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Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loving this! Can't wait for more! 😊 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm hoping for an EPOV.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

Maybe he's just letting her think that he's letting her leave?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice twist and a refreshing change.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2016 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

This is going in a great direction looking forward to more

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

I doubt if she'll really want to deny him once they talk.

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm hooked

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is very good and you certainly have my attention with this story!   Can't wait for more 

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

Lovethis story 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hope b doesn't get anymore hurt than she already is.  But sadly,  I think she will,  esp by the pack females and prob her do for running. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

This sounds very interesting.  Can't wait to see what you do with this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

So comma Edward has been watching her. I am assuming that he knows that she is a half-breed.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

So Edward is a wolf in this story, not a vampire.  Interesting 

 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

can't wait for the talk

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow!!! This is going to be interesting!! lol More Please!!!

Reviewer: NyxKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loving this story. More soon please!

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am loving your story. I love even more how often you have posted. Keep it up. 😍

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well he has a good reasons but I understand her reluctance as well . oesn't sound like her dad has been much help making her life any easier either.

Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great second chapter! I am officially hooked!  Can't wait for more! Thank u for second update!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh shyt... You go girl!!! She told him no and them ran... Should offer up some good foreplay haha. We already k ow she won't be down for public, in front of everyone, sex amongst other things. She's too funny... Can't wait for next ui
Update!!!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

I wonder how far she'll get.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

good

Reviewer: robmor Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looks interesting, I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.  Can't wait to see where you go with it.  Kinda sucks that E is gonna make her even more hated and more of an outcast.

Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2016 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love all your stories! This one seems really exciting! Its different and I can't wait for more. I hope you can find the time two write all 3 I would love for tttb to be finished. I know you will get there.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2016 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to reading more of this 

Reviewer: Icrodriguez7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting!!!

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

So cool! I've been trying to follow this on face book but was afraid I was missing some so I am so glad you're putting it here. (De Perry/2muchtrouble)

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cool sounds good 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

good start

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