For a while, it looked as though things were getting better between Bella and Edward. She does need to tell him about her parents and he needs to face facts that Alice and Angela are doing everything they can to sabotage Bella! Here comes the baby now, due to all this stress. I hope Edward wakes up. I am ecstatic that Bella told him a bit of what has been going on, but did he believe her?  We'll see. Sorry for your family issues, and of course I understand that they come first!

Edward is an idiot. Bella is ridiculous. Alice, Angela, Jasper, Charlie, and the professor apparently have no life, and spend all day plotting 

I think Bella should tell Edward about how her parents are treating her. Also Alice invited her parents to upset her and to be cruel. Angela is just as bad as Alice. Jasper is just a wimp. He needs a good face slapping too. Edward and Bella should also talk about what happened between them. I know they don't because of chapter 1 tho.

First - no worries.  Health and your well beings is paramount so take care of you first!!!

Second - OMG!!! Why is it no one else but the readers and Bella can see what the hell is going on?? Alice & Angela have completely snowed Esme, Jasper and everyone else...I absolutely cannot stand it! I can feel my blood pressure rise whenever I have to witness the utter BS they are pulling and Edward is completely clueless.  For a smart man, he has zero common sense.  If I were him, especially him being a lawyer, he needs to pay attention to the details which he isn't.  Bella needs to stop protecting Edward and her parents and everyone else. She has to look out for herself and her baby.  Grow a backbone Bella!!! 

I am concerned that Bella's baby is on the small side.  Makes the readers think that Uley and maybe some of those frat boys may have spiked Bella's drink so maybe the baby isn't Edwards. I am 100% convinced it is his so an explanation on the baby's size will need to be addressed.  Bella is small so maybe she just has small babies.

And lastly, I'm ready to go batshit crazy on Bella's father. Who the hell does he think he is to ambush Bella like that and make decisions on what she should do regarding her baby after he's totally cut her off and has people spying on her? Has he forgotten that the baby has a father who appears to be invested in the baby?

Too much confusion, lack of communication and lies....I cannot wait for the shit to hit the fan and the truth finally comes out.  I think that wil be the pinacle and then how will Edward dig himself out of the hole from missing out on his son's first couple of years.

Good luck!!

Oh fuck

I really want to smack him (Edward) grow the fuck up & look at everything you dickhead. Wake up, I know he is only see his side & doesn't know everything thats going on, but think man your suppose to be a lawyer.  Alice is now being co-operative when only the other day she was calling her a skank & say she was no good think buddy & look into somethings, use your brain that you where given.

Oh please please please by the end of this story please let Jessica bitch slap Alice pleeeasse

Alice lingers over all the activity between Edward and Bella; it taints all the progress they make.
The doctors are baffled by this girl's story because pieces are missing.
Will Edward be accused of leaving the bruises on Bella's body? Will Professor Uley ever be held accountable for his actions against Bella?
Lauren and Jessica are amazing friends.

You are trying to plant thoughts in my head that way Professor Uley really did rape Bella and the babe could be his.
Will Bella's memories of the night she was drugged every fully return?

Edward never gets the card, Alice is orchestrating all this nonsense about Edward, and professor Uley is in on this mind game along with Alice.

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Right now all I'm thinking about is what my HEA would be for this.

I would like to see Bella healthy, happy, confident & independent.

I just want to see both A's get what they deserve. The sad thing is, family almost always forgives.

I'd like to know what god Bella's parents subscribe to? 

That's why I don't believe anymore. I was tired of the two-faced hypocrits, spouting about god.

He just needs to see how horrible aluce & angela are! I can't even imagine the fall out when he realizes the baby is his.

Boy I never thought I would say this, but Edward is rather stupid isn't he.  How can he not see that Alice hates Bella, and why is he taking her side knowing this. I really dislike this Edward, and I hope when he fines out the truth of the the matter, Bella, tells him to fuck off. I wish he could take off them rose colored glasses and see that Jessica and Lauren is protecting her from Alice and her cronies, that Alice is the real problem here. I mean he's said it himself, I wish Emment and Rose was in the story, because I think he would be kicking Edwards ass.  You mentioned Rose in one of the first chapters, did Bella never get to meet her. Please get her some help soon.

Can't wait for Friday's update.

