Date: 21 Apr 2017 10:31 PM Title: I Will Never Be Controlled Again!
Love the story but it's kind of weird how every time someone talks it ends in an exclamation mark unless its a equestion
Thanks, glad you liked it,
exclamation marks can denote a point made or a statement of fact,
it's not just to imply someone is shouting, but when they are I embolden for effect.
You would be surprised how many times in a conversation we actually are making a point or stating a fact.
It's not as if they are all sitting around having tea and discussing knitting patterns in this story xx
Alexis (P.s I purposely left out 4 exclamation marks from my answer to your review)
Date: 24 Jan 2017 7:15 PM Title: Best Decision I Ever Made!
Cool that they are all getting to work in fields they want. The movie thing is cool. They'd make a killing as stunt men/women
Thank you, that's a plot bunny if ever there was one lol xx
Date: 20 Jan 2017 3:53 PM Title: Fuck, Fuck, Fuckity, Fuck, Fuck!
Glad Rose got the Denali's to back off. Wonder if Alejandro has another power up his sleeve.
Thanks, Rose's bark is worse than her bite, but she will bite, that's what scares them lol xx
Date: 12 Jan 2017 9:41 PM Title: The Volturi Decide!
Glad Edward is getting the help he needs. I think it would be good to separate him from Carlisle though. Needs to learn to be a real vamp too.
Thanks, I think Aro will make sure of it xx