborn girl! The female pack members are doing to notice that she hasn't marked him-they may think he is still available...
Date: 20 Jul 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Pushy men are really unattractive. Wonder how long till the world intrudes and Bella's life gets worse like I fear it will.
Date: 20 Jul 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it d84;a039;
Date: 20 Jul 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Sounds good to me!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad he's being understanding.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah, I hope he doesn't claim her in front of the pack, either.
Date: 20 Jul 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for mored84;a039;
Date: 20 Jul 2016 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
wow Such a pushy guy. She really needs some time to process everything.
Date: 20 Jul 2016 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hope B's life gets better, but I'm afraid the catty women and her Dad are going to make her life hell for awhile.
Date: 20 Jul 2016 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Did he some how change her back to her human form? She says in this chapter that he took her against her will. I thought I read that she asked him to touch her, to take her.
Date: 20 Jul 2016 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Finally she is not being so stubborn but have a feeling that her stubbornness is not over.
Date: 20 Jul 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
can't wait to see how he did it
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Very good
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow whats next
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2016 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
And whoop there it is! Hot and Bella is in so much trouble when he catches her. I can't wait to see what happens when they go beck to the pack now that Edward has claimed her.
More soon please!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
He has claimed her in his human forum. I guess now he can claim her in the wolf forum.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
What is with her exposing her neck?
Date: 19 Jul 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Now we are getting some where. Get the girlatest horny and she is good to go. HaHa.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Will she ever learn? She is so stubborn. Glad Edward is understanding. She may just push to far and end up with him spanking her. Lol
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
Run Bella, run!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love this story
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wonder why he didn't ask about her not marking him. Bet the other females will and her father.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder if he is hurt that she didn't mark him. Wonder what the bitches in the pack will think when they see he isn't marked...Perhaps Bella will mark him if/when she gets jealous...
Date: 19 Jul 2016 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
wondering hw long it will take for b to give in
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think that she is going to be happy she consented. But I also think that playing hard to get just cemented for Edward that she is perfect for him.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
Resistance is futile...Yes, I'm quoting Star Trek.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hope she gives him hell for pushing her. Too bad her willpower wasn't strong enough. Wonder if her father is going to give her crap still too for running.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Guess no one ever told him no means no. Ah well.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
What will Bella do next? ;)
Date: 19 Jul 2016 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
Awww...well, if that isn't love! ;)
Date: 19 Jul 2016 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Take control, alpha!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm intrigued!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is great!! :)
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hmmmm...interesting! ;)
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
Very well written. It's nice and refreshing twist of our beloved characters. I love how she is trying to resist his advances.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh Poor Bella!! There is no since fighting it!! He will win, he is the Alpha!! lol
Date: 18 Jul 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! !!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
That was fantastic
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Stubborn Bella at her finiest
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start I love it
Date: 18 Jul 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sounds like he's not going to respect her much at all. Wonder how long till her father pipes into the conversating.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
She is fooling herself. Hope Edward realizes that at least part of her wants him.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad she not just letting him have his way just because he said so. Men are so stupid sometimes.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well, she's definitely making him work for it!
Date: 18 Jul 2016 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love werewolf stories and don't like vampires very much.
Therefore, I am glad to find an Edward that is a wolf for a change.
The story seems very interesting and well written so I am looking forward to read more.
Date: 18 Jul 2016 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
At first I wasn`t sure if I shoul read this story, but then decided to give it a try. Now I`m happy I did read it. Thank you! Poor Edward you should try harder. He-he. Again, thank you! Will be waiting for an update!
Date: 18 Jul 2016 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
She is definitely not making this easy on him. She may get a spanking when he finally catches her. LOL
Date: 18 Jul 2016 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love her strength