Date: 22 Jul 2017 3:41 AM Title: AUTHOR'S NOTE
I hate you are having trouble with writing this wonderful story. But you are a great writer and I know you will figure this out. I enjoy reading your stories. I have read multiple ones of yours and have loved them all. Thank you for sharing your talent of writing with us. Hope to hear from you soon on the story.
Date: 10 Jul 2017 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Yay! They're getting married! I'm wondering about Carmen. Is she working for evil or is she just old fashioned and stubborn? I think Bella will naturally get through with her wedding night without too much trouble. Who wouldn't want to mate with Edward? Thanks for everything you so generously give us!
Date: 02 Jul 2017 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
Very nice chapter. Edward tried just a bit too much, but he will recover, I'm sure. So glad they won in court. How vindictive of them, and you, for destroying Carlisle and Esme's car. I hope karma doesn't get them for doing that...
Date: 11 Jun 2017 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Uh oh!! I'm thinking Jacob is there along with others probably. Will Bella or Emmett sense that he's in trouble and come to his aid? I can't wait for the next chapter.
Sorry that real life has been such a bitch for you right now. I hope things are getting better.
Date: 11 Jun 2017 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm sorry you're feeling down. Anniversaries can be a double edged sword. I support you and your writing. I read a lot of your stories and they are always inventive and heart felt.
I wonder who is waiting for Edward. How much more can this boy take. I hope he finds strength and comfort somewhere soon.
Date: 07 May 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
I saw your chapter post, but this one also gave me a message from Stars in my inbox. Some progress...
I do hope they get citrusy...and don't burn or freeze the room down while doing it! Are we in for an epic battle, or will evil go quietly? I think maybe the former. Thanks for the chapter and for your continuing issue for us.
Date: 01 May 2017 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
All desire aside, they need to follow the fae protocol for royalty. No sex until after the mating ceremony.
A little exploration will have to sate their needs in the mean time.
One hundred thousand creatures sounds like a spectacular army. But what does Aro have at his disposal?
Date: 30 Apr 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is just used to being in massive pain. That sucks. Carmen, even though she apologized is still pushing too much in my mind. She is just a little too bossy. Maybe it's that she doesn't ask. She just tells or her tone. I'm not sure which.