Poor Bella. Edward is doing what he can, he just know it all. ANd Alice should be kicked hard once so that she understood that you don`t always get what you want. Esme and Carlisle were great, they did everything right. They didn`t judge Bella withut knowing the whole situation. I think that somehow Alice, Angela and Sam made it so Bellla was fired and thrown out of college.

Miscommunication is the mother of all problems here, Bella needs to grow a backbone sturdier and hardest like diamond. I hate Charlie more than anything in this world. Alice is still a grade A bitch as Always, but I hope kharma take care of her like there's no tomorrow. 

Please give us 4 chapters this week

What is Angela's game? I think Alice caused all this trouble for Bella. I can't think of any character with less redeeming qualities than your Alice. It is painful reading her and irritating to see Edward buying all her lies. I keep reading because we have a lot of past  history, me and you guys, and I have read a LOT of your stories. This Alice makes me want to commit murder.

I loved how Esme handled everything. I was not sure about Carlisle until he told Edward that he would not take any money from her. I hate Alice more and more. I am beginning to question Edward's intelligence and common sense at this point. I do hope that Edward, Esme, and Carlisle will learn the truth about everything that has happened.

OMG Alice is really a piece of work.  I don't dislike Edward.  I think that there are too many conspiring against Bella poisoning his thoughts.  Her sperm and egg donors need to be run over by a tank....along with Uley, James (who I think is in on it), Angela.   She's puttin on a show along with Alice I bet

This story makes me feel so many emotions, mainly anger and sadness at her situation. This isn't my first time reading a fic from you but this first that makes me want to cry. I have a question are you alluding that Bella was drugged and raped? And when is that despicable Alice going to get hers? Oh, I still love this story, it's really different from anything I've read before. I look forward to updates.

That was a full chapter 

I love this story and I love how your guys write but I have to say, I find it difficult to understand how Edward is so blind to Alice's ways. It seems Esme is the only one who's not beguiled by Alice. 

Angela is deluded. Is she that insecure and desperate? Why is Alice so bent on getting Edward and Angela together? There seems to be some SERIOUS issues going on and the clueless and innocent ones are Edward & Bella.

I cannot wait for the shit to hit the fan. 3-4 more weeks? Don't know if my heart can take it.

Can I put a choke hold on Alice? She's horrible. My heart hurts for Bella. I really hope she talks to someone about her nightmares and what they mean.

Sherry

Wow I just read all the chapters how is no seeing that Alice is playing the devil and Angela is her side kick but damn she even turned Jasper too thus is all kinds of wrong and the one getting hurt is Bella how far will they take this scam 

Edward is aFUCKING ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!!! ALICE IS FUCKING BITCH!!!!!!!!!!! Bella is FUCKING PATHETIC!!!!!!!!!!! This story makes every charachter IGNORANT ASSHOLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm starting to wonder if maybe Bella was rape and this child is from the rape....but the title of the story makes me think this child is edwards. However maybe 18 months after he finds out about the rape and accepts Ethan as his out of love? But by the banner I think Edward sees Ethan 18 months later and Ethan looks like him so he says "I don't understand". I hate alice and I don't think she gave the money to edward.

I really hope she wasn't raped!

Her parents are assholes!!!! 

Edward and Bella both sucks at communication.  I get the feeling that both drs suspect that she might have been raped. Why do they not speak to her about their concerns? 

Oh poor 😢 them I hate Alice 😤😤

Thanks!

Bella was obviously roofied possibly raped definitely sexually assaulted. And I'm sure Alex has pictures documenting it. We want Alice to burn in hell right next to Charlie and Renee

So many people interfering and miscommunications!!  Angela works for a lab and I can somehow see her messing up any DNA tests that come through especially since her and Alice have done so much plotting to get Edward with Angela.  And Jasper needs to find his balls and stand up to Alice and stop allowing her to brain wash him. I am hanging onto the HEA and trying to be patient. 

i hope all of your tests turn out the way you want them to. I'll keep you in my thoughts and prayers. 

Virginia aka Twi-sessed

I know that you write HEA's but I am havung a difficult time with this story. Which means you are doing a phenomenal job. I HATE this Alice and Angela. It's a nice twist to have Lauren and Jessica be the good guys. I am not sure who the father of Alice's baby is since Jasper does not seem to have a set of balls. Hurry up Friday.

