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Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 Jasper

I like this, but it seems to jump around quite a bit...  There isnt any interact between Edward and Bella enough to see if they want to reconnect.  It is just Jasper, Tanya and Rose deciding that they are.  Or so it seems to me.

 

 



Author's Response:

You're right. That comes from my lack of practice when it comes to writing. I'll get better but it will take some time for me to hone my skills. 

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2016 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 Bella

So Bella never knew Edward cheated on her?  She just thinks he disappeared?



Author's Response:

Bella never knew about the incident. Her siblings went on as if nothing happened. Since Edward wasn't there, he couldn't give any explanation to defend himself. He just didn't show up one day.

Reviewer: bellagirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 Rosalie

*groans* What do you bet that they don't know Alice was his cousin and that he WASN'T cheating on Bella..... Tanya, Rosalie and Jasper would have fucked up big time.

Author's Response:

I'm not going to bet. I'm the author. ;-) Jasper, Rosalie, and Tanya love Bella so much that they would protect her from anyone who tries to hurt her.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella

Love it already ! Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I just posted chapter 2.

Reviewer: bonghi Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella

The beginning is very promising, I'm glad she is not a helpless little victim and can't wait to read more. Please, update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Chapter 2 is up.

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