Yeah Alice knew and Edward fucking sucks. He has no dick and no balls.

just can't believe how terrible alice and angela are, how brain washed jasper can be and how everyone is letting alice get away with this . . . b really needs a reprieve from all this crap being dealt her and alice needs an ass kicking

There are so many t
twists I can barely keep up! I love it ;)

I hope you get better, anyway, I hate bitch Alice & Jasper's a pussy not standing up to Alice, Edward is getting on my nerves too, ugh! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I think Alice and Angela planned it, they either hear The girls talking about going there. I think Alice is druging Jasper, or he just don't have a back bone to stand up to her. I bet that her baby isn't even Jaspers, I think she is the little whore just like Angela. Bet that they made a plan to get Edward and Jasper to notice them, and Angela agree to hook ups, hoping it would lead to something else, and it didn't. So now that Alice and Jasper are together and Edward has eyes for someone else their little plan is blowing up. I'll bet she use Ben to make Edward jealous and it didn't work either so she's trying again.   As for Bella not wanting Edward to touch her, I think she can't remember what happen and all men scare her now.

So, Alice and Angela are keeping information  and personal  items from Edward  and Bella.  Bella never got a card from Edward  and vise versa.  I believe  that it will be Angela  that switches the DNA results like she did a few chapters back with an animal  and a human  baby.  I can't  wait until all is revealed  and Edward  has to eat crow for all the lies be believed  that were told by Alice and Angela  about Bella.  I can't  stomach Alice, Angela, Jasper  or even Edward .   Edward  doesn't  deserve  a wonderful  person like Bella .  Don't  get me started  on her shitty father.  Please let her life be better when we get back to the beginning of the story.  

can i bitch slap Alice and jasper please

I truly hate Alice. She is a nasty, conniving, buttinsky bitch and needs to learn a lesson. I don't think I have read a more hateful Alice in all my years of reading Ff. Too bad. I believe in redemption for all, but she is too much!  If the DNA test is skewed, I would believe she found a way to tamper with it. Angela needs to get over Edward, believe what he says, and Jasper is just a weakling who is swayed by his dick. Sorry to spew. I don't know why all these characters have to be so hateful!  Bella needs to get away from her dad, and don't get me started on HIM!  I have a daughter who is much like that. Religious, judgmental, and rigid!!  Yikes.

I hope your medical troubles are eased soon. I wish you all the best in that regard. Sorry, really, that you have to go through this.

I hope all your female issues work out ok  I feel like I am in the Twilight Zone reading this story.  It is like everyone is spying on Bella a day knows all her busy except Edward.  If Alice is due the same time Bella is I am worried about the babies. I think Alice is going to try to switch the babies at birth.  I am worried about what Alice is planning to do to get them to go into labor at the same time. 

It was most certainly a setup. How on Earth does Alice know Bella's due date anyway? Why on Earth is Alice smoking if she's pregnant?   

I'm ready to start a free Jasper campaign 

I hate Alice, and Edward is a douchenozzle! I think He should find it the baby is his and that Angela is a lying cuntpickle and Bella tell him to go fuck himself!!! Not at the end but I think he should have to work his ass of to get back in her good graces as Bella is much too forgiving typically in my eyes

Ugh you are making me hate Jasper along with A and A now.  What an arsehole.  Considering we know the DNA test is going to be messed up, I just know that those women have some sort of way they've sabotaged it.

Thanks!

so much bad shit is happening to her . . . so many assholes surrounding her and can't believe how e is acting without even talking to her. glad she has lauren and jessica

Okay I am obsessed with this story and I hate all the characters. How old are these people? I'm thinking Edward is at least 25 and he obviously doesn't like Alice, Angela, or the professor. So why on earth would he believe them? It just doesn't make sense. They're all crazy. 

I would hope that Edward would see that Bella is being truthful, she can't remember what happen but I don't think she was actually Raped. I think they roughed her up a bit, and took pics making it look like she was into it. Other wise Dr. Kate would have found she was raped and said something, I know Bella was kind of out of it, but I would hope that Jessica and Lauren would help her remember what happen.  As for her measuring small, when I had my last child, I wasn't sure when I got pregnant and when they did the ultra sound. It showed that I wasn't as far along as I was. By their measurements I wouldn't have been pregnant when I took the test and it came back that I was.

Poor Bella. She's been put through a lot. She's been drugged so she'll never know for sure what happened that weekend. I'm kinda dreading her telling Edward because of his reaction.

Sherry

Really confused about the timeline. I am under the impression that Lauren & Jess took her to the Dr within days of that party. If that is correct then Edward is definitely the father